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I loved all this drama and omg the vision at the end  so interesting, i just wanna drop everything and read quicker but alas life’s disgustingly busy

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This was a rollercoaster omg and katria can get socked in the face i would pay to see it honestly

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Honestly same

THANK YOU for yet another flawless update! There are so many things to address. 

I'll just start with Mia and Flynn since I love the idea of them together - their arguments are always hilarious and the fact that they can't even agree on who kissed who is so like them. I also love Scorpius and Rose together, the little scenes you give us of them warm my heart just like the scenes with James's friends. There are so many characters and each of them is so well-thought out and developed and endearing. 

Now Kato, I don't love the idea that he did that, because he knows she has James, but reading the scene, I'm not sure he himself realized what he was doing until it was too late - he clearly has been hiding his feelings for quite some time. And he seemed to mention that Henry did something a bit worse than just freak out and tell Nellie he loves her when he saw her hug Flynn ? It definitely sounds like it. Also, he seems to think he'll be better and safer for her but to be honest I'm not so sure that'd be the case, it'd be a bit like Will and Mia, where eventually Nellie might grow bored. Not that James is perfect ( nor is she thankfully) , but above the obvious chemistry they have, I think Nellie needs someone to challenge her a bit, to be honest with her and to question her actions and push her when she's so set in doing things her way while understanding that there's a lot of vulnerability underneath it all and where it comes from.And kind of match her temper which James does perfectly.  Just a thought . 

Which brings us to the dilemma of the book which relates to what I've just said and the previous chapter. I think that at this point, the only way Nellie will face her visions and the content of the book is if someone sits her down and forces her to or tells her the truths she doesn't want to hear to her face - Adam comes in handy here. 

Now as for James, i don't know where that conversation came from but Flynn wouldn't lie about it and i don't actually imagine James doing that so i don't know what to believe. It's reductive of Kato to think James is the root of all of Nellie's problems - he obviously doesn't know the rest but still. I absolutely love and admire how despite Nellie's perspective during this chapter you can clearly see James's emotions and hurt pouring through. And his insecurities too, i mean he even admitted he doesn't think she likes him and that's so vulnerable for once and - not cool-. The way you did it is also so clever, like with Marina for example, it's not her business but by coming to Nellie, i think she highlights first that she's protective of James but also the hurt James might be feeling and how much he truly cares about Nellie.  

I'll also mention that I've been obsessed with imagining Moose's reaction - dealing with this situation inside a Quidditch team is one thing but when a match is coming soon ? Plus, Nellie hasn't been very focused lately so I'm sure he'll have lots to say.

I love reading every new chapter and the old ones too and sharing with you what I think and I want to thank you so much for all the time and effort you put in this story. It's mind-blowing how amazing every word of every chapter is so thank you again a thousand times.

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Your reviews always make my LIFE so THANK YOU! As usual I'll try to go in order:
1. Henry definitely got very upset with Nellie when she hugged Flynn, and it won't be mentioned again but it was more along the lines of emotional toxicity
2. I completely agree- Kato is Nellie's "Will" and is too safe and unchallenging for her, even if they do have a tiny bit of lingering chemistry
3. The James conversation is definitely resolved in the next chapter and you were right not to believe that James would actually say that!
4. This isn't even an answer to one of your points I'm just consistently blown away by your analyses and careful reading and so thank you a MILLION once again!
xx Ella

Hey! It's adrift from TDA, just wanted to let you know I posted your banner in the dm on TDA! Sorry for not seeing it till now, I've been out of the loop for a little bit!

Love the story, btw

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Thank you so so so much I really appreciate it!!

God I felt like I was watching a football game or like a TV serie with my favorite couple yelling " No no no no , don’t " and so on , I’ll spare you the details except the people around me now think I’m crazy. Hogwarts is a gossip mill , this school’s unbelievable and Katria you write her so well , I love to hate her . What’s up with Marina being protective of James ? This is my favorite story , can’t wait for Nellie to finally learn the truth , thank you!

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Well I hope you regain your reputation lol but thank you so much for your kind words!! Nellie has definitely gotten some truth in the next chapter which is now up! Marina is protective of James merely because she and him have had a long relationship in the past of both friendship and sexual intimacy, and as a result she feels a bit of a claim on him.

Oooo I really enjoyed all this drama. Your writing style is really incredible, and all the scenes flowed really nicely. The characters are always completely true to themselves ( i was just like classic Mia and Flynn ) which is quite an amazing feat considering the fact that you’ve built most of them from scratch inside your genius mind. Poor Nellie can’t seem to catch a break, Adam’s explanation is much much needed so I can’t wait! Btw, is Trelawney still teaching Divination at Hogwarts in your story?

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Thank you SO much! I love the characters I've made and its so rewarding when others do too! Trelawney is NOT still teaching however.

Great chapter!! Hopefully we find out all about Nellies abilities next chapter. It’s so frustrating that she refuses to even deal with something that clearly has such an effect on her! I can’t wait for Cornelia to have some peace of mind about what’s happening to her so she can start dealing with it. It seems like everyone else knows what’s happening to her except Nellie.

I hope you revisit what Flynn said about James in the next chapter. I doubt Flynn would lie about having heard something like that, right? But also James clearly likes Nellie, I’m just so confused! 

I’ve also noticed that when James fights with Nellie he always brings up Marina...I wonder why that is? Nellie hasn’t indicated to James that she’s insecure about Marina, is I wonder why he is always inserting that into their arguments.

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You certainly will find out about Nellie's abilities in the next chapter (out now)! I think James brings up Marina because it is their biggest fight to date. Everything you hoped for did appear in chapter 27 so I hope you enjoy reading!

Boy did my emotions run high during this chapter ! How could you ? I love the way you write and portray every single emotion and character. Quidditch is sure gonna get quite awkward. Hopefully we’re gonna get some answers soon about the book and all since Adam’s coming, litteraly can’t wait !

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Thank you so much for your kind review!! The new chapter is up now and it is FILLED with answers.

OH MY GOD. This chapter was one ride of emotions. Sometimes things need a little drama but please Kato stay in the friendzone.That was quite a turn of events. I'm so glad the truth was out before the end of this chapter, i was legit worried for a minute. And oh god, the last scene between James/Nellie? it was one of the best part of the chapter - so sweet and vulnerable.Each update makes me eager for the next chapter especially if Nellie's FINALLY opening that book. This was fantabulous and I can't wait for more. love you xx

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Ah thank you so so much! I love writing those intimate scenes between Nellie and James - it really makes a difference! Thank you again and I hope you enjoy the new chapter posted!

Every chapter is a bundle of perfectly written perfection. There's always a mix of humor, action, a bit of mystery. Now if you don't want me to lose it, would Nellie finally pick up that book and read it ? What happened to you lol ? You were so eager to have it in the first chapter. Now I'm talking to the characters, look what you're making me do. It fits her character of always pushing down and ignoring what bothers her until it blows in her face so i'm not surprised but still very much excited and eager to know about it! Love love your story, thank you for everything , please feed me with the rest as soon as you can so i don't go crazy. xx Raquelle

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Wow - thank you so much! Nellie is FINALLY breaching the secrets of the book in the chapter posted so I hope you enjoy!

Your writing style is amazing! The suspense and petty high school drama intertwined flows so well. I am glad that James and Nellie sorted out that cheating drama quick because Nellie really doesn't have time to deal with that. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Thank you so so so much! The next chapter is up now and is thankfully light on the drama!

I'm speechless and you have the nerve to ask if everyone expected any of this ? If i did, would i be writing a review in such a state ? i'm still not okay and i've reread it like 20 times, honestly  i'm STILL recovering from chapter 22... and the ones before that..and the ones after that.. and the whole story actually. 

and hello?! Can you blame me ?! WHAT a story ! a plot that does not stop giving- always exciting and so thrilling. I love how you discuss and include a whole spectrum of the teenage condition- from benign crushes on older guys and mean girls-you really capture the delicate compromise of writing the realistic narrative of a teenage girl while  in parallel, including a young woman who has been through a lot / still does while being  in crazy circumstances like the pureblood community and her dreams and headaches - it's done so well, so magnificently, so perfectly. your writing is magnificent. i'm in love, i'm obsessed you are so talented. your writing is raw and yet so sophisticated and poetic. Would you say Nellie is a bit like you or you just imagine her as totally different ? 

I just want to stress on how well you write James. I've read so many characterisation of him and they're often cliche and exaggerated and lousy and just wrong. He's so intriguing from afar and even more lovable when you get to know him. his slight weaknesses and insecurities, that's hot and endearing and irresistible and i'm in love seriously. 

love, love, love it. feel like i could go on for ages but i'd only bore you. thank you so so much for such a beautiful read! please update soon! i'm so into this story !

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Oh my gosh - THANK YOU! This review made me so so happy. Nellie is very very much like me in many ways, but she is also more subdued and controlled than I am! Thank you thank you thank you, your kind words absolutely made my LIFE  and I hope you enjoy the new chapter!

This is such a beautiful, emotional roller-coaster of a story and I absolutely adore it! Nellie having that headache was my favourite scene to read, you can feel the pain as you’re reading,  I cannot wait to see how this story continues!

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Thank you so so much! The new chapter is up and I hope it lives up to your expectations!

It’s been so long since i binge read something so beautiful and amazing and I am just so full of emotions. I'm not ready to be back in the real world right now, where these characters and these places don't actually exist - i was sucked into Nellie’s mind for real, she’s absolutely my new favorite fanfiction character. How you write her so well is beyond me.Phenomenal story.

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Wow - Thank you so much! I'm so glad you feel connected to Nellie in that way!!

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