it would be a really good story if there were more chapters, but as a one-shot is was funny but a little bit weak. It's very cute though. If you get a chance, could you please please please read my fics? I would be sooooo delighted if I had some reviews.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I might wrote a comapnion piece for this later, when I get some inspiration. But I am greatful for the constructive criticism(SP?).
More background wpuld have been nicce, but overall it rocked.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was thinking about writing a backgroud story on them, but there have been a few bad reviews, because Snape/Hermione couplings are not very common, and people don't reall like them, but I will do a background story soon.
ok i'm sry... it's gross that they would get together... he's like 20-30 yrs older than her!! Besides that i liked the PLOT!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. From what I gather, he's only 20 years older than her. But at least I made it so she was a teacher and not a student. I am glad that you liked the plot though.