“I have too, Black, if you don’t recall, until some unwanted somebody stuck his abnormally large head where it wasn’t wanted or needed and that PIG ruined everything!”
would you, if over Christmas break, you been rudely awoken by four loud, obnoxious boys in your dorm room, that happened to be a mess, looking through your wardrobe? Didn’t think so!
“I’m Lily Evans, and I have a mum, a dad, and a sister who hates my guts. She’s a, what do you call it, oh yeah, muggle.”
.great. .i. .really. .enjoyed. .this. .fanfic. so. .far.
I absoloutly love this story ! I have never read a Marauders fiction, and I'm glad I did. This story rocks! Please keep updating, Love ;; Kat
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that it wasn't an awful experience!! Thanks! I'll update as soon as I have time to write a chapter...
Ahh, the ending wasnt the greatest. The last sentance was weak.
Otherwise it was okay. If your not gonna bother anwsering my reviews im gonna stop reviewing and reading
Lovely chapter! Its magnificent!
But you know, it reminds me of the series called the SisterHood of Travelling Pants. Where four girls meet together and instantly become bffs and they try on these pants that fit all of them and they are not all the same size.
Anyways, great chapter! Off to read the next chapter!
Excellent chapter, nice and short, I like that!
Of course, I'll read the chapters coming up! Chapter 3, Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 I will read soon!
Well, best of luck to you and your writing!!
p.s.- why don't you ever anwser to reviews? People feel insulted if you dont. They feel like it's not worth even reviewing. Oh ya, 10/10 of course
Author's Response: Thank you!! Um, I don't because I hardly ever check these... I did at first, for like my first review ever, but then I stopped... I really should start up again shouldn't I?? Thanks for the feedback... and at some point I will update this story. It's just really hectic right now!
Three sylablles. FAB-U-LOUS!
I loved how you set it up!! Just one part got a bit runned ragged sentance (sentance that has too much info) but boy was this story good! Of course I'll be reading the next chapter! Oh, and I always review!
well, the best of luck to you!
bwahahaha! poor Lily! you should continue this one too!
I like it I shall finish reading latter but for now i must go But keep up the good writting im looking forward to reading this!!! the rest that is~~~
I liked the idea of people passing down such a legend, though it's not fair that anyone who was a 1st year while the girls were in their 2nd-6th year didn't have a chance to be given the cup. I kind of liked it and I want to see how it goes! OX
That was cute!!! Now I finally know who all of those people you introduced us to in the last chapter are! I really like how their personalites are. Especially Dorcas, she'll be fun to read about!!! Pretty please update soon!!!
~Tabby, the Kat
I really liked it. It was written really well, it showed all of their individual personalites and how they might complete eachother. The descriptions were extremely vivid and showed emotion and voice. This story sounds really intresting, can't wait to keep reading it!!!
~Tabby, the Kat