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Happy HPFFSAD!

Oh my gawd, what for an amazing start! I can hardly write, I want to read on so badly. It was as a very intruging start and arghh, I want to read on, I hardly know what to write.

The describtions were very good and so is your writing style. Your characters seem very interesting and I can’t wait to find out more about Raven!

10/10

Antje

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I can't wait till the 2nd part is out! Until then.

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*sobs* Thank you! I've been waiting for this story for so long!! I can now relive those November competition days when I'd log on every two hours to see if Nox/Talia/Raven/Adieus would turn up ... I was completely hooked!! 

And this prologue was very capturing, it portrays Talia and Raven's friendship well while showing Raven's ambivalence... nicely written.

Can't wait for more! Thankyou so much for giving us this!!

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I can't believe I almost forgot about this, but we moved some of those characters over to Potter's World, so you will still get to see them. Raven/Talia have a complicated friendship and although it won't be quite as dramatic as what happened in the forums, there will be a lot of similar twists. I hope you enjoy the ride :)

Raven, this is an amazing story, we get to see now what the background was and why you all acted how you did.

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You'll get to see the background, and you'll get to see the drama as well. We'll be including what happened on the forums in this fic, but it'll be a little better orchestrated and it will fill in some of the gaps.

This is amazing. It was fun doing the RPG but seeing it all coming together as a story is wonderful... such memories.

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Yes, I personally can't wait to relive these particular memories. Ahh, my Addy...I can't wait till I introduce Raven to him...but this time I get to add more detail and it won't seem so "sudden".

*huge squishy hugs* I can't believe this is finally here!! I'm so happy and so excited!!!

I loved this intro, it was something the we always spoke about, but never got into during the role play, so actually reading about how Talia made her first kill...well, it was really dramatic!! I loved the way she embraced Raven, making her think she wasn't going to do it, but did it anyway :)

I also loved the interation between Raven and Talia. Both were very much in character and I did smile when I read <i> That is sooo Raven!!!..lol...

Over all, I'm all excited and sucked into the drama all over again. I remember sitting back and watching the drama unfold, as if watching a soap opera, and thinking "I'd love to write this into a story!"...Lucky for me, it was already being done!!

Thank you for putting this up for us to re-live and to once again enjoy things as the story unfolds. I can't wait for the next chapter :) 10/10

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LOL Elena, you were an inspiration by your involvement in the RP, that's why we brought you on board. One of the best choices I made. Raven is so like me sometimes, it's a joy to write her...and Talia and Rhueben are my 2 favorite characters to have her interact with, even though I <i>love</i> Adeius the most (though I am sure that's to be expected). 

Although, I personally do hope this won't be so much of a soap opera this time around as a damn good story.

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