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Oh jeez, Rose is messing up! She is meant to be with dear little Scorpius. Not anyone else! This is bad. Awesome chapter!

WhatAboutRegulus

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I can never seem to write a kind and gentle Rose, like most people perceive her as. She always turns out this way! 
Thank you for the review! :)

OH NO!!! poor scorpius! =/
i thought the guys giving elle hair removing shampoo was a bit much. C'mon guys. Sheesh. 
I loved how each girl had some weird head accessory while they were in the baths, hahahaha. 
And i am TOTALLY loving all of this james/charisma action! =D SQUEE!

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Thank you for the review!
The guys are mean :(
I'm glad that you're loving it. While writing it I thought that it would be a cool idea. :)

I'm really loving this story! sometimes you seem to use question marks insead of exclamation marks, but the amazing story makes up for it ;) i am deffo reading the next chapter! cliffhanger or what ^.^

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Thank you for the review! Thank you for pointing it out! :D Another thing to add to the list (my grammar is awful) I'm planning on doing a big edit of the entire thing. Thank you again! I will read through and look out for the evil, lurking question marks.
I'm so glad that you've enjoyed this! :D I hope that you like the rest too!

TEAM SCORPIUS! =D 
Rose is being horrible right now! How can she DO something like that?! She doesn't deserve someone like Scorpius, the poor boy is pining after her, and she doesn't have a care in the world!
Why Team Freddy? He wasn't the nicest guy to Dixie...

- DragonSlayer

PS 100/10 =)

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Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you've enjoyed this. :)
Yeah, Rose is being pretty harsh. She and Scorpius will have an ending, I promise, you'll have to read to find out what though :)
I hope that you enjoy the rest!

Hands down the best story on this whole website. It's killing me that it's over so soon-I wish it could go on forever!

Please update soon!

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Oh my gosh?! Really? That's so amazing that you think so, such a shock too. I look at the story and I see so many flaws. The fact that you think that it's the best story just makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Thank you so much! :)

I will update soon, thanks for the review!

Flippig amazing story, I love it. Please update soon xD

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Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you love the story! It makes me so happy to hear that! I will update soon! :D

Woahh, super long chapter!! Yipee! I have lotsa favorite qoutes, so brace yourself! 

"The Hogwarts body seems to have trampled over that line and shown no means of stopping." I don't really know why, but i like this sentence. It's a nice metaphor. (:

"The startling factor was that Neville had joined in for two fights, only when he lost did he decide it was time to become to authority figure." I laughed out loud at this. Oh, Neville. I can totally picture him doing this. 

"She gave a cross between a small smile and a snort. A smorlt." Smorlt is my new favorite word. I smorlt all the time. Yay for word combining!

"I saw kohl eyeliner on Dixie's dresser; she encouraged me to use it. I did. I poked myself in the eye. It hurt." So typical of Charisma... 

Hmm, what else?! I'm totally jealous of that bathroom. It's neato misquito.

The fluffy little scene at the beginning was so cute! Soo fluffy! Made me totally jealous of Charisma. I want a boy like James!

The prank was pretty funny, though it kinda failed. Still, I would definatley love to give that shampoo to some certain people that I don't like...

And omg, Evie's actually human?! Weird. But it was a nice little scene. 

Oooh, i sense some intense ScoRose drams coming on. Will the drama never end?!

Only 2 chapters left?!? I don't want it to end! :'(
But update soon anyways, kay? I'll be waiting.

:)wincica

p.s. woah, this is a long review! oh wells, long chapter, long review (:

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QUOTES!! DID YOU SAY QUOTES!! I LOVE QUOTES! Okay, breathing, sorry ...

I'm glad that you liked those quotes, they're some of my favourites too. 
And yes, the prank failed, and it was kinda mean, but wouldn't it be great to use it :P

As for Evie, I was as surprised as you when it came to this!
And no, the drama will never end, it's me writing the story :P

But yes, there are only two chapters left (but then another 13 in the sequel, if you wish to follow it!)

Thank you again!

Hi. I am writing this review when I'm supposed to be doing a school project, so uh don't tell my mother.

It's almost ending! And I swear I'll leave a very good and long review for that last chapter. Swear. Cross my heart.

That Evie and Charisma making up part was my favorite part of the chapter. It really shows there really is another side of Evie because she isn't just the mean girl in the story. Okay, I'm going to tak one more guess (The last one made about Evie was totally wrong!) and that this is Evie's friendship blossoming with Charisma. So yeah. 

I hope Scorpius gets the girl. But considering there are only two chapters left, how much can happen. My question is: Will the relationship go to the sequel Seven? They are meant to be together. And Al. I can't wait till he shows up.

My favorite line was: I take it back. She can go and burn in the fire. haha. Funny.

10/10

haPpy DaZe,
Steph.

PS. Finally writing my story

PSS. Guess who's birthday was on the 14th? 

PSSS. It was mine.

:)

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OMGOMGOMG!! HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! (for the 14th) I feel bad that I missed it. I hope that you had a good day. What did you get? I bet it was awesome!

And you're writing your story. Tell me when it is up cause I really want to read it :P 

Thank you so much for the review Steph, I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. (I loved writing your favourite line too, I thought it was kinda harsh, but still pretty cool :) )

You want Scorpius to get the girl, well their relationship is concluded in the last chapter, but there is more of it in the next. It's sad but i've just realised that Rose isn't even mentioned in the sequel. Scorpius is, but only by mention. There is a new character in the sequel and they take Scorpius's position in a way - but I'm not saying whether they're a boy or a girl. :)

You enjoyed Charisma and Evie making up? That's awesome, I wasn't sure if people would dislike them becoming on civil terms. You're guesses are kind right. 

I'm keeping you to your long review for the last chapter promise :P

Oh, oh and I promise not to tell your mother, as long as you don't tell mine that I'm not doing the hovering. 
Thanks for the review!

The guys' prank? That was horrible. Just awful.
And I think Charisma should talk to Rose? Because that's horrible of her? And she must have a good reason?
Finally you update!
I've been waiting for you, my love.
This chapter amused me. But I still can't believe you had Rose do that!
Anyhow, great writing as usual!
And update soon, please?

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Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad that you liked this chapter. 

The guys prank was really mean wasn't it? But they're all pretty short sighted and wouldn't be able to see the consequences that they may have caused. :)
As for Rose and Josh, you'll have to wait to see what happens :P
I feel like a puppet master. 
The next chapter is in the queue, I hope that you enjoy it as much as this!

Some ones just watched Wild Child. xx
It was good by the way

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Thank you for the review. :)

I have had people asking about the Wild Child thing, and it's actually not taken from it. I haven't seen wild child for years and I can't really remember that scene. 
It was inspiration from a sleep over that I have with my friends. :) But I can see the similarities 'cause I checked it out after someone mentioned it :P
I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter. I will update soon! :)xx

McGonagall rocks too, the way she transforms is pretty bad ass. 
Anyway, great chapter, this is one of my favorite stories on this site. James and Charisma are adorable together, like actually the cutest thing. I think i might just steal James from Charisma and keep him for myself, hes like the perfect boyfriend. I couldn't stop myself from awwing. Unfortunately i can feel that this story will end soon :( Well, i can't wait to read what you put up next, your a wonderful writer and could even get published. The characters you create have so much depth that i can relate to them almost straight away. The plot is amazing and the writing you create is so vivid that i feel like i'm there with the characters. Its been a good run but i'll miss all the characters from here - good thing i can come back and reread it. ;)

My rating is three billion out of ten, 
oh it is possible.

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Thank you so much! This review has made me so happy. I can't believe that you think I'm that good! :O

I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter, and it's characters. I think that the characters are the most important thing in stories (you can't have a plot without them). I love to write and develop them. 

I want a James too :P you're not the only one - if that's what you were going for. 

The story has got two chapters left, one of which is in the queue. After that, the sequel, but it's not about Charisma and James so a lot won't follow to it. But I still adore it. I just couldn't let go of the characters yet. 

Thank you so much for the review. I hope that you love the ending as much as the rest of the story! :)

Another great chapter!! I'm kind of confused as to why Scorpius and Rose are fighting... did I miss something? But my favorite part of the chapter would be when Chic steals James jacket at the very beginning- very cute :) Update soon please!!

10/10

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. 
You didn't miss anything. :) Rose just stopped talking to Scorpius one day and they are trying to figure out why. Basically, she was having an affair. Meanie Rosie. 
I will update soon!

Hi there!

I never review, and I mean NEVER, though I practically live on this site. But, I figured with this being close to the end of Wolfsbane, I'd write one. 

Before I get into the actual review, I have to say, you're one of my favorite authors on here. I love your plots, the character development of not only your OC's, but the characters that we already know and love. Your stories make for an enjoyable read with the perfect amount of drama and romance. 

Anyway!

I really enjoyed this chapter. The banter between James and Charisma was very enjoyable, and I liked how she confirmed it for herself that James was unequivocally hers. But Dixie needs to wake up and realize her and Freddy  just need to get together! Like now! 

I thought the bath scene was very funny. I actually read the chapter on Sunday, and then the movie Wild Child aired for the first time in America that night. Watching, I found that the bath scene in that movie to be reminiscent of the one in your story. Were you inspired by the movie? Or was it just a funny coincidence? Either way, I was sitting on my computer giggling away. :P

Maybe there is finally going to be some common ground with Evie! Yay! She's still not the nicest girl, but Charisma seems to have a bigger sense of propriety and that's evident in the way she acted towards Evie in this chapter. 

Finally, UGH ROSE. WHY?!?!?!?!

I've really enjoyed reading all of your fanfics, but I particularly loved this one. Wolfsbane was beautifully crafted, and I really love the affection that James and Charisma had before they got together, and how it grew into a romantic relationship later on. I'm going to miss this story! It made me laugh, cry, smile, and wish for a boy like James. But I suppose that was the point, right? Really great story. 

Cheers, 
Holly :) 

Btw, sorry for the longest review ever!

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So I log on to my computer after a long day and I see this review, you've definitely made me a very happy person. :D
I'm glad that you decided to review, it's nice to know that people are enjoying the story. 

James and Charisma, I figured that they would have some sort of rivalry or slight argumentative side even now they are finally dating, despite the fact that it was joke-y. 

Dixie does need to realise doesn't she? But that will be the sequel. I have almost finished it and it should be up in about a month. :)

I have actually been asked this before, but no I had forgotton about that scene in Wild Child. I had been to a sleepover a few weeks before writing this (ages ago :P) and one of my friends had gotten out the old dressing up costumes, so we were all sat in weird clothing. One of my friends ran a bath and got in (in her jeans :/) and I just kinda thought that I wished that I could fit something similar in to one of my stories as I had such a great time. But when I think about it, the two scenes are rather similar :P

Evie and Charisma have finally started to see common ground, it only took them, what? - Seven months? :D

I'm so glad that you like all of my fan fics. This one is like my child, so to hear that this is your favourite just makes me smile. :)

You definitely get the award for most amazing review! thank you so much. I love the long-ens.

My favorite part was the bath scene with all the girls! Quote?...either this one

“She will be willing to karate-chop you if you mention S-E-X.” She spelt it out and Lily shot her a glare that read ‘I’m not six’.

or this one


I didn’t drop it to the floor, as he expected. Instead I held it, pulled away from his hold, said an innocent ‘Thank you’, nodded and then ran away. I had his jacket, his smile and his kiss. 

Update soon!

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you liked this chapter, and the bath scene. :)
I will update soon! :D

I'd go ape shite on Rose. That's just my PoV, though. I don't like cheaters. Grrz. 

I had to laugh at the irony of the ending...just because they were JUST talking, and then all of the sudden BAM! Rose is a cheater. Duh, duh, duh.

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I love it. I would too probably, on the Rose thing :P
Cheaters are horrible. They are the worst people out there. 
I'm glad that you liked the irony of the ending, and the chapter. I will update soon. Thanks for the review.

why thank you;) i cant believe rose would do that! you said you were going to fix it:( im sad now. who knows maybe you will. and i personally think chic will explode. poor scorp. he's in love with a girl that cheated on him.

10/10

clea smith

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I did say that I was going to fix it, didn't I? I'm a horrible, horrible person. I have written the ending and read over it, many, many times. I can't think of another solution other than the one that I have come up with. I'm sure that many will hate me for it. :/

Thank you so much for the review. I will update soon. :D

OMG.what a witch tart...bad person.hate rose right now.poor scorpius.how could she.
please up load more asap.love it:) cheers

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Witch tart, I love it. That's an amazing saying. :D

Rose has been a bit of a bad witch hasn't she? I will update soon. Thanks for the review. I'm so glad that you've enjoyed this chapter.

Loved the chapter as usual! Was the bath scene taken from wild child?

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. 

Ooh, Gosh, Wild Child. I haven't seen that film in years! Now that I think back, there was a scene like this in that. It was actually something similar to what me and my friends did a while ago. Of course we only had one bath. So the rest of us sat on the floor while on of my friends went in, in her jeans - not the best idea, we know :P
But now I think about it, it is similar isn't it. :)

Love the story! Been following it for awhile but you may wish to check your wording on the third paragraph, second word on the second line. Unless of course Charisma has more than one head :)

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I did check back and all I can say it 'whoops?'. I will fix it when I re-do it with the chapter image. Thank you for pointing it out to me :P
I'm glad that you like the story. I will update soon!

awesome chapter can't wait till the next one

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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I will update soon! :D

please please please, make teddy come back into the story!! I MISS HIM! but good story, i don't want it to end! Update soon

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Oh my gosh! I love Teddy so much too! Unfortunately he doesn't fit in to the story, there are two chapters left and I can't work him in. I have tried, seriously tried. I wish that I could put more of him in. But I am thinking of writing a story about Teddy cause I love him too much to simply let him go. :) Thank you very much for the review. I will update soon!

Another fantastic chapter(: James and Charisma could not possibly get more adorable. I honestly don't think it can happen. And Rose. She needs to shape up before I come after her. She ought to know better than to be with boys who aren't Scorpius!

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you like James and Charisma. Is that a challenge that you have set me? Kidding. :P
You're totally right about Rose, you should be her councillor. :)

this chapter was okay. not my favorite, but still good! please update soon!

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Thank you very much for the review. Yeah, this chapter was sorta a filler, but I needed to put one in there. I'm glad that you still liked it thought. :D I will update soon!

aw, amazing chapter, i loved it!
please update soon! ;p

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I will update soon, Becky. :)

It's so sweet to see james and charisma together. the prank was funny but kinda mean, thank god charisma didnt apply the shampoo!!!
and Rose and Josh??!! OMG!!! Shit, rose shouldnt be doing this!! nOOOooo!! Rose and scorp are perfect for each other, josh shouldnt be coming in d way :(
i hope charisma sets things right in her own way :)
looking forward to the next chp,
AD

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Thank you very much for the review. It was a mean prank, wasn't it? I am rubbish at thinking up pranks, that was the only thing that I could come up with. :P
Rose and Josh. Yes, it's got them in to deep, deep trouble. :D 
Charisma will know what to do, she's very good at sorting people out. But it involves Scorpius - he'll sort it out in his own way. 
I will update soon!

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