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Oh gosh, this is getting intense! I don't want James to hate Charisma :/ But I feel like that's were it's headed and I'm getting really sad :'( great chapter.

WhatAboutRegulus

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James could never hate her, they will fight frequently and ignore the other like their life depended on it, but they could never hate each other. :)
Thank you for the review! Don't be sad!

Okay, I've bee completely engrossed in this story for half a day (obviously, if I'm this far in half a day). I honestly love everything about this perfect story. The one thin that's gotten me to review now when I haven't before is that when McG cancelled the Quidditch match, Drew Wood needed to have shouted that she can't cancel Quidditch. Other than that it's flawless and I love it and I can't wait to finish it.

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Haha, I can't believe that I didn't think of that!  That's such a brilliant little thing to put in; I'm jealous that I didn't think of it!
Thank you so much for such a lovely review. I hope that you enjoy the rest; I'm so pleased that you're liking it this far!

your story wont upload! :-((( i was getting in to it!

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I'm glad to hear that you were getting in to it :)
sorry about that; hpff is experiencing some difficulties at the moment and the staff are doing what they can to fix them, so hopefully the story will load soon :) 
thank you for the review. I hope that you enjoy the rest. :)

aw, i hate it when that happens...the whole 'sweet-girl-finally-starts-standing-up-for-herself-but-disappoints-the-boy-she-loves' thing. i mean, sure, she's not the same charisma, but i wouldn't say she's entirely unrecognizable. COME <i>ON</i>, james! give her a break, you can't expect her to be unchanged by everything she's been put through!
and that preview...dear god. what has dan done NOW?!

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Admittedly, it's completely over-done. But I did try to put my own twist one it. :L
I tried to still make her herself, but there is a few changes; after going through something that drastic you would change as a person, I would assume. But yeah, James is a very, very stubborn person. 
Thank you for the review!

“No I didn’t!” I defended truthfully, my voice still a little rusty from the whole just-waking-up thing. “I just watched.” -LOL
Loving it.

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Thank you! I'm glad that you're still enjoying it! And I hope that you like the rest. 
When I wrote that, I was just like ... 'witty', and then I felt really, really proud of myself; I'm not a witty person at all. :D
Thank you for the review!

I feel like James is bipolar. I mean, to start with you've got so much going on at this point that the story is getting kind of hard to follow, though this was one of th better chapters lately. But I thought from the begining it was fairly obvious that he didn't love Evie, he just sort of tolerated her because she was there to tolerate. 

And then after everyone found out, I kind of felt like James didn't get the blame he deserved, because it was really his fault, but everyone just kind of forgave him and ignored that.

And now he's acting all high and mighty even though it's really his fault that they're in this situation in the first place.

It's just really confusing to me, and I'm not sure how I'm supposed to feel about any of the characters, and Kyle and Elle - everyone's mad at them and they've treated Charisma terribly, but no one is bother to say anything to them in the hospital wing? Kyle DEFINITELY doesn't deserve to be there, he's been wrose than anyone else.

I don't know. I really like this story, but the last couple of chapters have really confused me.

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Sorry about the confusion. 

Basically, if a friend went missing or you didn't know where they were and it was them in trouble, then everything else wouldn't seem to matter as much because you're intent on finding them. At least, that is what I would be like. 

Alike Charisma I am not a person to blame, I think that everyone has a reason for doing something. James didn't actually mean to say what he did, and he has kept the secret for so long. People were just glad that Charisma was safe more than anything else. 

People are mad at Kyle more than Elle, but you still feel something for your friends, no matter what they do. 
Kyle still cares for Charisma, he was just scared. 
James did tolerate Evie, but she was lovely to him from the beginning so he never saw the mean side. 
I did write somewhere in there that the punishment that James put on himself would be worse than anything that anyone else could do to him. 
Sorry again for the confusion :P I hope that things are a little clearer.

OMG JAMES IS SUCH A PRICK. WHY is he mad at Charisma? His ex is the one thats the cow here? Seriously, you'd think he'd be glad Chic finally managed to grow a backbone and not put up with all the trash. But NO he's all 'I'm so dissapointed in you' AGRHHH. WHAT an IDIOT. And what has he done with the Wolfsbane.I have to carry on reading to find out xxx

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Ahh, James has his reasons :P
Thank you for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I hope that you like the next. :)

Ugh, James is so PMSing...
And Evie needs to die. Maybe. Yes. No. Heck yes. 
Still loving Lois and Dix.
Kyle needs to get kicked off the team.
8/10

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James really is isn't he? I hadn't thought of it like that before. :D
Good opinion on Evie! Thanks for the review!

i eagerly waiting for next chp ...plz speed up . n cn u plzzz plz get a a final confrontation btwn jamesss poo n wolfy .???

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm afraid that I will update when I can. I have all the chapters written, it's just a matter of waiting for the validation and when I can come on and update, it's exam time :P

Trust me, a confrontation will come up soon.

I absolutely love this story! It is perfection. I have a comment on the banner. Why the change? I loved the old one it was adorable. This new one is pretty, yes, but in my opinion the origional was perfect

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Thank you so much for the review. The fact that you love this story means so much to me! :D
I changed the banner because the story line changed, it needed a slightly darker outlook, but still sweet. The artist is the same one who did the original and she had a slightly new style, which I love. :P If you preferred the original, I'm sorry, but you could always imagine that it was still the banner?

OH MY GOD. You have to continue and quickly or else i will eat you. This is so well written and left me wanting more and more, so you can imagine how i'm feeling now, left hanging haha. Your talented and amazing, you describe your characters with such detail and humor, it makes me wish i was one. If it was possible i'd give this 11/10 stars. Oh and by the way, i think Evie deserved what she got, if i was Lois i'd done a Snape and cursed her ear off!

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Thank you so much for the review. I can happily say that it had made my week. I am thrilled that you like this story :P
I will update soon, the next chapter is written and should be up when another story's chapter has been validated.

James needs to get over himself and see that Charisma is only defending herself from Evie. He should realize that shes had enough of her bulling. I loved your chapter I still think there should be more J/C interaction, please update as soon as possible.

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Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you loved the chapter. There will be plenty of Charisma and James action in the next one, trust me :P

oh my goodness gracious me. i just have to say something first. like James is disappointed in myself. i can't believe that i didn't leave you a review earlier. it's been 39 reviews and i haven't left a comment behind ! not one ! i feel like running over to where ever you are and apologising on my knees then crying. no joke.

the only things that is really making me feel better is that you updated and that you have a new banner ! i liked your old one as well but this one is amazing ! it's just breath taking :):):) i have to say this. i love Dixie, she's just so sweet and funny. she can lighten the mood really well especially at the end :D

i love the Quidditch game at the beginning, i've always found it very cool when people write about Quidditch. Well, especially when you do because it just flows so much better when you've written it. okay... i just sounded like a half stalker and a half suck up. so i'll just shut up now. i almost forgot about Evie... until this chapter, then all the bad memories started to flood in when James and her were dating (vomit in my mouth) it was just wrong. just wrong. 

hahaha, anyway so sorry about the VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY late review. i can't believe myself. i just can't believe it... :(

saffy
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Yay! You review, I actually look forward to this each time I write a chapter! Thank you so much. There is no need to apologise, it's a bust time of year!I know that I am only just about scraping through. 

A new banner! it's by the same lovely person who did the old one, but she got promoted a while ago and I loved this new style that she had taken on, so I decided that it may be time for a new one, especially consider I had changed the plan of the story . .  a lot. 

I'm glad that you like Dixie, she's so fun to write :P

Ahhh, the Quidditch scene, it's the hardest thing I think, to write. How could you forget about Evie?! She's unforgettable! :P I have nightmares about the girl!

I will update soon!

First, I loved this chapter! And second, I had a quick question. Do you write  a story them just put the chapters up, or do you write each chapter after you have posted the one before? Sorry if that was confusing :)

Callie

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Most people write the chapter and then post it, write another, post it ect ect. But I am weird :P I write the entire story before I post it, that way long updates wont be in between, the longest that I have ever left it is maybe two weeks and that is only because I post one chapter per story at a time. 
Thanks for the review.

Hiya, I read the whole thing yesterday (I've done a few reviews) and was wondering, how long does it take for you to write a chapter? And just one more thing... u mentioned a sequel?? :D love it! :D keep writing!

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Thank you very much for the review. I remember your reviews :P

Depending on the story, it doesn't always take too long. For Wolfsbane it takes me a couple of days if I sit down and write non-stop. For 'Happy Endings', it takes a couple of weeks. But every person is different. 
The sequel will be posted after this, I already have 10 chapters written.

I just wanted to say that this is the best fanfiction.ever. :) I know you get millions of people saying this, but please update soon! I check to see if there's a new chapter literally every 5 minutes. I am dying to know what the secret that Lysander told James was! So, update soon? Please?! 

-Leah :)

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Thank you for the review. I will update soon, I promise. I'm so glad that you like this story, and that you think it's the best. You actually have made my day by saying this. 
The secret isn't that amazing in my opinion, but pretty cool all the same.

Nowww you can updte! I need a summer story plz!

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Thanks for the review. :D I will update soon!

ok. i'm going to throw a temper tantrum until chap. 30 is out. seriously! i'm hooked. plz plz plz write quickly!!

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Thank you so much for all the reviews. I'm so glad that you liked this story :P It will be out soon, I promise

awsome. plz hurry up with the next part :P

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Thank you so much for the review. I will update soon. I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter.

Forgot what i was going to say. haha. I wrote this review  and it deleted the bottom half. =(

Okay i said i hate Evie and that I would be in human if i didn't.

Kyle and Ellie better come to there senses. Kyle is/Was *sniffs* her big brother and i cried when he hexed her thanks so much for that. ANd Ellie is Dixie's sister from another mister!!!

I was on TDA's giant earser for my banner and saw Wolfsbane, and there you were. ANd of course the first thing i read is that the ending is darker. Which Scares me ALOT. 

haha

Anyways update soon or else MWHAHAHA

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Lol, I thought that someone may see that. (sol) (formally sunny) re-did it, it's awesome. I changed it today - or am doing it as I write this. I love it. I just meant that the original ending was supposed to be many chapters ago and ending with a kiss, but I re-wrote it and ended it differently, and threw in a lot more of her dark and 'wolfy' side. 

Evie is evil :O she needs to be ended. permanently. Their group will make up, I don't think that I could end it with them apart, I love Kyle too much. 

Thank you so much for the review.

Holy Cow, this is awesome (: 
Once again, I bow to you and your kick-butt writing skills.

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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked this one. Your review has made me blush :P

Evie annoys the hell out of me and if i was charisma i would punch her in the face! :)  and I feel so bad for James. Its like all this Internal conflict with him!  Amazing chapter once again

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Thank you so much! James seems to be incredibly confused, but that will get sorted out soon enough. 
Charisma should actually take your advice! I will update soon.

jaaammmeeesss!!! ugh. i'm with the girls, evie deserved everything she got.  james can go pout over chic defending herself all by himself. so there. *pouts* 

and just when we all thought the drama was almost over you add that lovely little snippet to your author's note. dun dun dunn indeed...

can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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*pouts right back*
James is a bit of a brooder. :P The girls have the right idea though, they just want destruction all round. 
The next chapter will be full of drama; you can't get rid of it yet :P
Thanks for the review. I will update soon!

Wow! Great chapter! I really liked it. But I'm so unhappy, too, because of the James/Charisma problems. That Evie is a life ruiner. Someone should lock HER away. Poor Charisma, though. Sometimes it seems like nothing ever goes her way. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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Evie is a total life ruin-er, we should just burn her and be done with it. :P I'm glad that you liked this chapter, don't worry, things will pick up soon!
Thanks for the review.

This is a really good story. I like it a lot! :)

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Thank you so much. I'm glad that you like this! Thanks for the review.

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