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Chapter: Trigger | Story: Minutes Of A War

when is the next update i love this story!

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First of all... Amazing! Well done!!! I like the interpretation of what happened when Ron and the others was caught and all hell broke loose for the Weasley family. I liked the bit about Percy because I'm sure that no matter what Bill as the big brother would for certain have allerted Percy as well. I'm ecstatic about this chapter. On the other hand, I'm sorry for being picky but I noticed some quoting and timeline mistakes one of them being that Luna and Dean left first along with Olivander and that Bill hosted also Griphook the Goblin... I'm sure that being a real person and having a life you hadn't have the time to edit it. I'm sorry again if I'm being a unsufferable know it all almost Hermione style :P
Surely is the best thing I've read and I liked the point of view trying to decipher and present the life of everyone else while the trio was off and in his world trying to be the hero and kill Voldy. Because it's certain that it was as much of a torture for those that had to endure everyday life. I'll be waiting for more... 
ps Sorry for not reviewing every chapter...

Author Response

This is a terrific story.I have enjoyed every chapter and can't wait to see your updates.You write the different characters so  easily with their distinct voices.

Author Response

Thank you for your review! It's great to hear you liked it :)

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