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Chapter: Are there Answers in Azkaban? | Story: Seized

Okay so I am back!

Oooh a cliff hanger. What is going? Why does Stan Shunpike look exactly like Lucius Malfoy? 

Dun dun dun 

Loving the story once again. You mix the serious side of the case and Ron and Harry's friendship really well. 

OH OH OH!

Does Narcissa know where her husband actually is?

Author Response

CALLIE! These reviews really made my day, thank you so much!

I'm answering none of your questions because I don't want to spoil it :p

Wow, I have to comment on the efficiency of the Ministry at being able to approve a visit to Azkaban in such a short amount of time. Here in the Muggle world it would have to go through weeks of paperwork I reckon. Lucky wizards! (Maybe the paperwork comes after.)

<i>one couldn't simply apparate straight to the front door.</i> -- Haha, One does not simply walk into Mordor. I mean Azkaban. :p

I know this is a serious moment but I'm definitely LOLLLing at how Harry convinced Loretta to let Hermione work for him. Classy, Harry. :p

OMG WHAT??!? DEEE I have to go make dinner, I can't end reading on a cliff hanger! Argh! kajdflkajdhj

(but great chapter! And sorry for how rambly this review is)

Author Response

Okay, responding to this one and then I really have to dash but I'll be back to do the rest soon :D 

Things always seem like they'd be easier in the Magical world rather than the Muggle one, don't they? Gawain has a lot of pull with the Azkaban guards (that will become more apparent later :P) 

Oh my lord I didn't even see the LOTR similarity with that line when I wrote it :p 

Ah, Harry letting Loretta get pictures was one of my favourite parts to write, I know how much he would HATE that but it definitely shows how desperate he was to get Hermione working alongside Ron :D

Sorry for the cliffhanger :P Thank you for another lovely review! (The rambly ones are my favourite :D)

Dun dun DUNNN!  What a cliffie!!  

This was another intriguing chapter, and it left me sitting on the edge of my seat... must read more now!!  :)  

Well done!

Author Response

I love cliffhangers, you'll learn this soon :p 

Thanks again Jayde!

Oh my goodness gracious! That ending was just so amazing and not at all predicted! I'm just completely thrown for a loop right now and I don't even know what to do! That was completely genius and I'm just in awe of you right now! I'm so much at a loss for words! I don't even know where to begin. The characterization was wonderful as always and the plot is getting thicker and I'm completely sucked in and wanting to know what is going to happen next. I'm so sorry that this review is going to be completely rubbish because I just can't think right now from that ending. I need to know what is going to happen next. The nice thing for me is that the next chapter is already posted so I don't have to wait around to find out what's going to happen next. I think I would have freaked out if I would have had to wait to get to the next chapter! Great Job! And again sorry about the rather rubbish review!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author Response

This was most definitely NOT a rubbish review! It was yet another lovely one :D

I was so excited for you to get to this chapter, this one and the next are probably my favourites, there's a lot that goes on plot-wise! I hope you enjoy the next one as much as this one :)

Thank you again Erica!

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