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please, please, please update !

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love it. update soon.

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Ah - great chapter! I think it is a really good idea for them to make a Galen Archer memorial gallery, from the sounds of it he was a great man and it seems only fitting. I really felt in this chapter how much Gwen misses her parents, it must have been very hard on her and the dream/memory at the end of the chapter is a little glimpse into the day they died. Anyway, I really felt for Gwen and Severus when Dumbledore was telling them about his time with Gabrielle and how embarrasing it must have been. Also, I notied that you have changed the title of the story, they are both good titles :D I'll be going over to the Dark Guardian soon to read this chapter from Severus's PoV, I'm really looking forward to reading his view of both the duel with Lockheart and what he thought when Gwen was sick. So, great chapter!

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Ugh - this has been up for ages and I didn't see it! I'm so sorry - I guess thats what I get for not going on the computer for ages, lol. Anyway, this chapter, I really, really enjoyed it. Gwen's reaction to finding out that Narya was her cousin was exactly how I pictured it! I also think it was ironic that while at this very point in the original story, the trio are suspecting Draco of being the heir, that Gwen is suspecting Lucius of opening the chamber. In a way, though, Lucius did open the chamber. Well, now I really should read the other chapters I haven't yet :P Great chapter, very enjoyable!

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that was good.  i almost didn't recognize your story.

-dani

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Awesome chapie, girl!

-dani

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Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I just got back from my trip out of town so another chapter for Snape's point of view is on its way. :)

Interesting... I liked how she almost dropped her cup. That was funny. Also, i wanted to say that I'm really enjoying seeing this story from two points of view. It adds another layer to it. Great idea.

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Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm certainly having fun writing it. :)

Ahh, bless. I like how Dumbledore told Gwen of his conversation with Snape, it fits. This painting sounds really impressive ... Dumbledore truley does know every little thing about Hogwarts, doesn't he? Anyway, it's kind of odd to see Gwen wondering about why Snape is so distant to her and we all know its because he has a problem with just being <i> friends </i> with her. Now then, the Daily Prophet thing ... I thought it was really funny and certainly lived up to expectations. Gosh I feel so sorry for Gwen with Lockheart's thick headedness, I'm practically praying for her that the end of CoS comes and he losses his memory. Thinking about CoS ... it alomost Halloween, when Mrs Norris was petrified. It will be really interesting to see both Gwen and Snape's reaction to it. Really good chapter, I look forward to the next one!

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Yes, is about time for the Chamber to be opened. Keep an eye out for Snape's next chapter which was submitted a few days ago. ;)

Thank you for the comment. :)

Very good!

-dani

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Thank you.

Great chapter as usual. At least they finally know where they stand. Are there still going to drive each other mad? I just love those scenes ! lol ! Update soon  here and on your site as well. Keep up the good work!

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Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Another chapter for Snape's story is being submitted today.

Yay - an update to Gwen's side of the story! I liked the part with the Dark Riders - especially her last thought <i> I didn't know the dark riders had hair </i> - It was also interesting to see Gwen's reaction whe she found out it was Snape that saved her. Again, I can't help but laugh at the scene in Dumbledore's office where he tells Gwen to, "Stop scaring Professor Snape." Still, I don't think of Gwen is a horse theif (as I have said already) and Ashlar really does seem to love her. Gilderoy still hasn't learnt his lesson yet, but we know what will happen next chapter with the Daily Prophet thing, again, I am really looking forward to reading it from Gwen's PoV. Really good chapter - I enjoyed it!

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I just submitted Gwen's chapter for the Daily Prophet scene so hopefully it will be up soon.
There is much more to come. :)

i love the interactions between Snape and Gwen...you definitely have something going for you here, keep at it

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Thank you. I really appreciate the comment. There is a lot more to come.

GOOD CAHPIE!!!!  YAY!  Okay, I say it almost all the time, but I can't think of anything more interesting.  Oh well, keep it up!

-dani

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Awww Thank you. I'm really glad that you have been enjoying the story. There is a LOT more to come. We have only scratced the surface of what these characters will go through so far.

Hallo,
That description of the "Dark Riders" sounds eerily like something from LOTR. Well, only a bit, I guess...but still, it reminded me of LOTR. I decided to read this story because, well, I didnt ever really get why people had snape pairings. Although I don't think I could write a snape pairing, I think you did a good job here. Well, o.o; I also think its awesome that you made yourself an OoC. gwendolyn archer is a wee bit Mary Sue-ish, but you can always add some kind of quirk or short coming. Like...an allergic reaction to shellfish, or ... extreame clutziness. *shrug* Mary Sue-ish ness has a cure! XD

well yeah Im rambling, sooooo GOOD DAY TO YOU! *bows and skips off*

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Actually, the similiaraties are on purpose. I also make jabs at my OC throughout the story that more or less call Gwen a Mary Sue. Call it my feeble attempt at humor and suggestive cross-overs. At times the jokes are lost on readers, but that sort of thing happens.

I'm really enjoying this story so far. I hope you update soon!

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Thank you. Another chapter is on its way.

I have a question. This class is an elective and only third years and up can take it right? So how can Neville take the class since this is set in his second year? Just caught that, and was wondering if you meant for that to be in there. Anyways, I'm going to keep reading, it's really good so far!

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A mistake that I overlooked with the other details I was trying to work out. Thanks for pointing it out to me.

Absolutely brilliant! You gave such good gradual progression to keep suspene, and yet kept it interesting througought!

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Thank you so much for your comment. I appreciate it. :)

another good chapter as usual, I think you made some minor changes from the parts on your site though, right?

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The story on my site is the rough draft and a few things went on "the cutting room floor" when posting here due to space limitations, but the over all story will remain the same. :)

Ha - imagine what must be going through Harry's mind! Actually he'd probably be thinking about something to do with the Chamber, I dunno, its irrelivant anyway ... God, I was cracking up laughing at all Gwen's attempts to make Snape ucomfortable and you must feel at least a tad bit sorry for the man, especially when she sat down next to him at dinner. Dumbledore must be feeling pretty happy at the moment, after all he certainly played his part in getting them ... well not together <i> yet </i> ... but we are almost there. The trip to the Art Museaum certaily sounded fun. I'm assuming Galen Archer is her father (G name theme running through the family by any chance, lol) but tut tut Gilderoy, he certiainly had the wrong impression. I can see why this is one of you favourite parts of the story, very ejoyable ...

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Yes, Galen Archer was her father. Another character who is going to have a large part in this, even if he is deceased during the time the story is taking place. 
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I certainly had fun writing it. :)

Another Brilliant chapter! can't wait for the next one!!
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Another good chapter...Oh, Harry, go away!  Oh, well.  Great story.  I want updates for either.  Now! Now! Now!

Ahem.

Sorry.

Please?

-dani

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LOL I'm so glad you liked it. Another chapter for Snape's side of the story is on its way. :)

Woah - great chapter, I loved the whole Neville getting confused between ink and potion, I guess it would be an easy mistake to make if they were of the same colour and consistancy. I also liked Snape's soloution <i>"Then perhaps Mr. Longbottom should have been more careful when choosing his flasks."</i> - I can't help but thinking that it's so true. Poor Neville though, he was petrified of Snape, bless him. Anyway, on to bigger matters, the kiss, yay - go Gwen, despite the fact that it was one in front of a roomfull of students and its only purpose was that of a distraction, it was a kiss nonetheless, lol. It also made Gwen aware of her feelings for Snape and we know fron both his conversation with Dumbledore and The Dark Guardian that Snape has already come to terms with his feelings ... Also, how could I forget, we know how Gwen came upon Ashlar! You have to love Ashlar, who could not, I think it was probably the best thing to happen to him that his Dark Rider disappeared and Gwen found him. If it makes Gwen feel any better, I don't think of her as a horse theif, lol, she merley ... adopted Ashlar ... Anyway, really good chapter, I enjoyed it!

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Thank you so much. The chapter that I submitted last night is my favorite part of the entire story. I hope you enjoy it as well. :)

Brilliant chapter!! I absolutely loved it!! Can't wait for the next update!
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Thank you for the comment. The next chapter that I am about to submit is my favorite part of this story. I hope you like it. :)

great chapter ! I couldn't stop laughing at that "I like it spooky" line all day. I'm very curious about Gwen's dear old Grandma update soon!

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I'm glad you like it. Gwen was quite mortified about her dreams. More of the story is coming soon. :)

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