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I keep coming back to this story hoping for more updates.. for the past almost three years :/ ... hopefully, one day soon, you'll start posting chapters again. I love this story. I'll keep checking!

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come back! you haven't updated this in forever...i just spent the better part of 2 day s reading this story and although this chapter didn't end in a major cliffhanger (which I thank god for if you've really abandoned this story) i still want more!!!

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New chapter??? Its been quite a long while...

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I'd just like to offeryou my opinion on this amazing story:

1. What where you thinking naming 'winston' "Ranulf"?? This is too hilarious to even comprehend. As a Norwegian, I know a thing or two about Norwegian names, and this is just too hilarious.

2. You must know that Google translate is really sucky and translated nearly all of your Norwegian sentences wrong in those few chapters someone spoke Norwegian. I found it quite funny x)

3. I absolutely love your story so much, it's like the best fanfiction I've ever read. What would just make my day, though, would be if Kristen had a change in heart and started actually being voldemort's spy instead of the order's.. It would go really well with the fact that she's referring to Voldy as The Dark Lord now, apparently..

Until next chapter comes up, I will be biting my nails, really excited to see what will happen later! So you really should write a new chapter soon, if you don't want me to end up a nail-less freak!

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I think this is the best FanFic I've ever read (and I have read it twice already!). 
I love Kristen, The Beatles, Sirius Black, The Marauders and Tom Riddle. And the plot is absolutely awesome, how did you came up with such great ideas? Your writing is good as well. 
I really enjoyed reading this, and I'd love to know what happens next!
- A fan of yours :)

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I've had this story on my to be read list for a while now but I've always held off seeing as it's been a while since it's been updated, but I had to start reading it eventually. Good start, curious as to where you're taking this.

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Three Houses? What about slyltherin

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wish you'd update the next chapter:( its been so long i love this story so much!! xoxox

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I love this chapter. I love how you make Sirius so comfortable with the situation. I also have to admit I laughed my ass off at the part where he shouted something about Snape having a crush on Remus. Absolutely fucking hilarious. I also enjoy the bit of Jily you threw in!

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You really need to come back and update! I'm totally in love with your story.

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real name! haaha my last name really is black:)! but they are 11... shouldnt they do 11 year old things?

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Aww james is jealous cause his two friends aren't  paying him attention. 9/10 : )

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They kissed 9/10 : )

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Haha kristen likes james 9/10 : )

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I think sirius likes her. 9/10 : )

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Good chapter. 9/10 : )

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I want a monkey 9/10 : )

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Wow sirius isnt very nice. 9/10 : )

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James and kristen are so cute 9/10 : )

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Kristen should tell her parents. If they kick her out she could live with the potters. 9//10 : )

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This was interesting. 8/10 : )

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I feel bad, I've just read all 104 chapters w out review once, but it was just so good I couldn't stop, not even for a second! Loll ok so ur story is amazingg, and please update soonn! Thx bye!

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Update soon please!!! I love your story!

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On the norwegian part, did you use Google translate, because I am norwegian, and half of it didnt have a meaning? 
You write amazing though, and in a so exciting way.

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This is still my favorite story on HPFF. I love your writing so very much and I really hope you plan on continuing with this at some point. I think I started reading this story about four years ago, and I still love it. The characters you have created seem so real and it is easy to get attached to them. I'd be lying if I said I wouldn't be upset if I never found out what happened to them all. You are a wonderful writer and person, and I really hope that you finish this story. 

10/10 as always. 
-Victoire

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