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Wow! This was a wonderful story and I loved the last line.

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Thank you so much! :)

Hi! Your summary caught my eye, and I thought I'd stop by to review! I'm so glad I read this: this period in Ginny's life has always fascinated me, and I thought you wrote both her and Tom very well.

Even though there was no "dialogue" in this, I still think I can say you wrote their conversation incredibly well. Tom's voice is so perfect for the situation; he flatters Ginny, he advises her, and he pretends to care about her. I can definitely see how Ginny fell under his spell! And her ignorance just makes me so sad. You really captured her young voice very well. The things she worries about are so true to that age, and it was so sweet to see her crush on Harry play out at Hogwarts. 

I love the last line, about the monster under Ginny's bed. So ominous, and so very appropriate for Voldemort. That was a great note to end on.

Awesome work! I'm so glad I read this!

--Maggie

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Wow, thank you Maggie! I appreciate it so much that you took the time to leave me such a sweet review! Ginny has always been one of my favorite characters and I love the awkward unrequited crush she had on Harry in her younger years. I definitely identify with Ginny's naivete concerning the dubious nature of Tom's diary. I don't think i could have resisted a journal that talked back (que middle school angst). Thanks again for your kind words :)

Woah, this is good, this is really good, this is fantastic!
I love Ginny, she's the best and I've always wondered what she wrote in there. This gave me a feeling that I knew what she did and it gave me a peek into her conversations with Tom. And the monster under the bed...brilliant! Loved this little one-shot!

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Thank you Flipp!! What a nice thing to say :) Ginny is definitely one of my favorite characters as well!

I wasn't too sure on the story at the start, but once I started reading the conversation, I was really intrigued! Ginny sounds exactly as an eleven year old girl should, with her petty problems, and Tom sounds so mature and thoughtful (deceiving!). What most impressed me about this chapter, was what you said on the very last line about the monster underneath her bed. That was perfect. Thank you for writing this- put up the next one soon, please! :)

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Thank you for sticking it out! I'm sorry that the beginning was rocky for you! I'll see what I can do to edit it. I really appreciate you taking the time to review!! This story is complete but I'm working on a story featuring Tonks that I hope to have up soon. Thank you for reading!

This is really great.  I thought your characterizations of eleven-year-old Ginny and Tom Riddle were excellent--he, particularly, was very believable in his quest to get her to trust him.  
Go you! :)

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hey, thanks! way to brighten my day. :)

i like it!
even though its not J.K.s words it seems as if this is what would've happened if the book had taken from ginnys point of view.
update!

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hey thanks! That's a really spectacular thing to say.

Ooh. I love things that explore the (creepy) friendship of Tom and Ginny. It's a strangely enthralling sort of thing; a little girl being charmed into a fake friendship by a truly evil man. In a way, it brings to mind some possible symbolism and reminds me of what a genius J.K. is.

And in a very strong way, this story presents to me the fact that you are a good author. =) This was written well, and their conversation represents their friendship very well and I like it very much. Good job. ^^

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thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to review.

ooh thats pretty good! and im picky about fics with Ginny as a kid.. very very very good:) 10/10

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awe, thanks! It was fun to write.

Wow...You almost make Riddle sound nice....That's what make it so convincing though.No wonder Ginny was hooked onto the diary.Very nice plot.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Making Tom into a nice guy was the idea. The way I see it, he had to have had increadible charm to woo Ginny. But, I suppose it wouldn't be hard to make a good impresson on the mind of an 11 year old. Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it!</i></font>

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<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> k</i></font>

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it didn't work...the tag should make the banner turn out like this...<img src="http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b295/Kuzia/DearTom-Rainpixie.jpg" alt="Image hosted by Photobucket.com">i'll send u the tag again...

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I copied wrong. Woops! I'll go fix it now. Thanks again!</i></font>

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how cums u haven't put it up yet?

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I'm putting it up right now! Thanks again!</i></font>

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yea! I sent it to u 2 days ago so check u email for the info then mail me back so i can send u da real thing...ps i really like the banner i made u so i hope u do 2.luv chand xxx

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I just found your email and replied to it. :-)</i></font>

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ok. seeing as it's a rainy day and ur penname is rainpixie i randomly decided to make ur banner today. it will be with you by well today!!!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> ahah I <i>knew</i> something good would come out of my user name...thanks! :-)</i></font>

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awwwww that's so sweet and sad at the same time because we know what Tom is really like. Would you like me to make you a banner for that story>?? I do make them for many people. check out Chelz Potter's banners - all except 'Her Green Eyes and 'The Tale of Severus Snape' and all of Demius Lupin's right now I'm doing 13 for Kainami and 2 for unsightly child but they'll be done soon enough.Keep writingluv chand xxx

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> I WOULD LOVE IT IF YOU MADE ME A BANNOR! Oh gosh. That's so sweet of you to offer! And take your time making it, considering you have so many to finish before mine. And I'm not that picky, so be creative! Thank you so much! (p.s. I checked out the bannors of the other authors and I'm in love with your work already!)</i></font>

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ooohhh...eery, and ironic- a very good combo.  I like the power part- awesome forshadowing.  please continue!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> a;dkfdkjfd!!! A review for Dear Tom!!!! That's so exciting! I havn't had one of these in months. As for continueing, hmm...I meant for it to be a one shot..but i guess there is story potential. Thanks for the review! </i></font>

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I really liked this one-shot! It gave me a better view on the situation of Ginny using the diary! I`ve never really put TOO much though into it before! Wonderful job! :) 

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you!  The truth is, I was struggling a bit with my series story and I wrote this to prove to my self I could still do it! I'm glad it gave you better insight of Ginny's relationship with Tom. </i></font>

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I was going to read your other story, but when I saw how many chapters you had - i had to put it on hold for later and I read your one-shot instead - and I'm so glad I did. wow, it's almost like a missing chapter from the book. It  was jus perfect - so in character and that last line - just perfect!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Wow! The author of Malfoy and the Mudblood has read my story! I'm so flattered! Your reveiw means so much to me. Thank you. I'm very glad you liked it!</i></font>

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oooh i liked the last line - "She fell asleep that night with the serene innocents of an eleven year old girl, completely unaware that something wicked did indeed live under her bed. "  yup i liked this one shot.  it was a little short but it was still good. i like the way you made him go silent when harry was mentioned! poor ginny.... tom was so nice to her, but so evil too!  keep up your good writing!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you very much. I know it was short, not even 1000 words. But I wrote it in about ten minuets, not expecting it to be very long. I'm glad you liked my last line. I was aiming for something that would make a reader go "Oooh! That's good!" So, I hope that was your initial reaction!Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Always appriciated.</i></font>

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loved it!!! i.... it... wow.... thats all i can say. it was brilliant :D

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you, ImaPirateArr, for reading and for calling it brilliant. I really appriciate the fact that you took the time to reveiw. Thanks again. </i></font>

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Aww, that's sad. But very interesting, though. I saw the 'Harry/Ginny' categorization, and I immediately was attracted to this story. Thank you for reviewing my one shot- I think it was the best review I've ever had! (Don't tell anyone, of course. ;-)) Great one shot!

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you! I'm glad you liked my reveiw--I was telling the truth. As for the Harry/Ginny catagory, I had trouble with that. I wasn't sure if it actually qualified as a H/G, but I labled it as that anyway. I hope I didn't disapoint you! </i></font>

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Very intriguing ^_^. I loved how you were able to portray Tom Riddle so, to let us see how he was able to manipulate Ginny so easily. He became somewhat of a companion, like you said, a best friend. Who wouldn't love that? ^^ Great job :D

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> Thank you very much. Suprisingly, writing Tom came easily. heh, Should I be worried? I wanted the readers to see how Tom could be the perfect friend, but at the same time let his true voldemort shine through.  But, because Ginny is so young and naive, she didn't realize it when evil was literally right in front of her face.</i></font>

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Cool story! I always love stories about Ginny talking to Tom Riddle.

<i><b><font color=#000080>Author's Response:</b> My first review! Thanks alot Anime Potter!</i></font>

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