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Chapter: Chapter Fourteen | Story: The After Before

FINALLY! Love love love them and this story you're so freaking talented

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OMG! (It’s a lot of G’s and exclamation marks, but I have no idea if they’ll show up in the actual review so—) (Yes i might be screaming rn) 
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so omg it finally happened and im absolutely LIVING for their interactions and ugh they’re both so attractive 
also, as always, love your writing

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I absolutely love this story!!! Your writin is phenomenal and the tension between Nellie and James is so palpable. you truly have a gift! Excited for the next chapter :)

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Thank you so much for your kind words you don't know how much they mean to me!

Your update really made my day!

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I'm so glad! A new update is out now!

omg yas finally. I hope we get more Fred scenes and James and Nellie are such good and complex characters. so yeah please please update soon please

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Fred will definitely be in chapter 17, as well as in 18, and 20, and 21...He's here to stay!

Thank you for updating ! 
What a lovely chapter , Fred is so cute and as usual Nellie’s group of friends is an interesting bunch ! 
They finally kissed , I love that we never know how their conversations is gonna end but why leave her there James haha 
The scene was so well written and intense , I can’t wait to read the next chapter !

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They're conversations can always go either way since they're both so stubborn and so quick to get angry! Thank you so much for reviewing!!

WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN, NO UPDATES, NO NOTE. Happy to see that you are back again, this story is the only reason that I log in to this site anymore. You are such a good writer so please take care of yourself and update more chapters.
Love, the fan with to much time on her hands

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SO SORRY, BUT TWO MORE ARE OUT NOW!

Wow what a chapter! James and Nellie finally finally adknowdeged there is something between them! I love Fred playing match maker. Although I feel so bad for Nellie about James’ complete 360 after their kiss. Nothing can ever be simple with them, can it? But then again, that’s part of what makes them so interesting. Also I love Nellie’s cheesy puns. I can’t bee-lieve you wouldn’t make me your equal—that’s so something I would do. I’m super excited to see the next chapter if that’s when things are start going to pick up again. I’m really curious to learn more about Nellies visions (it seems like she’s a seer or some sort) and I recently reread this story and I remember the strange women at the beginning of this story who made her nervous. And I know it was mentioned that Nellie normally get dragged to another ball during the winter holidays so maybe they’ll meet again? I would also love to learn more about Nellies mom, Veronica! Why did she leave? Where is she now? What would Nellie do if she ran into her? Thanks for the update and I can’t wait for the next one!

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Ah, with my new update clearly nothing will ever be simple with the two of them (for the time being). Hmm, a seer...that's a very interesting idea - I would hang onto that! Veryyy intuitive remembering the woman at the beginning of the story, since she may or may not be appearing very soon...and as for Veronica's whereabouts, that will be revealed much sooner than you may think! Thank you so much for reviewing and I hope you let me know your thoughts on the next chapters!

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