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That was awesome and so cute I love it it is adorable

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Thank you. :]

Oh! That's so sweet! I've got warm fuzzies now. Thanks for writing this!

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Thank you. And er, you're welcome. :p

lovely!

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Thank you. :]

that was sad but happy at the same time 
thank you
write more
please
10/10

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Thank yooou. :] But this is a one-shot, sorry.

This was a really, really sweet story. It was very moving, and it's definitely going into my favorites.

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Well, thank you very much. :]

I loved it! Ron and Mr. Weasley were written perfectly. The Qudditch player was great, too. 10/10

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Thank you, it's always good to hear that I've kept two of my favorite characters canon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :]

I think that this is very well-written and a very good idea.  You have a good writing style.

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Aww, thank you. You don't know how much that means, to be told that I have a good writing style. Thank you for taking the time to read and review! :]

i should mention to u that Clive Davis is a music producer behind such people as the American idols

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Okay, well I wasn't aware of that. It was just a Quidditchy-sounding name that a friend came up with. I should mention to <i>you</i> that reviews are to tell the author what you thought of the story.

this is so amazing, i was already crying at the end! :)
brilliant story.

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Aww, sorry I made you cry, but thanks for reviewing!

sorta sad but sweet too

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Glad you thought so, thanks for reviewing!

I love it! Surprisingly enough, stories when people die don't bring tears to my eyes as stories like these do!

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Aww, I'm sorry to bring tears to your eyes, but I'm glad you loved it. Thank you for taking the time to review :].

Absolutely adorable. I enjoyed it very much, and the ending was simply.. perfect. [: Great work!

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Thank you :]. I'm not sure about perfect, but the praise is appreciated :P.

Hey Heather! 

Loved it, it was so incredibly sweet :)  So I thought I'd give you one of my infamous mile long, ramblings AKA reviews :p so here goes nothing 

1)	Organization & Spacing: Ok so this is very well organized, you never forgot to space in and out, so you can read it clearly so that gives you a (2/2)


2)	 Paragraphs & Pacing: Your paragraphs are fine, a little short but fine. It was a little rushed though, maybe because it's so short, but not as much as to make me take a mark off (2/2)


3)	Length: Short, really short, if you just add a couple of lines here and there it would get rid of any rushed feeling in there :p (0/1)


4)	   Grammar & Spelling: Perfect, now thatâ€™s just shocking o_0 (2/2)


5)	) Banner & Summary: You have a very cute little summary here, but your banner has disappeared off the face of the earth, I know I saw it on here before so I'm not going to take any marks off :p  try re-hosting it :) (2/2)


So your rating is *drum roll please*  9/10 ! 

Generally, I loved this fic, it was so warm and fluffy, what Arthur did was so cute, typical Arthur Weasley. You ought to write more fluff it's just so cute :D it really becomes you Heather :p

Cheers, 
Magic

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Thanks! :]

I couldn't believe that the guy wouldn't give him the autograph, but i loved the ending when his father gave up what he needed, for what his kid wanted. This was wonderful

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Haha, well some people let fame get to their head, and that's the sad truth. And I'm glad that you loved the ending, I tried to capture Ron and Mr. Weasley. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Awww that was sooo cute!!! Lovely, Mr. Weasley's soo nice!! I loved it! Great job.

:)

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Yes, Mr. Weasley is so nice. :D. Thanks for the review!

Aww..that was so cute.  I love it!  Awesome job Heather. :)

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Thank you, Jennifer =]. I'm glad you love it!

Oh, that's so sweet! I'm almost speachless. What a great ending, and...wow. The one piece of CC would be that they said 'Diagon Alley' when they stepped into the fire, but they ended up at the Leaky Cauldron. Anyhow, amazing, and I don't know what else to say. 10/10, and it's going on my favorites! Keep it up!!!

~*~KeNzIe~*~

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Thank you :). Well see, I could NOT figure out where in Diagon Alley they would end up (since our one example of that was in CS, and Harry ended up in Knockturn Alley,) so I had them go to the Leaky Cauldron, since it's the entrance to Diagon Alley, you know? Anyway, thank you so much for the review, dear :D.

10/10, that was adorable! I loved it, and that was really good for within an hour.

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Thank you, dear.

100/10.  That was sooo moving!!  Wow...great job!

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Thank you, hon. Glad you thought so...it was written in about an hour :P.

Wonderfully heartwarming. Excellent job!

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Thank you :). Glad you liked it!

That's just the sweetest little thing ever.

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I'm glad you thought so. Thanks for the review :)!!

awww...I almost wanted to cry. It was an awesome story and I thought it was so sweet that Mr. Weasley would do something like that for Ron.

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Aw,  thank you, dear. I loved the concept of the story, and I'm happy that it's being taken well! Thank you for the review :).

Yeah, it was short but you know what; I absolutely adored it. It left a warm fuzzy feeling in my stomach and well; I loved it. It made me smile and it made me feel happy. :) As I haven't really had a good day; thank you :)

First of all, sorry for taking so long to read it. I completely missed it and it was only when i looked to see if you had updated your other story that I noticed this [and of course i went to read it straight away ^-^]

But in case you hadn't guessed; I loved the cuteness of it, the way it provoked emotions. It's quite an original idea and I have never read a story centered around Arthur and Ron before. 

You had Ron in character well; I can see him being like that - being in awe of the Quidditch player, dodging his mothers hugs etc... and the way realisation hit him was wonderful. I liked the way it ended, nice and simple...

And Arthur, isn't he wonderful? the way he gave up his new cloak to make his son happy was adorable :) It's just like a member of the Weasley family to do that though - give up their own comfort for someone else. I could really imagine them doing that.

<i> Ronâ€™s mouth dropped. Heâ€™d been tricked!! Immediately, he cast the picture onto his bed and stormed out of his bedroom, heading for the back garden. Once heâ€™d gotten to the door, he saw his father bent over in the garden, pulling a gnome out of the soft ground. He was wearing his old, tattered cloak. </i> - I really love that paragraph. It was a wonderful way to end this :) I just wanted to go 'Awww...'

Well lovely, lovely, lovely. I was smiling like mad as I read it :) :) And if you wrote this within an hour, I'm jealous! I wish i could write like this in an hour!

So 10/10 [as if i would give you anything different especially not for a story so warm and adorable as this] Bye :)

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Yes, I actually wanted it to be short, though. I felt that it was too simple of a plot to add a lot to it. SO I kept it short and sweet :). And I'm sorry abotu your mad day. *huggles to the max*

No, no. It's completely fine. I haven't gotten around to your story yet, either. And that update should be tonight or tomorrow. It just needs about 500 or so more words and a few touch ups here and there :).

Yeah, there was a story somewhat similar to this in a Chicken Soup for the Soul book that I was reading...and this plot developed. I'm like, "OH MY GOSH! Ron and Arthur! It makes SO much sense!"

Haha, I hope I have my favorite character in character! I worked somewhat hard to make sure he was...I changed those parts with him a few times :).

Oh, I know. That part of the story makes me want to cry. People sometimes forget how sweet and sacrificing the Weasleys are for each other. 

I'm glad you liked the ending. I wasn't sure about it...it seemed to sudden, like it didn't have a real ending, to me :).

Thank you, thank you, thank you. And I'm always happy to make someone smile!

Yes, I wrote this within an hour or maybe two. But the whole time I was talking to LMW, bouncing ideas off her and being unsure. So she gets a lot of credit :). Anyway, thank you dear! I'll get to your story tonight *hopefully* Keep an eye out for 'An Ill Fated Gamble' as well. It's coming soon! :D.

Aw... that's so cute! I really liked it. Great story. :D

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Aww, thank you, hon :). I had fun writing it...in an hour :P.

Oh that was so sweet of Arthur to do that for Ron!  Now he doesn't have a new cloak though.  Very cute story, I love it!  Great job :) -Allison

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Hehe, that was the point :). I had fun writing it...glad you liked it. Thanks for the review, hon! Bye.

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