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“So Nellie's a Seer,” Flynn stated in summary after Scorpius was done, and then rolled his eyes. “God, of course you are. “You’re such a bloody know-it-all it makes sense you’d know about the future, too.”

This killed me lolol

Omg the last part of this chapter was just nostalgia-fuelled and so, so poetic. Fantastic writing!!

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Thank you so much for this update ! I was so happy and excited to read this chapter and as always I have way too many things to say. When Milo asked his questions, I literally planned to asked those too once, I am Milo, Milo is me lol. 

I just want to start with Nellie and James for once because the are adorable and fiery and just right for each other. It's so sweet and heartwarming to read about their romance ! During the slug club, while they were talking about James' career and Nellie was happy for and proud of him, my mind immediately flashed back to chapter 24, when she described Rose and Scorpius who was beaming next to her like seeing her happy made him happy too. That's both a subtle and significant way to show and to slowly realize how in love she is with James (right ? That was a love declaration at the end ? ). I absolutely think she should fill James in on what's going on but I hate to say I kind of understand where she's coming from,  all I know is that James won't like her hiding that from him. Perhaps Nellie has a different perspective on her relationships with people whether it's friends,family,or romantic ones. Also, I just now caught on that James wants to be a curse-breaker and Nellie's cursed so it's quite fitting, I guess it was on purpose ? I remember their argument in chapter 15 and James talking about curse breaking in chapter 18, and Nellie's quite the enigma. 

Now my reviews aren't complete if I don't talk about Nellie's family and the curse. I was actually randomly walking last week talking about something entirely different and out of the blue, I realized that I had not considered the fact that Celeste Savant might be the name of the mystery woman, up until now I was convinced the book was old so the writer or the person mentioned in it must be already dead. And I actually read one of your answers to someone's review and it kind of confirmed the theory that it might her name. Do I read everything you write to find clues ? The answer would be yes. Did I re-read the entire story to find new clues in the little details ? Absolutely. Actually, I found out a super interesting, mind-blowing  information - Adam's owl is named Olmit and he didn't use it to send the book instead choosing an unknown owl ... so yup pretty pathetic research overall . I didn't really mind though, your story is as fabulous and enthralling as the first time I've read it. 

I can't stress on how wonderful your writing is, it's able to convey such emotions that I feel quite uniquely the nostalgia as the end of the term approaches, the happiness of a gathering with friends, the stress about the future that lies ahead and the love between two unique and amazing characters. Thank you again for this wonderful story, I love losing my mind over all the little details - Astoria's letter, everything information Adam reveals, etc. It's quite scary that I could almost recite what happens in every chapter from memory, but as I've said in the last review, anything can happen now, it's just a matter of time and order like who wants to go first - the Unspeakables ? the Pureblood ? How long till a horrifying vision strikes ? 

Thank you again, this story is beyond wonderful ! Absolutely do not want to see it end, I'd read anything you write honestly!

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As always I read your reviews like 100 times because I love them so much so once again THANK YOU FOR THIS!! 

1. It's crazy that you brought up the similarities between how Nellie was proud of James and Scorpius and Rose because that's exactly what I was trying to go for in my own mind!!
2. I definitely think Nellie should fill James in (I mean OBVIOUSLY) but again, it's not characteristic of her to - she didn't even tell two of her best best friends about her own mother's death for 6 years of knowing them! 
3. James is a curse breaker and Nellie is cursed - that might be important later, but maybe not really as important as you'd think. You'll get what I mean soon.
4. Okay you're actually the only person to ever even bring up the name in the book (and you may or may not have just hit the nail on the freaking head) so props for you to all of this!
5. You will actually understand the reason why for the anonymous owl change next chapter (chapter 30; chapter 29 is up now!!) and that's actually also insane you picked it up - there's a huge reason for it and it ties in a TON of things together!
6. There's so much nostalgia in this story and it's really sometimes heart-wrenching for me to write but I think it's also just life, growing up and getting older and beginning to feel these things!

You've brought up so many fantastic points AND are so close to discovering the entire plotline that it's really amazing to me so this was definitely the best review I have probably ever seen and THANK YOU for it!!! I can't wait to hear what Easter eggs you will find in chapter 29!

Thank you again x1000! xx Ella

YAY! You updated! Really love this story. As always, it's amazing. It's just the perfect mix of fun and suspense you know. Gosh, the "conversations" between Mia and Flynn. Hilarious. The tension between Nellie and Calliope was so well-written and the details about Calliope.. just fabulous, i legit both fear and weirdly love her slightly!! I'm really excited for the next chapter. AH. I don't even know what to say. I'm rambling. Honestly just waiting for all this mystery surrounding the curse to unfold because each chapter my mind's just blown.

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Yay! I'm so glad you do! There will be a TON of Mia and Flynn coming up and even a bit more of Calliope so stay tuned for that! For now the new chapter is posted and I hope you enjoy it (or parts of it - you'll know what I mean...)

Thanks for the update, you made my life - and ruined my sleep but you're absolutely forgiven! I can honestly say i am completely and totally in love with this story. The characters are all pretty cool and so well-written - once again, i wish i was actually in Hogwarts living my best life  but i genuinely would want for it to be with your characters and your plot!!! 
The story is gripping and so so so interesting.Your writing is freaking amazingg and flows super well. Everything's so intriguing like who did her mother want to save? whats the hidden truth behind the family curse?
Love the concept, hate this is ending, love James - he's now my official favorite  imaginary character- ,love his group of friends, love Nellie, love her group of friends, love everything about this story. I need more asap!!!

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Sorry about your sleep but I'm so glad you're liking the story! As for your questions, they will be answered in a pivotal moment in the story (Chapter 31 and 32) but keep them in mind!! The new chapter has just been posted and I hope you enjoy it!

Oh WOW! That's all I've got. End of this review.Joking but WOW is pretty good to describe the awesomeness of this story. N E V E R have i experienced so much secondhand emotions.the amount of energy and love between Nellie and James could fuel a rocketship to saturn. Love all the sweet moments and little details.Why do i feel like I'm the one cursed and that I might have to sacrifice myself!?!!?!! Seriously the way you write Nellie makes ME feel like I am her and i can't express how much i love that feeling! Btw,love Slughorn he's such an interesting character and you write him to perfection, he's everything i imagined him to be with Harry's children. Love love this, can't wait for more, you're amazing.xx

Author Response

WOW thank you!! I'm so glad you're feeling the emotions in this story - I try to challenge myself to describe sort of intangible feelings and I'm so happy you notice them! Also Slughorn is just sooo classic and I definitely have to give all credit to JKR for that man but it's so much fun to write him interacting with the Potters!! Thank you again for reviewing and I hope you enjoy the chapter just posted!

How ...How do you write so well, how is it possible, i love love the plot and your writing is just phenomenal, all the James and Nellie moments make me swoon, are they actually admitting they're in love ? I reread it ten times to be sure sure : Be awake James next time pleaaase. My heart breaks for Nellie because the world as she knows it is changing but boy do i love this character and all of the others really. Your James is my favorite James, i love how deep and intriguing and clever and fun he is and love his chemistry with Nellie. Can't wait to know more, so so so  sad to see it ending soon, i need this story in my life !!!

Author Response

Thank you so so much for this! ONE of them is admitting they're in love, the other just maybe said something while her partner was sleeping.but I think the chapter I just posted will clear all of that right up :) Thank you again for reviewing and I'm so glad you like and appreciate the complexity of James!

i ? just ? love ? this ? fic ? so ? much ? 
i love everything about it, from the way you narrate scenes to your characterization of the " known characters". and let's not forget all the created characters ! ugh, it's all i've ever wanted and more. Nellie is relatable and fun, but also realistically flawed and complex, which i adore btw, and everything you write is magnificent in my humble opinion. The end when Nellie was looking at James was just ugh swoon-worthy! it's basically impossible not to feel enthralled and excited reading something this good.  
i’m sorry i’m not the most eloquent or verbose of readers, but uuugh i love this fic so much thank you for sharing it with the world !

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i? just? love? your? review? so? much? 
Thank you for everything you've said!! I am so so happy you're enjoying the story and especially the characters who are SO fun to write!! Thank you sooo much and the next chapter is posted now!

I almost fell out of my couch when I saw you updated. Every single one of your chapters is filled with so much humour and so many brilliant lines that make me stop and chuckle as I read this. Flynn and Mia are hilarious. The way you set scenes is also unbelievable. The ending and this in particular killed me ,"They were boyish and unlimited, free, and I realised that I loved watching James Potter, as he joked and laughed and just was. I’d used to be bothered by all of the things I didn’t know about him, didn’t understand what it meant when he glanced at me to make sure I was still looking and laughing and noticing, but now that I did it was glorious, like he was a God - not immortal and untouchable, but imperfectly divine.Just divine. "
Oh my goodness...Stop.My heart. That was perfection. Honestly, i’m unworthy of such perfection. You've done a superb job making your characters real and unique! They're just so vivid and realistic and I love reading about them because you create such a brilliant cast! Albus is perfect, he says the right thing and understands so much around him, he’s perfect, i really like the differences between him and James, it makes sense that they’re not the closest siblings yet but they are both beautiful and extraordinary people and will continue to grow as such. So curious to see what’s going to happen next. Thank you. This is amazing.

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This review made me so so happy. I am sooo glad you liked that little paragraph - fun fact I wasn't even going to include it but last minute thought of it! Your review seriously makes me blush and just so pleased so thank you so so much!!

It's official, I'm legitimately in love with Nellie and James or Jellie as I call them in my head and you're one of the best writers ever. 
This story has it all-Suspense, romance (of course), humorous scenes!! Starting to read this was the best decision of my life, i WILL 100 % cry when it ends. 
The mechanism of this curse still leaves me with a few questions specially about the women in her family and their sacrifices. WHO did her mother die for ?  If I don't read more, I legit might explode. 
Loved it, fantastic, fantastic story.
Raquelle xx.

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Wow Jellie I LOVE this ship name!! So glad you like their dynamics and the characters! As for your question...that will end up being a pivotal part in the story and will not be revealed until later! The new chapter is posted so please don't hate me both for it's content (you'll see) and for how long it took me to get it up! Thank you!

Holy Bejesus.

Ahhk! 

Love this story!

I am secretly enjoying all this seer mystery.What I love about Nellie is how she reacts to different situations in her life and also like not, it’s almost like she doesn’t let herself catch a break in between crisis. But I want to give her a hug.

I laughed out loud during this chapter, def not a fan of bugs, i don’t even like sitting on grass because i’m scared one of them is gonna crawl in so Q i feel you.Your characters should get the awards for being the best. Flynn makes me laugh so much, all of them do with their unique sense of humor.

Love love James, love his character development, love everything about him.

I absolutely adore the campfire scene and hope you update soon! I cannot wait to see what will happen.

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Holy Bejesus what a fantastic review - thank you! Nellie DEFINITELY does not let herself catch a break (in the new chapter posted you'll see what I mean) but I'm so happy you enjoy the characters and James and Nellie! Thank you again for your review!

I love this so so much. I've been checking every day for updates so when you did I actually had to take a minute to prepare myself because I was so excited. Basically the Nellie/James dynamic gives me life. Definitely the best chars I ever read. I love his friends as well, they’re such great characters. This is so so well written and all the characters are really well developed and the plot is so good with all the twists and turns.Truly.Absolutely.Amazing. Please update asap! I'm really looking forward to reading more.

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Ah thank you so much! SO sorry the last update took so long but it's out now! THANK YOU for your review!!

You updated, THANK YOU!  I have been reading this chapter nonstop (I even gave up my precious study time). Oh this was a god chapter. I love love love love the sarcasm and lighter moments with Nellie’s friends. Rose is awesome. Calliope's a total b*tch and deserved to be put back in her place but her scenes are epic.

AwI love James and Nellie, they’re goals! Also when is Al gonna get some love? He’s amazing. 

Hoping Nellie  gets some more clarity and serenity soon so sad :( and cause i selfishly want even more answers..cause i became a real addict to this, ugh,yeah, I can get addicted to wonderful stories like that. Like, really addicted!This story's soo well written, i’d read you describe paint dry, I need, need, need to read more. Thanks for this story!

Author Response

Thank you so so much!! I'm so glad you like the dialogue and the characters and I'm sure Al will find love eventually! And wow "read you describe paint dry" that's the best thing anyone's said to me in a long time so THANK YOU and I hope you enjoy the new chapter!

Awesome chapter! I loved it. You are very talented. Really really curious to read the rest, technically every curse has loopholes? What about Astoria’s, hypothetically would Scorpius’s daughter have it and if so is it breakable too? Thanks for this update,can’t wait for more.

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Thank you so much! Very astute - every curse DOES have loopholes...what could Nellie's loophole be? And hypothetically yes, but as J.K. Rowling wrote it the curse skips generations haphazardly! Thank you again for your review!

Um.
I really cannot express my feelings about this story properly, but I can’t tear myself away from it. I get the urge to read it again and again after every update.
It was a wonderful, beautifully written chapter!
Your writing is perfect for every situation you write about. What I mean to say is, that the way you write is very versatile, and I love it! You’re able to write various different situations wonderfully. 
Loved it a lot!

Author Response

Um. THANK YOU for such a nice review - it makes me so happy that you're enjoying my writing and the story!

I love this chapter. Your writing is exceptional as always. I love how the real conversations between Nellie and James is very well integrated into their playful nature as a couple. I especially love the end of this chapter. It is so achingly beautiful and just leaves you wanting more from Nellie and James. I’m beginning to grow very afraid of how this story will end so please don’t break my heart! xoxo

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Ah - thank you so much! I love writing dialogue so I'm so glad you've enjoyed that aspect of James and Nellie! I may have just broken your heart a bit with the chapter just posted (SORRY) but I promise it'll be necessary for later :)

aw i really liked this chapter

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I'm so glad!! Thank you for reviewing!

Absolutely love your story, it's the only WIP story I read,it’s too good to be allowed! I was so happy when i saw you'd posted! Amazing chapter as ever! You write with style and complete fluidity and I can't wait to see where you’re going to take this over the last chapters. James and Nellie are very real and their special moments absolutely heart wrenching.I really, really, really can’t wait.

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Thank you so so much! I hope you enjoy (or at least understand) the chapter I have just posted!!

This story is mind-blowing. Every chapter has my jaw dropped. Every chapter has my emotions jumbled. Every character is astonishing. The plot is astounding. Your writing is SO REMARKABLE IT DESERVES CAPITAL LETTERS. I’ve been glued to this for the past few days and I swear to god canceled plans to keep reading. I feel sadness, I feel hurt, I feel hatred, I feel love, I feel happiness and the way I can visualize every detail blows my mind. I’m so scared for the rest of it, i don’t want for it to end, its so so addicting, can’t turn away from it. Might have to go read it again and again, please send help lol. thank you for this story.

Author Response

Wow - thank you so so much! Your review literally made me so happy SO THANK YOU (so much thanks that it also deserves capital letters)! The new chapter is up and the ones to come are going to be jampacked with information so stay tuned and thank you again!

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