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how truely dreadful. this is definately not what happened.

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nice chapter. but there were a few words in there where i understood what you meant, but you put the wrong words. i mean, sometimes you put words that sound like the words you mean, but don't have the same meaning. so you'll have to be careful of that. oh, and i was wondering what 'clam' meant. you know, in the second to last paragraph, the sentence "The party went on until well past midnight."

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yay! oh, and you said seeker in the paragraph where james is giving the team a synopsis of the slytherin players, when i'm pretty sure you meant chaser, but i doubt there's anything you can do to change that.

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i laughed so hard when lily just blurted it out to james. and i cannot believe that rachel is evil! arg!

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lol. i could have sworn that i'd read this story before, but i don't remember it, and it sounds really good so far! i like your writing voice, your punctuation is good, and your spelling/word choice is generally spot on. this is probably the only truly critical review i will leave you with, but if you seriously screw something up (which i doubt, considering what i've just read) i'll give you heads up. i cant wait to read the rest of this story!

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I just finished reading your extremely good fic.
I am very happy that you have written a sequel that i saw is already completed
I cannot wait to read it!
I also wanted to say that I saw Wicked and absolutely loved it.
I love the song as well.
Well I'll be reviewing in "The Greatest Thing", but until then farewell.

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That Was the crappiest story ever!!!, You need to resolve it fast or you will get the worst reviews. I hated the story.

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Awww! Sad!!! PLZ tell me the sequel patches things up!!! Or at least lie to me!!!!

*Tear*

X's nd O's

The Damsel

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Cute......

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Awwww... cute.... sad..... awwww

Damsel

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Woah... ummmm...... huh... whats going to happen now...... *sniff, tear*

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Awww... cuteness! I LOVE IT!!

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Hm.... interesting!

Damsel

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Cute!

Damsel

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Cute.... but what IS rach gonna do?

X's nd O's

The Damsel

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I like it!

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Great chapter.. loved it! the kiss scene is just perfect....

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First time I read the story i really liked it, It's definetly one of the best of this site!!! (it olso includes the second part "the Greates thing) great job! congrats

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dude, that whole review last time was my EX-best friend's idea!! kinda a dare so my total apologies(sp?)!!! i am soooooooo sorry this fic is totally rockin'!!!
ohh but you still never answered my question, where did you find James was a chaser? i have been looking and looking and now cos i dont have 'her' (refering to my ex best friend) help it is taking me twice as long and also i have school so you would save me alot of time and energy if you resonded and told!!!
rOcK oN!!!!
~Demon~

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no problem about the review, it actually made me question where i found that bit of info, lol! 

and sorry for not repling, i was trying to find out where i found it before i answered. i didn't really feel like reading the book, but i looked on mugglenet and they have it under James Potter's mini-bio page. 

so, thanks again for reading/reviewing and letting me remember about the chasrer bit! ^_^

BRILLIANT!!!! Whoa... that was... whoa...!!! I loved the Slytherin's prank - v. evil *evil grin* here! a free jar of dirt for your brilliance! Now you too can sing 'i have a jar of dirt!'

xxxoooxxxoooprongsie_potter_rulezxxxoooxxxooo


P.S he's called The Ultimate Jar Of Dirt the V

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thanks! you rule! quoting jack sparrow, LOVE YOU *high five* and yes, i will sing 'i have a jar of dirt'! and i gladly except your dirt, it's a wonderful present *takes it gladly*.

oh, and i'm really glad that you liked the prank and the story! thanks for reading/reviewing!!!

where did you find that james was a chaser?? i cant find it anywhere i have looked through all the HP books except the fourth one and Monkey_ice next to me looked through GoF!!
it would be nice if you told us because we are loosing it!! i dont think we were ever mentally stable to begin with!!! j/k (now is when your supposed to laugh)

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i found it on MuggleNet, and i think i read it in the 1st book, yeah...um...pretty sure bout it being in the first one, don't know though.

i luv your style of writing and i luc the whole fic!
i thought that Lily and James got together right after seventh year and stayed because otherwise that would make Sirius like in his fifties when he meets harrt for the first time and i think ill shut up because i am rambling and it is late and blah!
rock on!!!!!!

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thanks for all your reviews that you posted and i'm SO glad that you loved the story this much. 
so i will tell you that you rock!!!! so rock on!

argh i hate rachel she is sooo evil and i also hate bella evil evil evil!!!
awesome chappie heck awesome fic!!
rock on!!!!!!!

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yes, i like to make characters especially evil, it makes it even more fun to write about them. glad that you think that my fic is 'awesome'; it's great to know that you feel thay way! rock on!! tehe.

that was a stupid move stupid stupid stupid!
nothing good will come out of this!
rock on!!!!!!

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nope, foolish young men (as the previous chap says) will never learn. well...it might take a lovely young girl to slap him, stamp on his foot, etc. to make him realize it.

aww thats soo sad!!
James is soooo mean and even after reading this fic again i still hate James after what he did to Lily and Sirius!!
rock on!!!

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yes James is extremely mean isn't he?

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