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Chapter: Chapter Eight | Story: The After Before

i just LOVE the insane attraction between James and Nellie!! It's so funny and so serious and also moves the plot along  great!!!

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“Nellie,” Scorpius said to me, very slowly. “You will never have a spleen. This is not temporary.”

This entire exchange had me dying lol, like the entire thing was just hilarious & I was grinning like an idiot

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loving this chapter! love how james checked on nellie. definitely addicted to this story already - THANK YOU!!

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THANK YOU for your review! The next chapter is posted!

okay, one: screw finnigan, deserves a place in hell for putting nellie through so much out of prejudice.
two: i absolutely Loved James in this chapter and that’s saying smth bc I’ve wanted to deck him for a while haha 
three: i LIVE for the interactions between nellie and her friends; they’re hilarious. your dialogues are incredible and so is your imagery ~

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Yep Finnigan is the WORST but James and Nellie are growing!

absolutely fantastic!! The flow of the story and of the dialogue is amazing and on point, and the character development is awesome! Can't wait for more to come, please update soon!

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I have updated again! Please let me know what you think, thank you so much!!

Hey ! THANK YOU SO MUCH for posting a new chapter ! You made me so happy, it's one of the best fan fiction ever so i was hoping you would come back on the website when it was up again and you did , thank you again . 
As for the new chapter, I was in the middle of re-re-reading the story and I was so excited to continue with James and Nellie, thank god she's okay and that she believed James didn't try to kill her , I still adore their dialogue and interactions , I was a bit terrified when Nellie said she thought she liked Kato , they work better as friends and with James it's just so much more intense  , you write them wonderfully , you have such a way for details and description that is unlike any writer and you're so funny lol , the way they tease Nellie was hilarious. And again I think I said that in another review on an earlier chapter but you are able to mix just the right amount of fun, mystery and drama , you're just amazing and i can't wait for more, thank you again so much.

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Thank you so much! I try to bring the characters to life with humour and little quirks so I am glad you like it! New chapter out now and another will be out next week!

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