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Chapter: Answers and Still More Questions | Story: Irrational

This chapter is just so heart breaking. 

' Almost unwillingly, he met my eyes, his expression stricken as if he realised the insufficiency of what he said next. “He annoyed me.” '

This line literally broke me. I could barely read the rest of the chapter as my eyes were welling up. The explanation was just so well written, so believable. I could feel the emotion through the screen. 

Though I'm so glad it (hopefully!) seems like they're going to be able to work things out soon. 

Aside from my love for Audrey and Percy I also loved this chapter as it gave more information about the wand situation. I'm so intrigued to find out what's happening! 

Loved it as always! 

P.S. I love Ron's little cameos - please keep them coming. Also can't wait until she's introduced to all of the Weasleys! The chaos will be hilarious but I mainly want it just for Percy's reaction!

Author Response

Thank you, thank you! That line you mentioned about Fred has been getting me the most response I think of any line I've ever written. It was a tough scene to write but an important one to showcase Percy's regret and self-awareness.

Your Weasley-tastic chapter is just a few chapters away! ;)

Thank you for reading, friend, and for leaving these thoughtful reviews.

Melanie

Ohhh I loved this. Especially the stuff about Fred, the way Percy puts it all so simply but you can still feel all the weight behind it.  It's just so good but so sad.  Thanks for another fab chapter!

Author Response

Thank you! It was an emotionally tough scene to write. I'm glad you liked it!

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