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What? What about bill?!
Oooh iTs gEtTiNg iNtErEsTiNg!
Cya!

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D a m n fred you high weasel

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That snowball scene! That was hilarious. I do think that a month detention is a bit long, even for McGonagall. I liked the fact that Harry bought Ron new dress robes as a christmas present. And now we'll get to see Seamus wearing his old ones!

Your English is very good in my opinion. And believe it or not, I'm from Belgium too! (Liege)

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I certainly had a lot of fun when I wrote that scene. 
That's great! I'm from Brugge/Bruges myself, so we still speak different languages. Thanks for reviewing!

This was another fun chapter.  Fred and George are always entertaining.  I couldn't believe they had the nerve to target McGonagall.  And Fred ends up with Fleur - well, that was a fun surprise.  But it fit well.  Because both the twins knew how to be charming with the Veela cousins who attended Bill and Fleur's wedding in the books - so it was entirely believable that Fred would have Fleur as his date.  You did a nice job describing Harry and Ginny in the formal dresses too.  I liked it.  Nice chapter.

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I really had a lot of fun writing the scene with McGonagall :)

As for Fred, I don't think Fleur would ever take him serious enough to consider really dating him, but a date to the Yule Ball seemed possible to me.

Thanks for the review!

Teddy

I think your writing is very good. I like the story so far.

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Thanks! I'm very glad you like it. Please keep reading and reviewing :)

Teddy

Ha! Loved the McGonagall scene! As with your previous chapter all the characters stayed well in-character. Each of them has a distinct voice that you captured very well!

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I must say I had fun writing that scene :) I try to stay as true to the characters as possible, but I'm afraid they will change a bit as the story proceeds, due to events that didn't occur in the novels. Thanks again!

Teddy

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