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Wow, I love the butterfly part. Is the secret that you need to be in love? I hope so...

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Thank you for the review! I really like the butterfly thing too, it's probably one of my favourite parts of this story. You'll have to wait and see I'm afraid :D

Aww!! That was so cute :) . James always makes her smile doesn't he? No matter how mad she is at him. I don't like it sometimes, but then you write scenes like this and I forget about that! I loved this chapter!

WhatAboutRegulus

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Thank you for the review! 
James tries his hardest! I thought it was about time that the old James showed his face for a bit! :)

you have to realise you are in love. that is the secret. i think it is a good way of showing it.

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Thank you for the review! I hope that you like the rest. 
You're the only reviewer that I can remember that has reviewed with that answer :)

awww ... you definitely delivered on this all james and charisma chapter! it was SUPER adorbs! especially when we found out that those 7th years were dom and lysander, and he made those butterflies for dom...that crazy girl with scissors...XD
that was so cute. but i have to wonder...not necessarily WHAT the secret was, but HOW james got it out of xander...? i am VERY curious now.
and that teaser...OMG, i can't stop laughing long enough to click the next chapter arrow...ROFL

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Hehe. Thank you, sweet! 
I thought that it was about time that Charisma and James had some alone time. :)
I'm glad that you liked it. I have always considered Dom to have a sweet side, but in a way that it's only ever brought out by Lysander. Cheesy and completely over-done in the way of story lines, but I just fell in love with the idea. 

You are THE only person that I know of that has wandered that. Thank you - for mixing it up and all that jazz. :)

I love the Mean Girls reference! :D

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Thank you for the review :)

Do you have to be in love? Hm.m.m.m.10/10

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Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter!

it's gonna sound cliche, but the secret is probably that you have to know you're in love, or something to that effect, right? ugh maybe not i'm incoherent right now lol..

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You never know :P Pus, obvious and totally cliche is my forte. Thank you for the review. I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story.

Aww, so cute! 
Methinks I know the secret ;) Or maybe I'm just incredibly daft.
That portrait was.fascinating. He is wise beyond his brush strokes!
8/10
(I was expecting them to kiss!)

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You probably have guessed the secret, you seem incredibly intelligent, so you probably have. It's not a difficult one. :P
I'm glad that you think it's cute, I wasn't sure if it may have been too cutsie. So I'm chuffed that you like it. :D

I LOVE

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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it. I will update after the queue reopens. Thanks for the review! :D

It seems like Charisma has been getting wise advice from inanimate objects a lot lately. First the hat, now the painting. 
I wish inanimate object would give ME wise advice from time to time. 

Anywho, this chapter was very cute and fluffy- right up my alley. 
:)wincica

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What can I say, inanimate objects actually rock! :P I hadn't noticed that, you're seriously observant!
I know what you mean, I wish that you could just be walking along, and then if you're having a bit of a naff day, a random object would begin to speak. it would make you happier :P Or it would me, anyway. Plus, according to my mind, they happen to be very insightful. Can you imagine, popping over to the lamp post for a bit of relationship advice? 
Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you liked this one, cute and fluffy.

WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING?

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The chapter had been in the queue for four days :D It can only wait. Thanks for the review.

Probably the best chapter yet!! What James did for Charisma is really sweet!! And no, I have no idea what Lysander's secret might be *frown*
Now I really want to read the next chapter because, honestly, that little sneak peak was soo intriguing!!!

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Thanks for the review. :D
I'm glad that you liked this chapter, and that you found the preview intriguing. I promise to update soon. Lysander's secret, not many people have had an idea, it's rather confusing. :P

Soo, to be blunt I LOVE THIS! haha,. :) it is my life. without it i would die :O lol. 
i've been readin gthis book for a while now, isnce it was only four chapters!, but unfortunately i was busy and hadnt read it for a while but once i read it again i immediatley feel in love again. its th eperfect love story! the one we all crave for. and it has the right amount of an adventure to make the story not completely revolve around the love story. 
i have to say that i l&#9829;ve Drew. he is my favorite and i never want to let him go. xD but kyle? could he be more of a prat? i dont think so. how can he think such evil things about Charisma? shes like the sugar on ... well everything! 
& Evie. i know she's kind of gone now, but can we bring her back and you know ... may make her 'accidently' fall off the astronmey tower? :D tthat'd be grrreat. ;) just kidding. but she def. has to get her cumopence. 
btw, i love your amazing fanfic soo much i told all my friends at school, & they all read it now too! xD then we have little chats about all the characters and what could happen later in the book. 
please update again soon & keep it coming i beg of you. if not i swear to you, i may die. :P
ps- you totally have to make Charisma/James' song "I'd Lie" by Taylor, her lookalike, because it soo descirbes her feelings. or "Teardrops on my Guitar" or "You belong with me". all perfect choses. xD
Sincerly,
Robin.

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoy this fic. You told your friends? That's so awesome. Thank you so much. I am smiling so big right now. :D

Drew is a cutie and Kyle, although being a prat, is somewhat hawt! :P
Are you so sure that Evie is gone? She is rather persistent. But you never know. I like the astronomy tower idea, I might just have to use it. 
I will update soon, thank you so much. XD

i love it!! :) That would be incredibley awesome to see the butterflies. I love butterflies!

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Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you like the butterflies. I think that they're so pretty. XD

okay. so i started this story when i got home... its 930. i haven't done homework. this is most likely a huge problem. 
BUT I LOVE YOUR STORY! please update soon. 
secret = in love. it HAS TO BE. they need to freaking kiss. godd.
i love it.

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Thank you so much! I am so glad that you like it. I'm absolutely in love with your story 'Along Came Sirius'. 
You sat there are read it for that long? You're awesome. You deserve a medal that you read it all. I hope that you do all right on your homework, however every now and again it does need to be shoved aside :P

I will update soon. Thanks for your guess on Lysanders secret. You're so right on the kissing thing though.

It rocks, awsum story!
Please keep writing it if anything for my sake.

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Thanks you so much. I will update soon for you :P

Awww... loving this, thankyou so much for giving us an entirely james/Charisma chapter! :D 
I think this story is simply wonderful!
thankyou so much for such a wonderful chapter.
10/10
Ava xx
P.S. I laughed so hard after reading the next chapter preview! *snort*

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Thank you very much. I am glad that you enjoyed the James/Charisma action. I thought that the chapter preview would get the odd laugh...or snort. :P
I will update soon.

It's adorable. Perfect. Did I mention adorable? I just love Charisma/James. Even if James is a prat at times, you just can't stay mad at him. ;D. The butterflies were a brilliant part, but I am honestly confused about Lysander's "secret". If you haven't caught on, I'm quite daft and slow at times. Please spill? :)
I'm quite curious about what's going to happen to Ms. Lewis... x)
And now, I am unbelievablily (I think that's how to spell it... :l) excited for a whole chapter from Jamesy's point of veiw. Excellent job! Totally pumped for the next chapter! xD
C-Cheers,
Dana

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Thank you so much. 'Adorable' may have been mentioned a few times :P

Hmmm, Lysanders secret. I am afraid that you'll just have to wait, I wrote it out yesterday, and I can taunt you all with my knowledge. 
Ms. Lewis, she will get just what she deserves, but I'm not sure if you will all like it. 
James will tell all in the next chapter. :P

Thanks for the review. I will update soon. 

PS. When are you updating Speckdeline. and Ignorant. I can't wait for them.

YES!!! that was perfect, i loved the little portrait bit at the begining how he thought james is in love with charisma and not the other way around (made me super happy and it just has to be true!! please please be true!!!) and then you ended the chapter letting us know that charisma is no longer mad and that james is pretty much perfect and such a sweetheart for figuring out that charm!! it was sooo cute, if only some guy would do something like that for me!!(then again i would just be happy to be able to do magic!) thanks again!!! that was a great chapter, made my day! can't wait for the next one!

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Thank you so much :D I am so glad that you liked this chapter. 
James is a cutie. I write him as the perfect guy for all women (or I attempt to) He and Charisma are pretty much inseparable, I couldn't have them mad at each other for too long. 
I will update soon. Thanks for the review. 

PS. Being able to do magic would rock. XD

That list bit was super cute. I love butterflies(: I don't have much time for a longer review, but good chapter!

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Thanks so much. I'm so glad that you think so. Butterflies are awesome. I will update soon. XD

I love James! He's so sweet! Please update soon?
10/10

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Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you think James is a cutie. :P
I will update soon.

YAY! all James next chapter, eh? oh, ive waited so LONG for more James POV! im really super sorry this review is so short, i know, im a pathetic excuse for a fan, but please update anyway! oh, and i LOVED chapter 10 of an object of interest, very good! :)
please update soon, im dying!
oh, i wonder what Lysanders secret is, i havent got a clue!
loved it!
your fan becky!
infinity/10!

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You're in no way a pathetic excuse for a fan! You're a brilliant one! I will update soon! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. Thanks for the review. XD

OMJ! I read all 25 chapters in less than 10 hours! I loved them and I can't wait for the rest to come out. You are a very talented writer.

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In less than ten hours? You rock! Thank you so much for the review, I'm so glad that you're liking the story (and that you like my writing style, that's so good to hear). I will update soon. XD

AW!!! This chapter made me smile. It was one of those wonderfully written pieces that make your day; i dont know about yours but it surely did make my day =) I loved reading it, and you won't believe it, I read it TWICE! it was just too good.
The talk between the painting and charisma was really sweet and poor charms professor. but he gave a really good lesson which charisma learnt and I learnt too (i have been down in the spirits lately)!! It was really good. and it was even better to know that painting actually realized that JAMES HAD FEELINGS FOR HER!! it was superb i tell you!
and the Butterfly thing was cho chweet!! i loved it! I am seriously falling for James, very very badly!! LOL.
Anyway, Thank You so much for writing this chpter so that i could read it, and so that I could learn from it, and it could make me smile. 
You're really one of the BEST authors!!
*Hugs You tight* 
Thanks!!! Update more soon...
and yeah, not to forget, the preview has made me even more itching to read the next chapter. i loved the part about albus being shagged agaisnt the tree =P

INFINITY/10

cheers!
AD

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Aww, thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad that I could help you. I hope that your spirits have been lifted. I have been a little down lately too, reading this back made me remember what i was thankful for. 
I'm glad that you liked the butterflies. I thought that you might :P
*Hugs back tighter*
I will update soon.

aww how sweet :) I loved it and i can't wait for the next chapter :)
[=Miss Ginny Potter=]

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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I will update soon. :D

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