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Awesome! Absolutely loved it! The writing style was amazing. You captured Draco and his calculating mind perfectly. The end was expected, but so well done. You have a wonderful gift. I hope you are writing some of your own stuff to publish.

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You're far too kind. I like to think I did map out Draco well, so I'm well pleased you agree. He's a fantastic character. I have a fourth story, the main story on this site, The Tempest (which is hidden at the moment but wont be for long). You may like it so check back if you wish. Thanks for the review. Word.

amazing. this is definitely one of your best that youve posted so far. you halfexpect the ending, but its still a surprise in a way. nice.

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Why thank you. The story is coming together. Nice penname by the way. Glad you liked it, glad you reviewed, I'll update soon.

That was amazingly breathtaking. I could feel the emotion flowing off my screen. The passion, the images, the colors. I could see and feel it all. I love the allusion to Helen of Troy. That was beautiful. This is really just an amazing short story. I absolutely loved it. There was just so much in this that I just couldn't look away for even a minute. I was supposed to put my baby step-brother to sleep and I just couldn't. Your words take my own breath away. It's all too graceful and amazing. Thank you so much for being an author. You should have your own workshop. You'd be a fantastic teacher I'm sure.

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Oh good, you read it! This story was really easy to write, you know. It's mildly depressing, but it's powerful. I like that about it. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much and I'm glad you reviewed it. I write to  practice writing, and when others enjoy what I've written, I'm happy. 
Thank you, thank you! You're fantastic.

Oh my! 
That was simply gorgeous! so beautifully, poetically, tragic and sorrowful. I am very impressed with your writing. Your imagery was stunning - I could see the two of them in that room so clearly. I loved the use of metaphor as well, esp the reference to Hermione being Draco's 'Helen', and the lamppost metaphor was excellent - the play on dark and light, reality and existence. Beautiful!
I like the interspersing pieces of poetry - it really helped to create meaning in your piece. I think without them, the story would not be as strong. 
I liked that you used an almost omniscient narrative, and referred to them as 'he','she', and the man and woman. It really helps to draw the reader in, even though we already know who the characters are.
The opening scene with Hermione sitting in the window was very evocative, and I loved your use of language throughout the whole piece.The repetition of their 'script' helped to reiterate the situation. Very well done.
I didn't see Malfoy as being evil, more like being desperately in love with a woman who would not be his unless he went to incredible lengths to keep her.
This is honestly the most mature and sophisticated piece i have read on this website. Incredible work.
Thank you for writing it.

MajiKat

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You're an incredible flatterer, I just hope you know. Absolutely incredible. I was sort of sputtering by the end of this review. 
I'm glad you liked it. It's my favourite, as I've said. I loved writing it and then editing it a couple months ago. It really strikes a chord with me because I feel like it's a twist (even though it may be predictable, you know?). 
The lamppost metaphors are my favourite. I'm lucky they turned out well. 
I have a habit of using 'he' and 'she'. I feel like I should apologise for it, actually. Ha, but I won't. It seems I didn't ruin the story with my he, she, and imagery. 
Malfoy it the perfect character in my eyes. He's fantastic and the cruel blighter writes himself. That he didn't rub evil to you is interesting, because I neither intended him to be evil nor saw it meself. He's in lust, you know? He's...forceful. He wanted something (be it Hermione, a woman's touch, some forbidden affair to keep his blood boiling, or the power he wrested from the Light when he tricked them all), and by the gods he did all he could to get it. I love that. I'm 17, naive and stark arrogant, but I still love that.
You're incredible. I haven't really anything else I could say. Thanks for this review, is what it is.

It's a really original idea. When you become an author someday, I wish you luck. Very nice job

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More doubles? Vow.

It's a really original idea. When you become an author someday, I wish you luck. Very nice job

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Oh, wow. I would love to author something someday. Not a story, or novel or any sort of book. Maybe a collection of my literature. Hm. Now I'm a'thinking. 
Thanks for liking the story. Happy hols.

It's good! Your style of writing is really good!

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I can't say it enough. Lamppost is my favourite. Truly, my favourite. Thanks for the review!

reread and I still love it. My favorite one-shot, absolutely amazing.

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I'm so glad you think so. So glad.

loved this. its amazing. its so dark, and the way near the end it goes back to the beginning and shes forgotten everything thats happened - so sad!!

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I absolutely love that you read this. Especially that you reviewed to it. Thank you! I love this oneshot. I'm glad you liked it too. It's very sad, but I think, in a way, it's in character. Tragedy writes itself. Merci merci for the review, Crossinthetree!

please keep on writing...grace us all with ur amazing works of art.
The draco malfoy in our hearts is not JK's but still he is in our hearts. In and Out right? lots of love

Raven

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Aw, excellent. You're too kind! This one, as I've said before to others, is my favourite.
Yes, exactly. The Draco Malfoy in my head (and in all our heads, really) is a fictional character I wouldn't mind being in love with. He's a bastard, true, but damn he pulls it off!
Glad you liked.
Gladder you reviewed.

A ridiculous amount of love,
me.

Wow.


Jesus, wow.
This is the best. Wow. How did you even come up with this? It's so dark and so, urg, i don't even know. Wow, i have absolutely nothing else to say. Nice job.

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Anoser double? 'Ow fortunate, no? Sank you.

Wow.


Jesus, wow.
This is the best. Wow. How did you even come up with this? It's so dark and so, urg, i don't even know. Wow, i have absolutely nothing else to say. Nice job.

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Aw, thanks. It's my favourite too. Aw. You're sweet. Thanks for the review!

i love it...alll of it...and i think you portrayed draco awesomely....when i read it took me a few seconds to comprhend it all and i was like wow...you're an awesome writer

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Aww, that makes me feel fuzzy. Draco writes himself, as I've said before. He's such a good character and he's my favourite. I'm glad you liked it and I reaaalllly liked the compliments! Thank you thank you!

oo, this is  the best! u wrote it so well and i didn't see the ending coming at all!!! wow, malfoy's evil, but he's in character, lol, so i totally don't care. nice nice, loved it. i might just check out u other stuff thanks.

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Oh I'm so glad you liked it. Draco is evil, but somehow I think it fits him. He's like the good kind of bad evil. Yeah.
Thanks for the review!

agian you're writing is simply outrageous! this one was a bit sad though, very sad. he's keeping her like a prisoner? i mean does he love her? it sounds like he does in a scary way... okay i must say the story is brilliant, but i guess i only found it good? sorry i mean you can't please everyone, but don't forget i am totally blown away by she's the tempest and maybe, soon enough, Craignez La Jolie too. (but since there are only two chapters at the moment i cant comment)...

i'm so happy that none of your characters in any of your stories are out of character i love it when authors make the character sound more real. yay! cant wait for you to update your other stories!

again for the millionth time i luv your writing, i luv your stories, i luv your vocabulary (okay i'm getting a little wierd... sorry!) anyway you know i love them so just keep on writing...

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Hey hey, it's paris! Why, I'm glad you kinda almost liked it! I'm a bit disappointed, though, because I definitely think this one's the best story I have. Despite it being a one-shot and all that. The writing is my best and the idea is my best.

He loves her, in his own Draco Malfoy way. The only thing I hate is that I had to use Hermione Granger as his victim. I kind of wish I used Ginny or that Harry Potter had another female character I could use instead. But alas, I used Hermione and changing it now would be retarded.

So I'm glad you read it and I'm glad you reviewed it. The other one shot is predictable and pales in comparison to this one. And I think that one might be mildly out of character.

Anyway. Thanks again, Paris. I finished chapter 17 and I'm writing chapter 18. For Craignez, I have yet to start chapter 3. But it'll all be updated soon!

I like it but Malfoy is just too evil!

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Poor dear, but in context, his character is fitting. I mean you haaave to be evil to do as he does, though he's a scrumptous bugger, ain't he? Thanks for the review!

wow...i liked that a lot! the letter was a bit lengthy, and like you said, ron came off really nice and sweet. but i loved it...great job!

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Aw, I'm glad you liked it. This is my favourite story, albeit darkest. And that Sweet!Ron thing makes me scowl a little, but still I'm glad you liked it!! Thanks for the review!

Wow...that story was one of the best I've ever read. It was so deep and thought provoking. I think you did an excellent job of playing out the parts. Keep up the wonderful writting!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Aw, thank you. Very much. I'm glad you liked it. And I'm even gladder that you found it deep, like you have no idea. Thank you thank you. I'll try to keep it up. Ohman. And Tom Felton is most definitely dead sexy. Just thought I'd add that. Mmm. What a beautiful boy he is. Ha. Okay I'm done.</i></font>

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*Twitch Twitch* If they don't validate that one shot, I think it's safe to say that some necks will be slit by me. They've been warned. Getting less and less and patient,maggy

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I wish it would validate. I think they're punishing me for some minor rule breaking. Blast. Well let's hope it's out soon. It's not as good as the Lamppost, but the banner is brilliant!!! Haha. Aye, ye be warned. *hugs maggy* I'll get my axe ready =D</i></font>

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(holy effing god, it's me again, i REALLY need to organize my thoughts) Sorry, I'm just reading the reviews and I JUST GOT that Hermione and Draco were married. *blushes* Now i feel stupid. Tear Tear. Oh well, that just shows how wonderful a writer you are

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> yeah they were. but not to eachother. dangerously spicy. yeah, you're obviously not stupid, i just hope the story isn't so confusing. mercimerci pour toutes les revues *smiles*</i></font>

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(again by the way) Draco is your favorite character? *whispers* Don't tell anyone, he's mine to. 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> mmmm, draco. I am most definitely a fan.</i></font>

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waiting not so impatiently for that new one shot to validate.Getting less and less patientMaybe I'll just wait here for it to validate, refresh the page every few seconds. Yeah, that's what I'll do. (btw, everytime I want to write i read something of yours to get my creative juices flowing. Since I've started reading your work I've improved as a writer. You are my lovely inspiration, my simply marvelous inspiration)

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> aww. i just want to hug you. thank you very much. i do believe that's the nicest thing i've ever read. you're incredible. i'm waiting for this oneshot to validate too. the banner's wicked. maybe they're boycotting me. i believe it. well, i'll be refreshing the page as well, it seems. thanks for the review!</i></font>

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Wow, that was really amazing, there is nuthin more to say except that!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thank you very much. so glad you enjoyed it. i had a lot of fun writing it! mercimerci.</i></font>

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awww...that was sweet! oh, youre good at one-shots too, im so jealous! best of luck with your writing and all i can ever add is write write and write some more!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> yessss, another review for the Lamppost! you're my hero. i'm now slightly addicted to one shots. there are some incredible ones out there, and i mean incredible, so i'm working on a few other ones that i hope will be amazing too! thanks for the review!!</i></font>

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Hey, that was really unique. I liked it very much. I just got to this site and it was like, the third thing I've read here, but it's my fav. of the three, lol. Im gonna go read ur other one now. Oh, and I loved the title, it rocks my socks. -K

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> haha. thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I like the title too. It made me happy. I hope you liked the other story too! Thanks for the review!!</i></font>

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