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I want you to know that you really did make me cry. Here I am, twelve years old crying of the death of a book character. The last time I cried like I am now is when I read Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows when I was eight.

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Congratulations, you made me sob. This is the most beautiful and most terrible thing I have ever read, all wrapped up into one short story. I kind of want to drive hours to see the person I have feelings for just so I can hold him. Wahh you're making me so sad right now. Its horrible because things like this actually happen all the time. I can only hope that I have a relationship half as powerful as the one you wrote.

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Aww. So sad. R/Hr are my favourite couple. You actually made me cry. I love this song, my brother went to see Aerosmith live [Jealous]. Despite hating how they were parted, I loved this short story. =]] x

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Oh my god.
I actually cried.
This was amazing.
I think I love you.
10/10

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*sobbing*

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well i hope ur happy
i was in tears =[

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wow
just wow
its so sad! i mite have reviewed b4 but i heard this song on the radio and i had to read it again. i love ron/hermione and the few hpffs ive written have mainly centered around everyone dying after the final battle but it still made me cry even though ive read it before
:'(

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wow.

i cried.

and i dont like R/H either.

im more of a Harry/Hermione person myself.

but anyway, i cried.
good job on writing something you dont believe in also!

and ps...i am in love with that song. like madly in love.

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Very nicely written, great style of writing as an author, capturing the characters very well. Not overly sad, with a good touch of optimism from Ron, and an interesting inclusion of the history of the war, filling us in. I would have thought Ron would be a bit sadder about Harry's death, and the part where Hermione leaves to call the Weasley family was a little off, not quite matching the rest, but overall very nice!
Great length, keep writing other stories please!

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how do you not believe in ron and hermione they are perfect together

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how do you not believe in ron and hermione they are perfect together

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That's SO sad. I don't know how you wrote it.

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i luved it it was so good! i give u a 100 plus!

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You are amazing! This was incredibly sad. It literally made me cry and only one other story has ever made me cry on this site. Excellent job.

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For not believing in Ron/hermoine, that was amazing.  that was awesome. I felt like crying. WOW.

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It was simply and beautifully written. You really made me cry!

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Wow!  How can you not like Ron/Hermione but still write them so well?!  This was great.  You have accomplished both of the challenges.  You made me cry and believe you wrote Ron and Hermione.  Wow this is great! I don't know how to even describe it! Haha.  Well done!  Well done indeed!!!

Erin

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It was very sad and sweet! I can't believe you don't ship r/hr because this was great!

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How in the WORLD could you NOT believe in Romione...and wrote a fic like THAT!!! I'm still crying, and it's really hard for me to see the keyboard!! It was so amazing.I still can't believe you don't like Romione (Not just 'cause this fic was soo amazing..but also 'cause it is the best ship ever XD) 10/10...Amazing...and sad. ~~Emma~~

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i like how you flashed back on the books and how it just brings everything together even though it is a fan fiction really good job i like you writing style and i hope you post more

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God this was great!!! I almost cry, but I love this story! I wish that there would be more this kind of storys. And I absolutle love Aerosmiths and this song! So I love everything here.

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nice story, i love that song!

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me too! love love love! thanks for reading and reviewing :)

so sweet i almost cried (though i was also watching the last episope of friends at the same time)

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thanks loads! and i love the last episode of friends its wicked!!!

great story, it almost made me cry.  even though u dont believe in ron/hermione u couldnt tell when reading the story.

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yay! i wrote convincingly :) thanks for reading and reviewing!

Oh dear, I have tears running down my cheeks!  This was well written, the phases Ron passed through, the memories - well done!

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thanks loads for a wonderful review! and for reading and reviewing :)

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