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when are you going to post the next chapter??

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I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) 
The next chapter will hopefully be up in the next few days! Yay for me! Finally, it's been way too long
xxx

your fic is awesome i can´t wait for the next chapter!

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Thank you so much! xx

yes tottally do scorpuis pov

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Thank you for your review :) If your still reading this, the next chapter will actually be out soon. I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

Update. 'Nuff said. Love it.

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I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

PLEASE keep writing this story!!! It's one of my favorites I couldn't stop reading it so sorry for not reviewing till now.  I love attention that you pay to make each character stand out and the detail of the imagery make the story so real I can actually see it happening!  You're a very talented writer and please update soon.  Once again I love your story and all of the secrets of rose's that you add in.  I'll be anxiously awaitng and update ^-^ 
10/10!

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Aw, thank you so much! That's one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten and I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now. 
Next chapter out in a few days, hopefully by the end of today. Again, I'M SO SORRY, and I really do hope you're still reading this xxx

Loving this story!!! A chapter in the POV of Scorpius would be amazing as we get to see what goes on in the mysterious head of his :)

Can't wait for an update!

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Thank you so much! I have incorporated a Scorpius POV into the next chapter, and I really hope its okay
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

You know, you should seriously consider updating this. I am in love. And will be very sad if you don't. I'll give you an imaginary cake!

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I am! :D And I'm so happy you like it. It's been nearly a year since I updated and I feel awful but I sort of gave up with writing, but I finally decided I'm going to ignore my teachers and parents and take english for a-level instead of all the sciences I got persuaded into doing
I'm so sorry for not replying though x

Ah you kill me this is such a great fic!!!

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Aw, thank you so much!!! x

AH! UPDATE SOON OR IM GOING TO GO INSANE!!!
and i dont want a scorpius pov chapter i like it just being rose's pov

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I'm SO SORRY!! I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

SCORPIUSSS CHAPTER.
:)
I love love love Hide and Go Seek in the Dark! It's my FAVORITE GAME IN THE WORLD!

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Aha, I sort of hate it, I'm not going to lie, I get really paranoid in the dark ;)
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

300th review? I THINK SO! I really don't think I need to expand off your brilliance, so I shall only say that Chapter 12 should come out soon :) You know, for my sanity.

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Aw, yay!! That makes me so happy, and I'm so sad I missed the real day this happened. :(
I'm so sorry for not updating,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

yay i just saw that you updated and was super excited. i really like this story, and this chapter was really good. but i have to ask when is the whole "ruin scorpius" thing gonna happen? not that i want it to happen, i love him, i was just curious. anyhow, my love for scorpius compels me to say that yes i would really appreciate a chapter in his pov, just to understand what's going on in his noggin. i am also oddly excited for this huge hide and seek game, and somewhat have an urge to plan one myself. but that is still undecided, on my part. what i am decided about, is that i want you to update as fast as you can, please.

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I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ! =D. It was so amazing. You should write a chapter in Scorpius' POV. (: 
Can't wait to read more.! :D.

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Thank you so much! You're actually one of my favourite reviewers and I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

let me just say that I LOVE the article about Rose -- ‘Who’s been hitting the Weasley protégée' is hilarious lol. I like how Rose is changing now that she's not so stuck on Amy anymore and the fact that she agreed to play keeper kind of shows that. I just about died with happiness when Scorpius said they would play hide-and-seek for her birthday... I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! :D

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I'm so glad you liked it :D
Oh, the woes of being a Weasley, eh? ;)
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

oh this is bloody awesome please update soon.

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Thank you so much!! I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

Hey, great story! It's interesting how Rose is being portrayed, although what she did was pretty mean it still makes the reader side along with her (and hopes scorpious will like her back). 


I like learning about Scorpious's character through Rose's pov. and picking up on what he thinks in that way, but if you want to do one through his pov. I don't think it would be that bad :P 
Update soon please!

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Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like Rose, one of my worries was that the main character would be completely unlikable and put people off reading. It was a risk and I'm happy you like her :D
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

No see the whole intrigue of this story is not knowing scorpius' feelings and discovering little clues through rose. Having a chapter in his pov would just make it all predictable, even if he's conflicted. 

You're doing fine- no, great- now so just keep it up. UPDATE SOON

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i would love a scorpius chapter!

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I read this from the start just now and you have me hooked, I adore this fic. It is amazing ^_^
And yes, please do one from Scorpius' POV. That would be awesome! And update soon!
xx

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I'm so happy you like it!!
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

awww this just brought the biggest smile to my face.
on the matter of the scorp pov...
its more professional to have only 1 pov. its harder and takes more skill to develop your characters w.out omnipotent powers.
on the other hand... scorp's character is kind of hard to decipher and it would be quite fun and interesting to see what hes thinking.

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Aww, thank you so much.
The next chapter it out soon, though I'd be surprised if anyone is still reading it...
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

Yay! I'd love to have some Scorpius POV. It would be nice. And another great chapter, I really liked the Quidditch part where Rose is zoning out. I think that was hilarious.

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I'm so happy you like it :)
And I sort of did a Rose/Scorpius/Rose chapter and will have that out as quick as I can
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

its good, but who is the top secret talking about?

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I'm so sorry but I've sort of forgot because it's been so long :(
I think it was just referring to the whole bitchy-ness of the people she knows, but I'll leave it to you to interpret it how you will
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

So... I love it.
And... Rose really was a BITCH, but she's obviously changing. So, I'm excited to see how she stays in Amy's good graces, yet is chill with Scorpious and... crap. I forgot her name. It's not Aberforth like my mind wants me to think. It's not Abigail. CRAP! anyway. You know who i'm talking about.
And why was Albus so angry?
Also: I like the idea of an all Scorpious POV chapter, or you could do a Rose/Scorpious/Rose POV chapter.
Just food for thought...
Anyway, I loved it. and... fairwell, please update soon.

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I'm so happy you like it!! :)
Albus is just sour that Rose decides to sit with them after four years of blanking them and looking down on them
I've actually done that, so thank you!! I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

omg i love this fic! i only just found it today (thats why i havent reviewed not just cos im lazy or whatever(:) it is so good-and unique in a really good way! i love your versions of Rose and Scorpius and all your original characters work really well too! not sure bout a Scorpius pov chapter-i love Rose- but it could work-i'd love to know some of his secrets!! :D cant wait for the next chapter now! (: x

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Yay, a new fan! Well, not new anymore but new to me, I guess?
I'm so happy you like it and I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

Well, it's nice that Naomi woke up Rose. I mean, her 'friends' didn't do so and I'm not sure if Naomi really has a reason to wake her up. The picture and the comment in the magazine were pretty great :D Quite funny.
I'm glad Rose managed to shut Amy up there, though I'm still wondering why on earth she just doesn't tell Amy to get lost. I like how Rose dealt with Sarah as well, even if she got a detention for it. It was worth it indeed. And if she still got an O, then she shouldn't complain, right?
It's slightly scary that Hugo and his friends listen to Amy like that, but she must be scary too. And it was funny how half the family suddenly asked Rose to play Quidditch :D But at least it got Louis to talk to her again, right?
I suppose that by running towards the dorm and back, Rose already had a good warming up, right? And it funny indeed that there are so many Weasleys on the team :D I'm just glad, for once, that Albus is not a Gryffindor. I'm sure that that would've made it much harder for Rose to play, if only because he wouldn't agree with letting her. Rose didn't have a commentator at her side, right? Is she one of Amy's jealous minions as well? Or just a girl who's annoyed by Amy and Rose? Either way, I'm sure she'll love getting hexed by Rose later. I'm glad Lily caught the Snitch, and not Zoe. It's actually too bad Rose and Zoe didn't play the same position, that would've been interesting to see. But it's great that Gryffindor won (and that Scorpius didn't seem completely sour about it)!
Will Rose have to play too when they're up against Slytherin, then? That'll be nice ;) Just like the Hide and Seek game Scorpius is organising for her birthday. Who else will be involved? Just the two of them, or other people too?
About the Scorpius chapter, I suppose that it would be interesting to see how he feels about the whole situation (and perhaps through him, how Albus feels about it as well?). It would be rather different from the Rose chapters, though, so I'm not 100% convinced. But if you want to do it, go right ahead of course! :D
Hopefully you'll update soon!

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Aw, what a lovely long review! It's always nice to hear that people actually like what I write!
I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

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