It's good, I like it a lot/... You really write a good Lucius! I am looking forward to se what happens at Hogwarts! Happy writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad no one's saying he's horribly out of character as of yet... I was fearing that. This is my first experience writing him, you see.
You'll get to see that soon, though. And thanks again for reviewing.
For a moment there I thought you were going to make him a ferret... (hihi) On a more serius note, I really enjoy your writing style... and after I have read this I stick to what I said in the forum... you should write what you want **cough** keep this story going **cough**
Author's Response: I probably would have, had the ferret been apart of the Zodiac. XD But I wanted to throw my own twist in there too...
Thank you, though. I appreciate it. And I will... Keep writing what I want and updating it, that is. ^_^;;
I'm not quite sure you have two prologues. I'm sure that this could have been Chapter One, or it could have been added to the first Prologue to make it longer. You place semi-colons in a lot of incorrect places and it threw off the flow of the story. Overall, it's a very interesting idea. I've never heard of Fruits Basket so I'm afraid I wouldn't see the connection. I'm curious as to why you chose a rabbit for the animal he transformed into. I like the interactions between Lucius and Draco, how Lucius teaches Draco to hate Muggleborns and all that purity garbage that some Pureblood wizards are fanatical about.
Author's Response: I suppose I made it have two prologues because... Well, I'm not one who likes to change time quickly in one chapter. I'm not sure why, it's just one of my pet peeves, I suppose. And I didn't make it chapter one because it's not where the main part of the fic is going to take place. Sorry if it really bothered you.
Thanks for telling me about those semi-colons. :) I'll be sure to look for those when I go to edit the chapter again.
As for the rabbit thing... I did some research, and on the particular website I was on, it showed that rabbits tend to have a lot of personality traits Draco has. Not 100% accurate or anything, but quite a few.
I'm glad you liked that part, though. ^_^ I wanted to give him a reason to really despise Muggles, I guess. And I like to show Father-Son moments.
Thanks for reviewing!
is it just me or is this exactly like Fruits Basket?
Author's Response: It is what I based it off of, like I said in my Author's Notes.
When I get more into the fic, I plan on adding more twists and stuff to it, to make it more... Pottery, I guess you could say. I just needed it to make sense to people who have never read the series; and all. o_o;