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Wow - your quidditch writing is absolutely amazing!! Holy crap, what an amazing and visual chapter!!

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What a crazy few chapters!! definitely gripping, i can’t wait to keep reading i need to see if Nellie’s okay but how amazing is your writing and plot seriously pure brilliance. Love Nellie and James best characters ever

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ah i was SO happy when they won but omg nellie :(

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Please update soon! I was going to comment on chapter 9 but it says there is an error getting the chapter so I will comment here instead- this story is fantastic and I’m so excited for the drama to come! Nellies moms backstory as well as Scorpius’ moms backstory are very intriguing and I’m very excited to see where you take them!! Can’t wait for chapter 10 and everything beyond that:)

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I've just updated so now there are 11 chapters posted and another two on their way today!  Nellie's mother's backstory will become the most pivotal part of this story, so keep an eye out for small hints about her! Thank you for reviewing and I hope to hear your comments on the new chapter!

I didn't know we could rate stories! I'm so sorry for giving you 1/10 accidentally!!

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Haha no problem!

So I just read this entire story in one sitting! I can't seem to access the last two chapters normally (but managed to read them using the printer version) so I'll review here! I love this fic so much! Nellie and her friends are so wonderfully fleshed out I would enjoy reading about them even without any JSP related stuff! The trivia night reminded me a lot of the Office episode! Also, I LOVE BECK OMFG GIVE ME MORE BECK SHE NEEDS HER OWN STORY! I'm still confused about the letter though. I reread it twice and still didn't understand the gist of it. Is Astoria Nellie's mother? What's happening?

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I am so glad you like it!! Writing the friends interactions is definitely one of my favorite parts about this story, and DON'T WORRY there will of COURSE be more Beck!! The letter is from Astoria, who was Scorpius's mother. They were all very close (I might have talked about this more in the first few chapters) before Astoria passed away at the beginning of their Third Year. Nellie's mother is someone else entirely!

I’m not sure if you’ll ever read this, but if you do just know that there are still people out here who want you to keep going with your story! You left us on an absolute cliffy, and I’m dying to know what happens next! Please consider using this site to continue your work, as I haven’t been able to find your stories elsewhere. Thank you so much for your incredible storytelling:)

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Thank you SO MUCH!! I will be updating regularly on here again, so please please please keep reading and review!

Hello! I've been reading some of the other reviews, a lot of which are expressing their sadness over the closing of HPFF. 

I really like this story, so I hope that you continue to post elsewhere. I'd recommend either fanfiction(dot)net, or hphpff (or both, which many do). Of course, it's not HPFF which I know we are all ridiculously attached to, but the point is the story doesn't have to end here!

If you find somewhere else to post, please let us know!

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I will be posting this on hphpff!! The story will go up soon, but you can find it easily - my pen name is still delacourweasley and I will post a link onto this story once I have it up! Thank you so much for keeping up with me and this story!!

Please don't give up on the story! It's so so great and already one of my favorites and honestly I'd keep up with it wherever else you decide to post it! Cannot wait for the new chapter, so excited to read more! :)

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I didn't! I am posting new chapters weekly and I hope you'll continue to read!

I FINALLY made it back to this site after a crazy couple of months life wise.

First, let me say thank you for your response. I love knowing what I'm seeing and feeling in these stories is exactly what you intended!

I love in this one how you capture the natural ebb and flow of a sports game, especially a team game. You bring in these moments of fast paced action and reaction, and then the centering of Nellie being a player that has her own personal goal in the game as well. It was dynamic and even got my heart going in moments!

I like this pull with James at the end, in concern and still in slight adversary mode. I'm interested to see how that will play off when Nellie awakens.

All this to say, I'm glad I came back to read this one.

I am sad this site has made an announcement to close its doors as I so want to keep reading this story, if you head anywhere else in this fanfiction world please let me know! I'd love to stay in with your writing.

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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind review! I will definitely be continuing on this website, so stay tuned!

I love this story so much, it's so well written and the characters are amazing, I hope you continue to post this on another site after hpff is gone :'( it's too good to be left unfinished!

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I am heartbroken about HPFF. I really don't know any other site like this to put my story on, although I so badly want people to keep reading how it progresses. Thank you so much for your kind review - it really means a lot!!!

James is actually concerned!! They have such interesting interactions, and it's really unusual for someone to write chemistry between characters and for you to actually feel it, so amazing job! Can't wait for more!

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Love this story! You’re an amazing writer.

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Thank you so much! New chapter out now!

this chapter was so captivating. and I wonder what's up with Nellie, hope she's ok! can't wait to see where the story goes:)

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The new chapter will reveal all of that so if you are still on this website give it a read!

Another great chapter! You said you don't really enjoy writing quidditch scenes, but this flowed really nicely, so nice job. I love how competitive Nellie is, and how insistent she is on snapping at James, even when she is dying. 

I really hope you update soon and often! I don't usually like to follow WIPs because I hate waiting, but sometimes I can't help it. 

Happy writing xx

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I've been updating about once a week since HPFF came back! Hope you'll read and review again!

Please update very soon, I hate cliffhangers like that! You're portrayal of quidditch games is fantastic, and I think you write them perfectly according to Nellie's perspective of the game. This story is AMAZING and I'm super excited to see where you take it considering the dark undertones you've let creep in. I love it, and honestly I must admit I'm waiting for more backstory on Nellie, which I think will be really fascinating considering what you did with Crime of Passion. I also really love Nellie's sharp wit and Shakespeare quotes; it's the perfect combination! So excited for what's to come, please update soon! All my love :)

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You are absolutely astute when you say "dark undertones," and that will fully come into effect in 2 different ways, around chapters 16 and 20! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, and I hope you'll continue to read!

OML


AMAZING 
FANTASTIC 
PERFECT

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER 

OMG


it is beautiful 

why did they target her so much! meanies 


i want another chapter 

gosh i want to know everything 


ahhh

please update soon

i love their quiddtich team 

i think the players are my fave charcters 
well other than Jack and cecily 
idk why but i don't like them as much 

love this story so my update had bettter be soon

love from me xxx

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I'm sooo glad you're liking it!!! There are lke four new chapters up, so have at it!! xx

Hey, i just started this story today and really loved it! I can sense some concern from james when she gets hurts this time so i guess the feelings are coming to light,, or you know he is just a decent human being lol

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Hi! I was so excited to see this update because this story is honestly completely addictive. Every time I read it, I'm on the edge of my seat because every single word is so captivating. Your language is extremely detailed and whilst reading you can definitely picture yourself in Nellie's place.

Now I have to say I hate to do this, especially since your writing truly is incredible but... 

'Madame Hopkins was saying as we joined the Gryffindors in the middle of the Ptch.' You forgot the 'i' in Pitch. Also...

'and took off into the sky I had to hold back a...'. Hold back a what? This may have been purposeful and I may be quite dim in this situation but I was quite confused.

I'm so sorry to be that person but since everything else is so perfect I couldn't help myself. Please don't hate me!

Moving swiftly onto the Quidditch match, it was written absolutely brilliantly. You captured the exciting and tense moments in a match. Nellie's mind is so complex and reading about it really shows you how deep her personality truly is. I was on the edge of my seat when she got hurt. Honestly, how could the Gryffies play so dirty! However, I was so happy she still managed to pull through and win the match.

I honestly hope that she is alright because the way you have described her pain it seems visceral and so real. Hopefully, she's alright but slightly shifting topic, was James Sirius Potter concerned for Nellie? My interests definitely peaked here as after their last exchange I was left unsure of the state of their acquaintanceship with one other. I absolutely love how you write their interactions because they genuinely seem electric and you can see and feel a certain energy that flows between them. It is similar to like a magnetic pull but at the same time unworldly. Their connection is powerful, which makes it unbelievably addictive to read; like when on the pitch, Nellie just knew he was looking at her. Honestly, this story is amazing!

I cannot wait to see what happens next between the two of them and I do hope that Nellie is alright and that James and Kato haven't killed one another! Brilliant chapter, please update as soon as possible!

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OMg - THANK YOU!! I rushed this chapter and didn't really read it over so I'm so glad you found those. They'll be fixed now!! Thank you so much for your kind  words, and there will be a LOT more of that magnetic pull in the next chapter. Thank you thank you again and please point out any other errors when you see them! Hope you review again!

Quidditch seems so difficult to write and I think you’ve done a brilliant job of it. Nellie’s narrative seems so real and believable. I’m so looking forward to the next chapter.

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God, your writing is so good. Like, I can't handle how visceral and real everything is and how tense I felt the whole time and how <i>rare</i> it is to feel so strongly from words alone. You've done a magnificent job, I'm obsessed, I can't find the words. Really well done.

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i am loving your story !! 
keep it up !

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