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Chapter: A Foolproof Plan Gone Awry | Story: Just James

i love this please write more i want to find out what happens next i think james made the potion wrong this is so wicked

Author Response

I'm so glad you like it!  I'm hoping to stay on top of this, so if things don't get too crazy, I should be able to update!!!  Thanks for the review :)

Well that was unfortunate indeed - throwing a pillow at the room mate you're fighting with. Hopefully they'll be friends again soon. Just wondering, why is the sale on a Monday? Wouldn't it make more sense if it was planned on a Friday evening or in the weekend?
And Kat talked to him willingly! Sure, it was to mock him (I think?), but still. She could've stayed silent and cold towards him the whole time. Why would she repeat her question, though, if James already answered? That's a little strange, if you ask me.
It's quite odd indeed that they put the directions for Amortentia in a normal Potions textbook. Oh well, perhaps their explanation is right. Still, it wouldn't be very safe, I guess. Who knows, maybe it'll inspire people to do stupid things - like James and Eddie here.
Oh, that potion went horribly wrong indeed. But who knows, maybe Kat will dislike Scorpius so much (if he'll be stalking her like mad) that she'll even hate him more than she hates James. That would be a good thing, right? And how did that happen? Was it because James, who brew the potion, is in love with Kat, and that had its effects on the potion? Someone who was actually in love with Edwina should've made it? Oh dear. James will love it, I'm sure :D
Anyway, hopefully you'll manage to update soon!

Author Response

Oh, my dear, this review made my day! I was so sure no one would ever read this story again because I took so incredibly long updating...and then I log on and see this long, fabulous review! It made me smile :)

Ah yes, James and Luke. They really need to work out their differences...and the sale. That is an excellent point! I didn't really think about it, I just made it a Monday. But thanks for pointing that out.

She did talk to him! Making progress, huh? And their relationship is really wacked up. Maybe it'll sort itself out? We shall see ;)

And yes, I realize that it most likely wouldn't be in a Potions book...so I came up with that lousy excuse! Haha. But they needed to be able to make it, so I had to have it in there. Ah the life of a writer, eh? Thanks for believing it, though :)

As for why the potion went wrong, you shall have to wait and see.  And also, you shall have to be patient and wait to see how events unfold. It will be, I assure you, full of drama! That is, if I can ever write it all and update!

I promise, though, that I will do my absolutel best to get another chapter up soon. Life can be hectic, and crazy, and all, but I will do everything in my power to get more written and GET IT UP, because I know there are awesome readers like you waiting for it :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!

(And my apologies that my response was longer than your review...long reviews get me excited!)

Love the update! :) Verryyy excited to hear what comes next, I'm enjoying this story a lot! :)

Author Response

I'm glad you're still reading!!!  I was so worried I'd lost most of my readers, when I took so long to update!!!  Thanks so much for sticking around, and for leaving a review. I promise I'll do my best to update sooner next time, and keep the plot up and moving :)

Hey! I read your story, half by accident, but then I found I couldn't stop. Your writing is excellent, and I truly believe you've captured the spirit of James Potter in your writing.

Author Response

Oh thanks so much!!! I'm glad you got into the story :) And thanks for saying that about James, I've really been trying to, as you say, 'capture the spirit.' Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Oh, snap! I just got it that the boys are like the Mauraders and Eddie is like Remus Luipin.

Author Response

Haha, I was hoping no one would pick up on that...I myself only realized it when I was about halfway through the third chapter and then I was like 'oh shoot, they're just like the Marauders...'  But anyways, yes, I guess they are pretty similar.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

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