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i liked the story.. it realy nice.. kudos for he efforts you ahve put in to write..

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This is really good!  I loved it... so sweet!  I think you should definitely do a sequel!  Okay, as for critique.  I loved it (its my stp [second true pairing] now!!) but if you make things go just slightly slower, it would let me enjoy it a lot!  I loved it...

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nice fic 
10/10

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=[=[=[ its finished =[ hope that there is a sequel!!! lol. i will definatly read it if there is!

Sarah xxx

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thanks for all the awesome reviews, im glad you liked my story!

argh! only one chapter left! i have been reading this fic for 3 hours! its awesome! 

this chapter was great =]

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bwahahahhahaaaaaa. yay!

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ooo. lol. very good =]

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lol i liked it! this has been on my favourites list for ages but it kinda got lost... but I FOUND IT! so yay i can read it now... although i have a feeling i have already read it... ah well looks good so it gets a second read!

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haha, well, i definitely wont be angry for a re-read! glad you liked it enough to put in your favourites--that makes my day!

Wow, "Change of Heart" is a really good. You are pretty good author. I have always enjoyed reading L/J fics and your's is one of the best I have read. Gr8 job!

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:) yay! hehe, its always really flattering to hear that people appreciate my stories, so thanks for that, glad you enjoyed it!

goodness, i totally LOVED it! your fic is fantabulous, i have been looking for a gud L/J fic since...whenever and then i found your story (bonus - it was completed!) so, r u gonna post a sequeal?

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yay! thanks so much! i had a lot of fun and put a lot into writing this story, so its good to hear that people are enjoying it. as for the sequel...i unfortunately may have to abandon that attempt because after going back over the story, i dont really like where ive taken the characters :S sorry to you and any others who have been so kind to request it!

I love you right at this moment, sosososo much!  I've been in a rotten mood, and was looking for some L/J lovin to cheer me up... but all I could find for the longest time were these stories with a million cliche's packed into one chapter that was split into two paragraphs and lacking any form of punctuation.  You know the type... But I was so releived to see your name at the top of a completed story.  It was wonderful, and had me light-headed at so many points just from the loveliness of it.  So thank you for cheering me up! And lets see if you've got that sequel out yet, shall we?  ((goes to see))

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oh, man, i think i need to leave for awhile because you've just made my head swell like a balloon, haha. wow, haha, its good to hear that people are enjoying my stories, but its surprisingly even more great to hear compliments on my punctuation--im glad its appreciated! i'm so so so glad you enjoyed it, though, and if this could make someones day just a little bit brighter, then i'm super happy! and finally...yes...the sequel...im a terrible terrible hp fanfic writer who has not gotten passed the first chapter, and even at that i really dont like it and cant seem to get it going. however, i can compromise by trying to make an even better j/l story that i feel better about and ca write stuff on...so i will look into it. you said thanks for cheering you up, well you definitely just made my night!

Yay! I loved it! Great work!

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glad to hear it! *smiles big*

WoW, intimate.

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eep, haha, you betcha

Awh, that was nice! Not TOO sappy, but still nice and fluffy! ^^ Keep it up!

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lol, see, i dont doo too well with the overly sappy, and this was stretching it for me, but i do realise that many people do enjoy that sort of thing, so i went there. thanks for assuring me it wasnt too bad!

That is the cutest way for Lily and James to show each other how they feel. I actually went 'Aww'.

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hehe...yeah, the 'awww' factor was pretty much what i was going for, so its good to hear that i'm getting it! thanks again!

Awww, how adorable. I am alittle disappointed in James, I thought that he would keep the secret better then that, at least discuss it with Moony before spilling the beans. I mean, he could of told her about him being an Animagus, but to say that Remus was a werewolf? Too soon, much too soon. but I do love her reaction to the news. And her views. Very promising.

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thats a good point on the too soon business...i often go back and want to add in other chapters in between so that everything isnt happening too soon, but...well...i just havent gotten to it...so...hehe. and yeah, i did want that to be a big thing with them, him showing that he could trust her with that and her proving him right by keeping it, and liking him more for it sort of thing, but i can see how its really really quick. thanks for the review!

What a great first chapter! I loved it. You really pulled me into the characters, and stayed true to what we read in JKs books. Brilliant!

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i'm really really glad to hear my characters were plausible. thats something im constatntly worrying about months after ive submitted a story, and then go back and reread it--glad you think im doing a decent job!

~WOW.  So great.  I want a sequal.  This Story i PERFECT~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> thank you so much for all of your encouragement and reviews! you are one of my favourite readers right now, and you just rock! i'm glad you enjoyed the story, and especially that you did start reading it before, and then you re-read it and reviewed again--so awesome! and as for the sequel, i promise it will come at some point, im just painfully writers blocked at present! :S thanks again for taking the time to review and let me know what you liked!</i></font>

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~Oh...that was so sweet.~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> :) glad you thought so!</i></font>

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~James, James, James...some times i just dont know about that boy.~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> much agreed. i wrote this, though, because he cant be super sweet and perfect all the time</i></font>

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~Oh...i just love the snogging scene~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> haha, oh, its a good one, eh? haha, i aim to please!</i></font>

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~That is so funny.  I just love smashed lily.~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> haha, again, something most people go through at some time or another</i></font>

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~That is so sweet.~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> :) :) :) :) :)</i></font>

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~WOW.  That was...WOW~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> i feel somewhat uncomfortable making assumptions like this, because j.k.'s writing is so not focused on the dating relations and such of her characters, but i figured that its normal behaviour and, well, it happens, right? 'nuf said, haha</i></font>

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~They are so cute together.~

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> they had to have awesome chemistry, right? so i'm just subbing in fun things to make them even cuter</i></font>

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