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okay review immediately, like tomorrow or something. this story is really good and i love the interaction between Ron and Hermione, its so cute. you're the first person to perceive their relationship like i do! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! xox bhaslhp

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plz update this stroy is amazing

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ohmygod. so heres a list
1.how could he leave
2. she better not let him go 
3. you Need to update this story
4. this was a horriable place to leave a HUGE cliff hanger!
5.  I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!

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haaa, nothing like ron and a muggle doctor. lol even if it is at mungos :)

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fred&george=life. haaa i love them. and as for hermonie. aww, here comes the sickness. lol

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aww. this was so swwettt. and funny :)

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haaa. i love ron. and how he is going to try and trick her

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im loving this

please keep writting

*hugs*

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AAAH! The cliffhanger was really well-placed. I just wanted to say that this fic. is well-written and very good. I was hooked since the 1st chapter, especially since I love this ship, and ever since then the humor and touching moments have been combined well. I love your characters and the way Ron and Hermione interact. One thing I noticed was that there is a lot of dialogue, which works in this story for me, but some readers pet peeves are when there is not a lot of detail. All in all, great job.

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Hands up who thinks Hermione's gonna give Ron a smack side round the head? *raises hand* Brilliant. I was cackling with laughter, update really soon please!

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that was really good, can't wait to read the rest!

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hey. you need to update soon! i love it!

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Okay, you so have to update!  I love Hermione in this, and this story is just amazing!  I can't wait until Chapter Six!

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Please update soon!!!
Nice story!!
And By the way...Please DO update!!
Nce job!!!

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nice story!

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OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I cant believe that...this soon...OMG

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Great story!!  When are you going to start writing the next chapter!!! I truly love your work!

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really love this story, very original! cant wait for the next chapter

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OMG that last bit almost made me cry!
Great story! x

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I love it! update please! :-)

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ARGH! A cliffhanger! Oh no...so not good...in fact rather terrible if i think about it...which i shouldn't. PLEASE WRITE MORE! Please? Please? Please? More story. Please!!!
By the way this is very, very good.

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pretty pretty pretty story. No deleting!

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Don't kill ron! Very happy that you havn't. Very happy, happy story happy!

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ack! no!

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KBAV

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too cool. i love ron's discomfort in this! haha!

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KBAV

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