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Amazing, you finally get GinEVRA's name right Then end the chapter with the misspelling you have been using throughout the story GinERVA.  Read canon and Pottermore, if you are going to write someone else's characters at least show enough resect toget spellibg right!

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You need to learn verb tense!  Especially verb "see", have seen multiple misuses in last few chapters!  Also, when writing someone else's characters you should consult "canon" for correct spelling!  Failing to do so is an insult to originating author!  Ginny's first name according to JKR is GinEVRA not Ginerva or  Ginvera!!  Proofreading woyld help!!

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I loved the story! Such a cute story filled with happiness and nice moments. You've done a fantastic job covering the period in life that virtually all other stories completely ignore. They cover the falling in love thing and then skip straight to Harry and Ginny having 15 grandchildren and living to be a hundred. I really like your story about them being young and starting a family. Your story was beautiful.

Thanks for writing it!

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I love your story but I hate that you named one of the twins Lily. Lily is supposed to be Harry and Ginny's third child. I think that you must have started this story before you read the last book in the Harry Potter serise because so many things are different.

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Harry is prat, a big one.

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After reading this first chapter, I don't think I will be able to stop reading until the story is over. Excellent work!

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This was a great book.  I can't wait to read the sequel to it.  Keep up the good work.

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This story is great so far.  It's cool the way they got back together.  Now their having another child and Harry will be there for Ginny this time.  Keep up the good work.

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This is good so far.  Keep up the good work.

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Thank you so much for this wonderful story!, I really hope you can write more in the future, God bless, and take care :]

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Very enjoyable chapter!, Thank you.

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Nice, i'm sensing a good battle in next few chapters, I'm excited!

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About time Harry boy! I'm getting super excited for the next chapter, *brain explodes*. Lol

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About time !, but Harry man, whhy leave?! Oh well i guess he's still shock and all that, Great story, i'm loving it so much!

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Oh wow, now i'm excited! , Better get this thing right Harry, don't ever hurt poor Ginny's Heart.!!

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Oh wow what to say, Harry leaving poor Ginny?!, Man, Harry you better man up next time you see her, coz it's going to be some ugly Bat-Bogey Hexes! haha, great chapter btw.

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OMG! What a blast from the past. This was the VERY FIRST story I ever read on this website or any fanfic back when I was 13. Now I'm 17 and can really appreciate it and its still my favorite story by a long shot. Lol. Now if only people would read my stuff like they read yours. ^_^ I still love the story and think it is AMAZING! I hope you'll take time and read mine even though it isnt that great!!!
Love it!
 Noelle!

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This is the second time I've read this and it just gets better. 
You've done a wonderful job, definatly my favourite harry/ginny story. (:
well done.

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OMG!! I love it! best chapter yet! Dreams crossing! amazing! lol

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I am i love with this story! Thank you for sharing it with us!

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you know i really really love this story... i've read it twice now. my only issues with it, and bear with me 'cause it really bugs me, is that you always have this error in your English; you say things like "What Harry seen next" or "what Ginny seen". (you only use 'seen' as in "what harry had seen" - as in past participle or whatever it's called) wrong. wrong. wrong wrong wrong. You need to put "what harry saw next" and "what ginny saw". this error is throughout the story. BUT it is the only thing that bugs me about it. otherwise i truly enjoy this story!

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reading this story again feels like a movie like "Gone with the Wind" except this has a happy ending.  You have such a wonderful gift of writing and expressing yourself on paper is a real gift.  If you ever write a book, please let me know your pen name and the book title so I can purchase it.  It has been an honor and a privilege to read your story. thank you for all your hard work. Hope to find more of your brilliant writing. good luck

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Really Awesome so far! But when Ginny and Hermione are talking it almost sounds like she didn't want Harry to come home or something.

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Hi there - thanks for reading!  Yes - at first - Ginny didn't want Harry to come home. She was still a little angry at him for taking off in the first place. I'm glad you enjoyed! ~Jenn

Awesome idea and thanks for writing a cool plot.

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Oh wow, this is sad...and happy. That little James is adorable. I love that he carries around a stuffed snitch. And I literally pouted when he asked why she was crying and then if they could have cake. haha. This is great so far..

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