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The ending... suspicious e__e
Also, love James

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while these 2 chapters have me feeling very spoilt, I must say I am quite greedy for more!! Hopefully you get some more chapters out for us soon! This story is riveting and really leaves you on the edge of your seat, seeing as new and vague information comes out every chapter about Nellie or Scor or the Burke family etc. So excited for what’s to come !

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I just finished a monster of a chapter, and two more are on the horizon so there you go! Thank you so much - definitely lots of less vague information will be coming out about Nellie's family!

Two chapters!? I feel spoilt!! Incredible writing as ever and I just love Nellie''s character development. You really should be proud of this incredible piece of writing

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Thank you so so much for your kind words and reviewing! The new chapter is posted now!

Wow I read this whole story in the last couple of days it is so good! You are such a talented writer! I really like how the relationship between Nellie and James has developed. The scenes between the two of them are so electric. The enemies to lovers dynamic has been pulled off so well. I'm looking forward to more of their arguments lol. I like how in depth each of the characters in the friend group is, each having unique strengths/flaws. It'll be interesting to see if Nellie opens up to James, and perhaps see more Rose/Scorpius? I'm so excited for all the drama!

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Ah thank you so much! All of that will be coming up soon, and certainly many more arguments between James and Nellie! The new chapter is up now and I hope you enjoy it!

Wow, you’re spoiling us with all these fast updates! I can’t wait to read the next chapter. I love how James finally has an insight on Nellie’s life. Most of their arguments dem to develop from him bringing up her family so now he finally might understand why that is. He must feel so guilty though! But I’m glad they got the chance to talk and that Nellie is alright. I’m also really happy that Nellie and Scorpius made up. Also, so happy we got to see Adam! Interesting that he seems to have an insight into these headaches though.and what’s happening in 3 weeks? Maybe an anniversary? Maybe when her mother left??! Can’t wait to see what you’ll come up with next!

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Hm, maybe Adam does have an insight...as for your guesses on what happens in three weeks, they seem pretty spot on! The new chapter is posted now and let me know what you think! Thank you for such an insightful review!

Please let their relationship not crumble! They've been through so much! I was also wondering if we're going to be getting an explanation as to why so many people think James is callous and uncaring? Is there something specific that happened or is that their general impression of him?

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I think that's just their general perception of him, and most people don't think that - I think Adam's just more of an overprotective brother and still sees Nellie as this innocent kid that needs to be shielded from everything (sort of - you'll see). But for example Benjy and Beck don't like James because of the way he behaves in Quidditch, and Flynn just doesn't like anyone :) The next chapter is out now so you can see whether or not the relationship is maintained!

Look at you, spewing these chapters out so quickly! We must have been really good this year to get these Christmas gifts. Thanks and looking forward to more! Btw, still trying to figure out your title. Hope no time turners involved.

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Ooh, no time turners but definitely keep the title in mind. It'll start popping up in a few chapters, again and again and again. The new chapter is out now - I hope you enjoy it! Let me know your thoughts!

Thank you so much for all of these updates ! It was such a nice surprise to come back to. 

Where do I even begin, I mean wow, I have so many questions about her mother, Adam, but i trust that you’ll answer them like you said. 

I like that we are finally learning more about James and Nellie , I think they both have a bit of growing up to do but they’re still young and Nellie has been through a lot. I’m sure that with time she’ll realise that she’s stronger than she realises and will grow more confident in both herself and her abilities just like Astoria wrote in her letter. 

I’d love to read more about Harry and Ginny in other circumstances but they act like real parents should. Lily is my new favourite for sure, i hope we’ll see more of her ! I still don’t know if she tells Nellie to be careful with James for his sake or hers but maybe both ? 

Your story is , as I’ve said before, incredibly  well-written and has it all - drama, jokes and feels so real because there is no pretend of perfection in all the characters . 

Can’t wait to read more but thank you so much for all these quick updates once again.

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They both definitely have growing up to do (illustrated by the end of chapter 20, which is out now!) but I think they're both doing their best! Lily will certainly pop up again, and I think she warns Nellie for the sake of James - she's rather protective even though she's only a Fourth Year. Thank you so much for your kind words, and I really hope you enjoy the newest chapter!

this story is simply just stunning..i have no other words to describe it. you are a genius. thank you for continuing to share your work with us. it inspires me greatly

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Wow - thank you absolutely so much! The new chapter is out now and I hope you enjoy it!!

This is literally my favorite story! Can't wait for the next update

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Thank you so much! The newest chapter is out now and I hope you like it!

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