The story line took a while to get going and could be longer but really interesting and funny

Just watch out for typos and tenses, when you used gred and forge I thought they were misspellings but when I re- read the sentence it was very funny

Great work and don't take my comments as mean I really do love the story
2005-07-27 09:55:19
Awsome story. Though at the end it's good to have only one time period skipped. That way thing aren't confusing. Now WHERE are my sugar quills and chocolate?! Jk
AW..i love how you wrote in Tonks and Hegwig, and Im guessing that Lupin and Fred are still alive too. Great beginning to the story
what a nice ending. i really like ur story

Author's Response: thanks!! =]
just a little umm.. thingy u might have forgotten- crabbe's dead!!(i think)

Author's Response: haha. yeah, this was written before book 7.
OH NO!!! WHO SOULD IT POSSIBLY BE!!(i think i am being sarcastic, but i might be wrong!! lets find out!

Author's Response: haha. uh oh.
what does A/N mean? i still dont know after reading all these amazing stories!

Author's Response: haha. author's note. a/n. haha.
why do they all get thank yous? what happenned? just wondering, i am not jeolous or anything(maybs a little)

Author's Response: haha. cause they reviewed every chapter wayyy back then.
IS SHE GOING TO GIVE BIRTH?!?! gOD I HAVE TO CARRY ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! BYE!

Author's Response: haha. BYE!
what will happen in the rest of the chapters if he already proposed?(4got to read the summary)

Author's Response: haha. yeah. idkk. you'll have to see!
2005-07-27 09:55:19
awww,omigosh i love dit and that was sooo sweet

100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000/10

*Liz*

Author's Response: aww thanks!!!
i really liked your story! it was great! i also realized while reading this last chapter that Harry and Ginny would alone have 6kids in Hogwarts at the same time! that is great!! lol but great job!!

Author's Response: thanks!!! haha. i know. haha.
almost too many kids lol
and harry has too many godkids you should have spread them out a little lol
but its really well written, i love your stories

Author's Response: i know. this was written before i grasped onto the concept that not everyone multipled like bunnies. hahah. thanks!
I like sugar quills. well... the thought of them anyway...
anyway, 10/10 :)
kisses!
Lisa

Author's Response: haha. me too.
=] thanks!
i am sorry but I could not read the story because of every single word was underlined!!

Author's Response: really??? oh, snap. i'm going to fix that now.
2005-05-31 02:09:13
Pretty good...It's just that I always pictured Harry proposing like without everyone else there,but this way was really cool too! =)

Author's Response: thanks!! yeah... you're probably right... whoops
2005-07-27 09:55:19
wow thats a lot of kids

Author's Response: hehe. i know.
Wow, that's a big family. Aww, happy ending. Very nice. Just a few spelling mistakes here and there. 10/10.

Author's Response: yeah, this is an old one...
2005-06-14 05:01:15
whos payton??

Author's Response: idkk , i haven't read this in forever. =]
oh! that was such a sweet ending to a story that i never wanted to end! 10/10

Author's Response: aww. thanks!
10/10

Author's Response: thanks!
no! not voldie! it can't be!why is harry so stupid? ick! 10/10

Author's Response: hehe. thanks!
yay! haryand giny! i'm so happy. these kinds of stories always make me happy! 10/10

Author's Response: hehe. me too.
why aren't they living together? harry and ginny should be living together! erg! 10/10! that was freaky tho, with her premature
labor-ness! eek!

Author's Response: hehe. i know. they should. but they are doing it properly.
what happened? eek! it's late! i'm gonna shower and then immediately (IMMEDIATELY) come right back and continue! actually, i take that back! i can't wait that long! i'll just read one more chapter! ya...ok! 10/10!!! darn cliffhangers!!!

Author's Response: aww. thanks for reading all my stories. it makes me happy. aww. hehe.

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