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That was really good, I like the way you wrote it a lot...gave me goosebumps :)
hehe You left me a lovely review so I had to come and see some of your work! Also wanted to let you know that my response to your review got cut short for some reason, half of its gone :( 
Anyways, great one shot! 
xx

Author Response

*smiles* thanks, I think I have some better stuff here now, but that was my first posted fic, and it is very near to my heart... so I am glad you liked it :)

tis ok bout the review,  Ill go read your response right now :)

Hi. I like it. U need to pit more stuffed to this story.  I hope that u will do more storys from  thos webs. 10-10

Author Response

thankies. You really think I should continue it? Well, I guess I could always go off of Luna's letter...hmmm I'll think about it, that could work well. Thanks fo the awesome review!

This was wonderful for your first story on HPFF. But, of course, it could do with alittle fixing up, but hey! No story is perfect! Lol. Thank you so much for reading all my stories. I rather enjoyed reading them. They made me laugh. Lol. And due to your nice review I thought I owed you a visit. This was very good and I enjoyed every bit of it. I like how you brought up Harry's courage. It was wonderful and very well writtten. 

Welcome to HPFF and I hope to read more of your writings soon. Stop by any time.

Love from Drue
xoxoxo

9/10

Author Response

thx :) yeah, this is my first story but i wrote a draco pansy one i wanna post as soon as the "stupid house elves" r back from vacation, i am gonna submit it.

thx for the review... they make me very happy, and yea, i noticed it had a couple of spelling errors that werent my fault, that i need to go edit, because the site where i got the actual LYRICS, screwed them up....

anyways, thx :)
xoxoxoxox LUNA

I was pleasantly surprised by this fic! I don't know the song well, but the lyrics seemed to fit the fic and I liked how you told everything that happened in the end. I also like the "the Girl who survived" name-it connects Ginny and Harry more than ever. Thank you once again for your wonderful review-it really means a lot to me and tell me the progress you are making on your sequel, if you still want to do it!
Thanks again,
-Anony_Mouse, :-)

Author Response

ahh... ok, and the sequel is coming ok... i will try to keep you posted! thx for your review, it means a lot when people review, hopefull i ill be getting more reads whe nfollow the butterflies at TDA finishes my banner :)  ~Luna thx again!

Wow. I liked it.intresting...

Lils

9/10

Author Response

thx for reading it, it was my first to be put on here, i really liked a lot of our things. Thx for the review, they make me soooo happy.

i amaze myself with my wirting abilities!

Author Response

yes i do

The song went perfectly with your story...Us song-fic writers have to stick together. I thought this was really emotional and sweet. I like the POV (whatever it might be) or maybe its your style of writing- anyway it was a very very well written piece! I haven't really seen much like it, and I love it!! Awesome job!! Sorry my review isn't near as long as yours, but I usually don't write terribly long reviews, but I love to get them so I'm trying to review more...Ok you don't want to hear my endless ravings- Definently 10/10!! Great Job!!

Author Response

thank you so much, i saw this song and immediately thought HARRY POTTER SONGFIC TIME!!!!! your stories are really great, and of course, we DO have to stick together!

wow.sooo goood. but what happened to luna?

Author Response

i sort of thought that luna left her friends to learn more about the mother that left her when she was young, you know, how JKR says she died. I always thought there was something a little mysterious about MRS. Lovegood, and I think Luna would want to know more about her mother. I hope that answers and tank you for the review.... they make me happy!

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