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FYI: 29 knuts= 1 sickle  and 17 sickles = 1 galleon so you probably want to change 500 knuts to 500 galleons .  Great story!

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yeah, its a little cheesy, but it was wonderful!!!

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I like it alot, but Luna's nice,& so is Tonks. I like how you changed some personalities around!

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that was cheesy, but i loved it...it was so sweet....

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ok most of it wasn't bad. but to make it way better, go into more of the story. didn't like how you ended it. but good over all.

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should of made it longer and the characters were all wack but i liked it anyway.

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heya...kwl story n i luv d film! lv ya me xXx

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Aha. Loved the ending. it was so expected, yet so unexpected in a way. =)

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Naah. Liked this better than the new movie. The movie is too... modernized! This is good=)

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knuts are the smallest currency..so 500 knuts isn't alot....

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@$#! Draco-Hermione shippers!  But once again your writing style made up for it!

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That is pretty good, I think that you have a very good writing style and it makes up for the story line.

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good

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it [i] was [/i] a cheap story line but good writing style.

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Great story!!!! hehehe!!!! its really like the original cinderella story!!! great job!!!! :)

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I llllllllllloooooooovvvveed it!!! Will there be a continuation of it?...I will be happy if you write a continuation...

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Yes, VERY cheesy. Well, it can't be helped with this story line. lol. You have a good writing style and you use description perfectly when need be but i can't say much about the plot though. The characters were very OoC but I guess with this plot line they couldn't really be anything else. It's a good fanfiction though I do think you could do one that is WAY better. You have good potential as a writer but you need to find a plot line that will be able to show it off at it's best. Good job!

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LOVED IT!!!!!! But whats pansy's secret?? i didn't get that one  xxx

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okay, you really need to get a  grip. Borin like hell. write something good for a change! stupid!

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hey goood! story if you on the forums send me a pm ok

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very cute! i liked it! xxx

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Hey Gold_Pheonix, your stories brilliant! I love it! Anyway...this is one of my faves, and I hope you check out my story(if it goes into limbo) its called: Taking Sides.

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hehe...it's so cute...i love it!!

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It might be cheesy but it's still really good! :)

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WILL SOMEONE PLEASE ANSWER ME! I sensed a Ginny Dracoo but it ended up Hermione draco im a bit confused was...did i miss a chapter it switched from ginnys P.O.V. to hermiones and i didnt see anything about a ball or secret admirer or anything Please xplain!

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