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Lol, Moose is a great character. As chaotic as he can be as a captain, he’s just as great.

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I adore moose haha an absolutely brilliant plan

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Is it weird that I’m imagining dead poet society characters; Steven Meeks as Milo, Knox overstreet as Kato, and Charlie Dalton as Flynn.

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I TOTALLY SEE THAT except if Milo had glasses he would break them at least twice a day

I was sooo thrilled to see an update to this! I'm entranced with this story and how it's unfolding. In one chapter you manage to lay out this incredible duality of feelings in our dear Corn. She has this attraction with Kato and this pull with James. I LOVE IT. 

I love the thought put into Moose and the other Ravenclaws, they are all fiercely smart but in different ways. I enjoy the difference we see in them and the depth that the supporting characters have. Bravo!

Excited for another chapter, happy writing! xx

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I love how you put it as an attraction and a pull, because that is so accurate. She has this confusion for her friend but then this absolute magnetism for her enemy, and it's a lot to feel all at once! Thank you so much for your insightful review and I can't wait to hear your comments on the newest chapter (should be posted in an hour)!

Seeing that you had posted a new chapter literally made my day! Absolutely loooved this one, nellie's description (or yours, I guess) of scenes is really one of my fav things! From even just hanging out with her usual group of friends, to the quidditch team dynamic and  of course all the james moments - all of it is narrated in such an interesting way and her character naturally shows through it, I love it! Can't wait for the next update!

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I'm so glad you like the way scenes are described! The update should be up in about an hour, I really do hope you give me your opinions on it! (hint: there is LOTS of dialogue in this one.) Thank you so much!

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I love it

they're kinda dumb for not seeing Scorpius and Rose
I mean that or i'm dumb for assuming it will be 

they seem up to something though

you know what I want to know most? What book adam borrowed at the start

it's really annoying me


I love the quidditch team and all her friends 

we haven't seen the purebloods in a while so I hope they'll appear soon


eeek!

I just want another chapter! Soon!

please?

love from me xxx

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Who knows who Scorpius is with??? And I am SO glad you mentioned the book. Keep it in mind. For the next 10 chapters. In this chapter (which should be up in about an hour) you'll get Purebloods, a whole lot of friendly dialogue, and Nellie's rather tumultuous temper. Please review again!! Thank you!!

Great chapter! This fic has really good dialogue, the dialogue is a lot of fun! Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it and I hope you review again!

Gorgeous writing, truly - the dialogue is incredible, so realistic! Love it, can't wait for the next!

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Wow, thank you so much! The new chapter should be up soon - please let me know what you think!!

This was an amazing chapter - this story is so addictive and I was honestly so excited to see this update. I love how you write, it's so mature and once you start reading you really can't stop. 

The dynamic between Nellie and Potter is so incredibly intense! Just in that moment on the pitch you can see that something is going to happen but yet you can not predict it. This story really keeps you on your toes!

Once again, fantastic chapter and I hope you update soon!

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Ah thank you so much!! Another update will be posted today - please tell me what you think! Thank you again!

This was an amazing chapter - this story is so addictive and I was honestly so excited to see this update. I love how you write, it's so mature and once you start reading you really can't stop. 

The dynamic between Nellie and Potter is so incredibly intense! Just in that moment on the pitch you can see that something is going to happen but yet you can not predict it. This story really keeps you on your toes!

Once again, fantastic chapter and I hope you update soon!

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Ah thank you so much!! Another update will be posted today - please tell me what you think! Thank you again!!

This was amazing, my favourite chapter so far! I'm so conflicted because I'm definitely feeling the chemistry between Nellie & Kato and I hope you'll write more of them together but also ...Nellie and James are explosive and hot and amazing so obviously I love them too. I'm such trash for hoping for a love triangle but here we are and I never claimed to be a role model *shrug*

Also can I just say, usually side characters in many next gen stories don't intrigue me at all but with this story, I've actually been invested in their stories and they clearly have a purpose and have their own personalities.

I'd love to see more of Nellie's temper and maybe her imperfections? Somehow I don't see her as really goody two shoes or as innocent as some main character girls can be, and I'm loving it!

Anyways, sorry for rambling, I just really really like this story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Thank you so much! I'm glad you've picked up on the feelings between Kato and Nellie - that will definitely be something that the story comes back to. I'm so happy you see all of the work I've put into the side characters - and with this next chapter, you'll get way more of Nellie's temper than you ever wanted. Thank you so much for reviewing and please let me know your thoughts on the next chapter!

This is such a fun read. The interactions between Quidditch teams are fantastic, and everyone's personalities are perfect.

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I'm so glad you think so! Once the next chapter is up, let me know what you think! Thanks!

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