ok first of all. . . THAT-WAS-THE-GREATEST-CHAPTER-IVE-EVER-READ! i cant believ how good of a chapter it was and i cant believ how many stories youve written:O tewnty four and ive only read two of them and they were the greatest! youve got really good writing skills and i cant wait to read more.
(P.S. do u like my sign and would read my story? its called:
The Adventures the Marauders. please please read and review :-)
Author's Response: Really? You think so? sweet! thanks! lol! ^_^
(P.S. That is totally sweet! i love it! if i get the chance/time, i will! it might be a while, but i'll do my best! )
Author's Response: thanks. ^_^ they are cute together, arent they. they kinda remind me of harry/ginny, don't you think? i mean, Harry and James are practically identical - the eyes, and Lily and Ginny are both red-heads. see anything there?
Unrealistic ending, at least for the few sentences preceeding it. There was some Spelling/Grammer Check and capitalization needed.
Cute idea, but it could have been worked a bit more.
Love ~K (7/10)
Author's Response: yeah.
i can't spell and i hate grammar!