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great job

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Good, Remus and Lily weren't meant for each other anyway. That's almost as bad as a Lily and Snape or Harry and Hermione story... srry, but I can't handle those.

~C.J.~

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i agree those pairings suck! im glad you liked it

~*TRINA*~

Hi, it's me! Yes, I know you're probably thinking, is she ever off this site and will she ever stop talking to me! But I was wondering how can you write a good Lily/James story. I want to try to write a variety of stories and I don't know really how to write a Lily/james story. Anything will help! Thanks!

~Cassie

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i agree that writing a variety of stories is a good idea thats what i try to do but i can't tell you how to write a good james/lily story you just have to do it yourself. i think that the best way to do it is to start out wit them hating each other and work your way to them falling in love its a good idea to describe their feelings a lot and make it very intimate and believable

i hope i helped! if you want more help go to the forums to make an account lots of ppl will help you there!

~*TRINA*~

Oh, I love it! This is the first Lily/James story I have read! This one I have a feeling will always be my favourite! Now, I can't wait for the next Lily/James story I read! Since this is my first Lily/James story I think it's great and deserves way beyond a 10/10! I think everyone should think that! *hehe* Can't wait to review your next story! : )

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wow thanks for the great review! i feel honored that this will always be your favorite lol i can't wait to read your next review!

~*TRINA*~

I soo loved that story. please post the new chapters. ASAP!

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thanks im glad you liked it! but since that is a oneshot and im not planning on having a sequel to it, that story is completed and you should read my other stories! :)

~*TRINA*~

So cute and so much fluff! I loved it!

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thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

~*TRINA*~

it seams pretty rushed but it is really cute! :)

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thanks for the review!

~*TRINA*~

I love this story, It's romantic, but still bareable. Perfect,

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i love romantic stories so i'm glad you liked it...this was one of my fave stories that i've written... thanks for the review

~*TRINA*~

thats sooo funny. everything i ever wanted is also a song. by Hawk Nelson... and i'm listening to it at this very moment... wow thats funny. anyway i luved the story it was cute... 10/10

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lol thanks! maybe i should look up that song and make it a song fic but i like it the way it is...thanks for the review!

*~TRINA~*

Its so sweet, although I do feel a bit sorry for Remus.

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lol a lot of people say that!

The story was very good but hard to follow at times. maybe insert breaks in the page when a new section of your fic starts.  Great job though!

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thanks for the suggestions!

HOW CUTE!! ^_^ 
One thing, though: when Lily and James were talking, Lily said, "I was happy to be asked out by another guy than you." It makes it sound like she's using Remus in a way.
And for them to admit that they love each other when they first get together doesn't seem right.
Anyway, good job and 10/10!
GinnyWeasleyPotter

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thank you!

this story is so sweeet! i love itt!

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thanks! this is my favorite story that i have written so far and it hasn't gotten many reviews yet so thank you!

Great story...I felt a bit sorry for Remus but we all know James had got to get Lily in the end or there would't have been Harry Potter and that would never do

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lol i totally agree but haven't you always wanted to know what happened to make them fall in love? all i ever heard was how Lily hated him

aaaaaw, this was sweet! ^_^ One thing, though, Lily doesn't have blue eyes, she has green ones!

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i know i've gotten that from a couple of people lol! i meant to check that but i forgot i'm going to change it!!

Great plot,but Lily has green eyes, not blue.Totally awesome though!!!!!!

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lol sorry i meant to check that but i forgot thanks for catching that!!!

Ah thats so sweet, i cant believe James punched Remus though. By the way, if you need a banner just check out my website on my authors page.

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thanks but i already have someone working on it!

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