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why don't you write anymore? i miss the story...

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> i'm sorry!  too much school and such things...I'll have to go back and read it, come up with some ideas for how to continue, and hopefully have something over spring break.</i></font>

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Interesting story. Still sketchy about vampirism skipping a generation. Your characters could also use a bit of rounding. Good story overal.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thanks...  :)</i></font>

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adorable.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> hooray!  :D</i></font>

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dude i finally got a chance to read your fic. i friggin' love it!! give me more!!!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> finally....another review!!!  hooray...thanks so much...yeah....school rules my life!  damn it... :D</i></font>

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aww her and remus are adorable. i love reading your story

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thanks so much!!!  i really appreciate the review...i like your story too...it's on my fave list!  yay for fanfic :D</i></font>

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Heh heh heh, a little bit of naughtiness in this chapter...but it was good...Adaia

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thanks...i was iffy about it...more to come...</i></font>

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Haha I guessed them. Anyways, I absolutly loved it. Yeah, loved it. You go you.. uh.. you all knowing fantastic writer you!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thanks so much!  i love you (for taking time to actually review) :D  </i></font>

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Mwahh me and snape! and what??? you didnt make HIM get naked ... depressing... isn't this a mature rating for a reason???? me want more NAKED TIME

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> hold your horses...</i></font>

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NO! You can't leave it there!  heh heh heh, sorry for not reviewing in so long...busy... Ciao! Adaia

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> oh, but i can.  mwahahahahahaha...i'm just waiting for chapt. 10 to be validated.  :D</i></font>

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Aww, you had to leave me with some suspence!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> suspense is good...makes you want to read more (i assume).  i'm glad you're enjoying! :D</i></font>

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Omg! I love this story! It makes me laugh.. :D . Please update really really soon!!!! 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> i'm glad you think it's funny...originally it wasn't supposed to be a funny story (still isn't)--the humor just pops out.  greatness.  have been busy moving back to college, so i'm pushing out chapt. 10 as fast as i can.  should be updated soon.  thanks :D</i></font>

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OMG I JUST REALIZED THAT I WAS THE FIRST TO REVIEW!!! WOOT

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> jeez...go and review every chapter!  :P  at least we're not obssessed enough to purchase HP checks and checkbook--ya know what i'm talking about. :)  i want the remus-worthy boy (even if i don't know his name...yet!)</i></font>

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GO first person pov. good stuff.. fav chappie yet... except that you already knew that....   I want more!!!! no, i DEMAND MORE *MWahhhh MWAHHH* ok yeah. Keep it up

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I LOVE YOU..... Mmmm Sirius' body.... *drools* continue!!!!

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you stole my chapter title. .*pouts* awe... Remmy.....   I WANT MY FREE HUG.... you better hold up that offer :P good chappie.. finally some remus action

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OMG. I am the COOLEST person ever!!!  " Oh, sorry. Does it make him uncomfortable or something" you were there ... you saw me laugh my ass off.... oh man thats funny. I love my character

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I'm using the box "below" lol... thats dirty.... sorry didnt review sooner... damn college and moving in and golf ....ugh.

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funny. I love this story I cant wait till the next chapter.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> in response to all or your reviews:  thanks so much!!!  i'm glad that you're following the story so loyally!  i would love for it to move faster, but in order to get to the really good bits you also need some boring things.  oh well.  i'll update soon! :D</i></font>

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Awsome chapter.  it was funny when she put sirius in his place.

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interesting friend

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Schools going to be tought

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LoL. A lovely review for you. Love the story keep up the good work. (Wow that was lame..)

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thanks!  and no review is lame--i love them all!  i'm glad you like it and hope you read more...i'm going to update soon and i believe chapter 9 is still in limbo...anywho, thanks again :D</i></font>

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SEE you even SAID..."Eavan was becoming more and more ADVANCED" LOL.... oh Gir... DUMBLEDORE???? hehe...or VOLDEMORT. because that would be awesome.. then Eavan and Voldy could live happily ever after with there 7 Death Eater Children.....

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Felicity eh? how very WB of you! 'It's not my fault that is the only name I could think of at the time' well yes yes it is. You are supposed to be the author, therefore you are supposed to know your story inside AND out. Those are the rules... I rule fan fic with an iron fist....OBEY THE FIST

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> so very zim of you.  and i do know my fanfic inside and out.</i></font>

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wonderful chapter. I cant wait til the next one.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> this is in response to both your reviews:  thank you!  unfortunately the site has validated the chapters out of order (chapter 3 still has yet to appear, but it isn't the most important thing).  i'm very glad you're enjoying my story!</i></font>

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