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Chapter: Chapter Four | Story: The After Before

I'm just choosing a random chapter to post this from my account. You have no idea how happy I am at the moment, I legit thought I was dreaming when I saw your answer and couldn't resist answering right away! 

I'm so glad you're okay and working on new stuff. I'd honestly buy/support/read/review anything you write, I'm actually super grateful and honored you even suggested that. And wow 3 novels and one an "adaptation of this story", is this real life ?! I'm just seriously so excited and happy for you right now, I'll leave one of my old email address in my bio for a little while, if you want to stay in touch and my tumblr username since it's probably the safest one to post here because there's nothing personal on it haha, in case you'd prefer that. I'd love to hear more from you and what you're working on, you made my whole day!! xx C

Author Response

I've literally been so busy with working I didn't even SEE this but I saved al your info! I haven't written anything in what seems like forever so I'm hoping to get motivation on that soon, but I'll def be emailing you!! Hope you're safe and healthy and happy :)

I like how Nellie fully ran into Scorpius and Rose and didn't even think that they could be a possibility as a couple. Well, hopefully she'll figure it out soon!

Author Response

Maybe she will, maybe she won't! Thank you so much for reviewing, please let me know what you think of the new chapter!

I'm so excited to see an update to our tale! I know you mentioned this was was more bridge-like but I do enjoy the implications of where we're headed.  The continued building of suspicion with Scorpious, Nellie's knowing of how to persuade Al, and even the small interaction of James and Nellie in detention all of it building to some shenanigans ahead! I like how you write your characters, by that I mean their personalities are fully displayed in their reactions and given confirmation through Nellie's thoughts. 

I love this story! Please keep updating!

Author Response

Thank you so much for your kind words! I take a lot of care to write my characters fully so it means a lot that you've noticed! Please review again - I'd love to hear what you think!

Hi! I really like how Nellie is so sneaky with Scorpius and Albus and that she knows exactly what to say to sort of sway their opinions. I also love how close all of the friends seem to be and how you show it in unique ways every time! So PLEASE update, because I need more of this James-Nellie stuff in my life!!

Author Response

Just updated! Thank you and thanks for reviewing!

Nellie's meddling is so entertaining, I don't know whether to laugh or feel sorry for the girl. 

James' bluntness and attitude are absolutely hilarious. I totally understand as to why Nellie always feels so frustrated with him but their interactions are hilarious. 

Amazing chapter and please do update soon!

Author Response

I am so glad you find James funny! He only gets wittier and Nellie only gets more frustrated. The next chapter is on its way! Thank you so much for reviewing!!

James. Is. Hilarious. Can't wait for those two to figure out they like each other. It's going go be delightful.

Author Response

I am SO glad you think so! This next chapter he's not very amusing, but the one after that will certainly satisfy that! Thank you so much for reviewing and please review next chapter as well!

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