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cute and sweet!  Definitely one of my favorites so far ^_^

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aw sweet

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=D thanks

That was fantastic! I loved getting a glimpse of 11 year-old James... lol, "Juvenile" is a river in Egypt... haha. Good job!

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hehe Thanks I really appreciate the review.

Aw, it was cute :)

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=) Thank you!

Ohh when i saw that yu said they werent killed by deatheaters i was going to say =O how do yu knoo, well yu learn something interesting everyday =D

WOW, i really really really really (i could go on forever) liked this story =]
Alex xx

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=) I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate the review!

Yeah, I had overlooked the whole 'not killed by Death Eaters' thing until pretty recently, when I was told on a different site that I couldn't post a story because it centered around Lily's parents being killed. Very frustrating. Oh well. *shrugs*
Thanks again for reviewing!

cute story,but i don't think the last part was so great but still,good job!!

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Thank you for the review. I appreciate the honest input. If you have a chance, I'd love to know why the last part wasn't so great. It's through the constructive critism that I'll improve!

Interesting. Kudos

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Thank you!

ohhh, that was really sweet! good job

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Thanks! =)

Reading this made me laugh! Thank you very much. I love the yellow whistle.

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Reading this made me laugh! Thank you very much. I love the yellow whistle.

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=) You're welcome very much! Thanks for the awesome review! I'm glad you like the whistle,   it's a little random but that's fanfiction for ya!

Wowza that was sooo good! I just recently started reading Jmes and Lily stories and they are begginning to become my favorites! thanks for the great story! 10/10! added to my faves too.

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Thank <i> you! </i> I'm really glad you liked it.... Lily and James are my favorites, too! I appreciate the time you took to review!

UPDATE RIGHT NOW

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LOL this was a one-shot, so it won't be continued, if that's what you're asking. I will hopefully have a couple of new stories on in the coming months, but sadly school work comes first.

Hi!
This was a really cute spin on the lily/ james story!!
i liked the whistle. wait...lily and james' parents weren't killed by death eaters? do we know how they die?!?! 
i definitely missed that in the books! oops!
YAY Little Rascals!!!
once again, awesome story!!! would be on my faves if i had an account!!!
XoXo

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Thanks for the awesome review! 

Yeah, JK Rowling said on her site or in an interview or something that both sets of grandparents died naturally...I couldn't remember where I read that, but here is a lovely quote from JK Rowling, on the HP Lexicon:
"James's parents were elderly, were getting on a little when he was born, which explains the only child, very pampered, had-him-late-in-life-so-he's-an-extra-treasure, as often happens, I think. They were old in wizarding terms, and they died."
I'll see if I can track down how the Evans's died, but it was in Muggle fasion; ie, no Death Eaters. All I know is that I once tried to submit a fic to a different site, and it was rejected because it centered around Lily's parents being killed by Death Eaters.

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked this story! I really appreciate the review! I love getting feedback from my readers.

It was great! very entertaining. 10/10

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Thank you very much! I really appreciate the review!

Aww, that was cute! I loved it. The whole thing was great. I liked this part:

â€œIâ€™ve only asked you to marry me twelve times,â€ was all I could think of to say.

â€œNo, there was that time in second year when Sirius tricked you into thinking that it was the last day of term when it really wasnâ€™t.â€

That was good :) Well done!

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I appreciate the feedback!

awwww, so cute. i really liked it.

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Thanks! I appreciate the review!

Annddd... zeh second banner! xD
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Thanks! I really appreciate it! These will be up very soon...

ah.... little plastic yellow whistles. good times... good times. Good story, too! i liked it a lot :)

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Hehehe, that was funny :o) Nice story!

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

very cute....i want a James.  *sigh*  awesome job.  i enjoyed it very much.
LMW 10/10 in faves

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Yes, James is one of a kind...I'm glad you enjoyed this story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

aww such a cute oneshot
james is so adorable
great job

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Thanks. Glad you liked it.

I'm speechless. I was either smiling or laughing the whole time I was reading this. This was a pretty original idea. Not many people do one-shotd that spread out through seven years. Nor do most people have James propose to Lily twice a year... with a whistle. And finally succeed... with a ring... and said whistle. You are an excellent writer, that's apparent. Just the way you wrote trapped me into the story. I loved it tons. :]. Keep writing. In the meantime, I'm going to see if you've written any other stories. 10/10. And adding it to favorites. (Because obviously I'm in love with your story.)

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Thanks for such a wonderful review. I really appreciate the time you took to read and respond to my story. I am working on another story at the moment, and have several ideas for others, but I haven't got around to posting them at the moment. Glad you enjoyed this one so much. :-)

Aww this story was gorgeous! AND HILARIOUS! haha gave me a good laugh
XOXO
DIS

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I had a laugh writing it! Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it.

Aww this story was gorgeous! AND HILARIOUS! haha gave me a good laugh
XOXO
DIS

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Thanks =)

hahahaha
that was really well written
i like the idea of a whistle being the symbol of their relationship =)

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Thank you. I don't know what made me think of the whistle, I just was kind of lying in bed around two o'clock in the morning, and all of a sudden I got this totally random idea, and just had to write it down that instant, even though it was the middle of the night, and here is the result. :-) Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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