how the heck can 3 sisters be born a month apart, it makes no sense!
2005-06-17 15:41:08
There are a lot of grammar errors and the three cousins are quite Mary Sueish. I think it could use some help; try getting a beta reader.

Author's Response: sorry i will fix that
2005-06-17 15:41:08
gooooood

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