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Chapter: Say you Don't Want It | Story: Nobody Breaks My Heart

holy sh*t, i cant get over how good this is... i was gonna do a huge review at the end when i was done reading for tonight... but i just cant get over how good this is. your imagery is really good. don't stop writing, you have talent.

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Interesting chapter. I am curious as to why Draco is even interested in her, but I guess that will be explained later. Great so far, I will continue reading. :)

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Gah! 

Must read more! LOL 

Happy Writing!

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Wouldn't mind being pinned up against a tree by Draco Malfoy.. Just sayin'

You write so beautifully Kat, really you do! I've been pulled in by this story from the word go

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So good...Again! Love the concept, and it is coming together so wonderfully :)

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I really love this story! I love how you get right to the point with Kaya and Draco's feelings, it's very refreshing! :)

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Hi hon!

I think your writing is great, and you describe the different situations really well :) Good job!

I particularly enjoyed this:

- "Say you don't want it," he whispered in my ear, his warm and minty breath erupting goose bumps on my skin. I opened my mouth, wanting to tell him I didn't want it. That I wanted him to leave.

And this:

- His grin was unmistakable. It was the one of victory. He knew where he had me, as did I. He knew I couldn't fight. Wouldn't fight.

Keep up the good work!

*Maria
10/10

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