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I know you've finished your story now and I really do love it. I think if I could choose any name for Charisma it would be Adelaide which means kind and noble and I think it's a pretty name. Dixie's bit was alright but fairly uneventful which caused me to skim the majority of her part. But anyway I'm loving the story and I've read this far in only one day :)

Author Response

Thank you for the review! I'm really glad that you've loved this story, you're very sweet!
That's a pretty name, I hadn't thought of that! :D
It's okay :) Dixie isn't for everyone. Thank you again, and I hope you enjoy the rest!

HE GETS EVIE PREGGO IN THE NEXT CHAPTER? OR OES EVERYONE FIND OUT ABOUT CHIC?

Author Response

Thank you for the review! I hope that you like it; I'm loving the guesses! :)

Yes, I think he finally realized he likes her. - only wishfully thinking really. Ugh, depressing. James needs to just like Charisma! He is driving me insane! I liked Dixies point of view. I like it when you choose random people and show there side of the story.!

WhatAboutregulus

Author Response

Ah, give it a couple more chapters :P
Thank you for the review! I'm so glad that you like Dixie; she is one of my favourites!
I hope you enjoy the rest!

Haha, I liked the Veronica Mars reference. Nice!

Author Response

Thank you for the review! I am so glad that you pointed that out to me! I love that show, but I completely forgot to credit it! :D

and the award, for biggest idiot on the planet, goes to:
BUSYBUSYBETA!
i only JUST realized, when i began reading dixie's POV that these are all the same people from Seven. WOW. sometimes, i amaze myself. the more times you wrote 'dixie pruitt,' the more i thought to myself 'that name sounds really familiar. i wonder if she knows that there might be another story on the site with a character of a similar name...' it REALLY didn't help that since reading Seven, i've read a molly/arthur, and molly's maiden name was prewett. i am just being SO brilliant today.
anywho, i was VERY pleasantly surprised to find that the teaser from the last chapter was from CHARISMA'S POV. OH EM GEE! XD LOVED LOVED <i>LOVED</i> IT!
and please tell me that james' weird behavior is because yes, he IS coming to his senses, and that he is going to chuck miss horrible soon. PLEASE???
i am SO excited, all stupidity aside. =D

Author Response

Haha! Well, I can say that this made me chuckle! :D
I did wonder if some people wouldn't realise - but it's all good; I have done similar things in the past. 
I actually modelled the name Pruitt off of the Prewit family one; I have always loved the Prewit family and the name and just thought 'why not'. 
Well, I couldn't let the readers down :P It just had to be a Charisma POV thing. :D
I hope that you enjoy the rest! You'll have the have read it to find out!

AH a sequel! i cant wait to finish reading this one just so i can read the next!

Author Response

Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying this, and I do hope that you stay for the sequel, and like it just as much! :D

Hmm, I wasn't really into Dixie's insight. It was a little...all over the place. 
But, I do see James starting to show a little backbone...
But I'm terribly sad that Chic is getting all normal now. It doesn't fit. 
Nice.
7/10

Author Response

Thanks for the review. I thought that it was about time that James grew up a bit. 
Dixie's mind is a bit all over the place, I will go back and review and see if I can improve this chapter a bit. :D

I would caller her either Charity Price or Caroline Price or Patience Noble. My best friend is named Caroline and she's a doll.

Author Response

You've got to love Caroline, she sounds nice. I like the name Charity, I had never thought of that. It's interesting. Thanks for the review.

Fabulous darling! i will check three times a day for that sequal as soon as i finish this story! Keep up the wonderful work!

Author Response

Thank you so much! When this is over, it won't be long before the sequel is up! Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you're enjoying it. :D

sorry to sidturb you again but what website do u get the video stills from? btw. this chapter was sooo cute. hug on the quidditch pitch is the cutest name for it. 

x

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Thank you so much. XD

I am afraid that you can't post direct links on this site, but if you type in to Google 'Taylor Swift Fansite' and then click on one of them, then click on 'Gallery' or 'Photos' or something like that, then just flick through them all. 

Ps. It's no trouble. XD

awesome chapter this one! i like how u had several perspectives during this chapter and i like Dixie. she seems very funny. next chapter now!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author Response

Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you liked the chapter, and Dixie. :P

Sequel you say?! Hooray, so I won't be left with a hollow and empty feeling inside of me once I finish this wondeful fic. I bloody well hope that realisation has come to James, if it hasn't it's time to grab the wet fish and give him a good slap about the head. I hope he does chuck queen bitch then go for Chic, either that or go full steam ahead with Chic and then dump her in spectacular fashion, and call it 'revenge'. I probably wouldn't change Charisma's name, why would we, we know her as Charisma Price, the girl who's hopelessly and madly in love with James Potter, her best friend, who probably fancies her in return but is afraid to go for it. Oh and i can't wait but thats because i'm just about to go and read it once this review is finished. So once again YAY! for sequel.

RyanB

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Woop! The sequal is well under way. But I have hit a stopping point *smacks forehead repeatedly against wall* cause I need the ending to this story, which, stupidly, is under a re-vamp and hasn't been completly concluded. It's a really silly reason, but I need quotes from it. So until I get this one done, I can't get those few starting chapters of the sequal. But I am only now final editing the last chapters. So I will rub in everyones faces that I know what happens, for real this time (I keep changing my mind) :P

James is pretty stupis isn't he. I will let you hit him with that fish. Tell me how he took it. 
I love the way that you write reviews, have you ever considered writing a story for this site? (It says on your page that you have, yes, I have checked out your page, cause I am creepy like that) I think that you would do an amazing job.

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and I hope that you like th next chapter. XD

so cute. i love dixie!

Author Response

Woop! A Dixie lover. I am so glad that you like her. Thanks for the review. XD

Okay, my euphoria is gone. The wait has begun again... oh why oh why did I have to find this story before it was finished?? The wait will kill me, I waste all my time checking to see if you updated it. Yes, that is my #1 pastime these days... so sad... :)  
   I absolutely loved this chapter and I don't get why others don't like Dixie that much. She personally cracks my up with her dry comments and rebel attitude. I'm so happy to hear there is a sequel!! I'll just miss Charisma. She's such an original character. I think James is denying his love for Charisma... what a suprise. If I could name Charisma, or guess what her name was, I'd think something like Hope? Liberty? (this is just because Charisma is a word-name... do you get what I'm saying? :) ) Or maybe Cara? Or Kira? Or Katherine? I have no idea!! You have done such a great job, in my mind I can only think Charisma. Oh, will there be a little insight into another character like there was with Dixie this chapter? Evie would be cool... or albus (he cracks me up, too)
 Well, enough of my rambling. As soon as I post this I will refer back to my check-every-three-minutes routine... 
 Thanks again for creating such a amazing world!! Now go madly write!! Stop wasting time reading my review! WRITE!!

Author Response

Thanks so much for the review Wren, once again you have actually cracked me up. You're brilliant! 

I'm so happy to know that you love my story so much, I can still remember when it was a wee little idea in my mind before it got out on to paper (or technically, my computer memory. But you get what I'm saying)

Good ideas for names, actually a couple are a little close. There was one point that I considered calling her Hope, but I know a girl called hope - and in personalities they're pretty similar. But then I heard the name Charisma, and I just thought. THATS IT!

The insight to Dixie was a little random snippet to (hopefully) intregue you to want the sequal, that will be written from Dixie's POV, so I'm glad to hear that you liked it. 
But I might put one in the next chapter by your request. Actually, you've just given me an amazing idea...

*scurries off to write it down*

*scurries back and curses her terrible memory*

That's so much. Hopefully it is one that the readers will like. 
I hope you have fun with your 23 minutes routine, it shouldn't be more than a few days before the next update. I hope that you enjoy it. Thanks for the amazing review. XD

screamed with joy when i saw chapter 19 was up! please please update soon james is getting jealous and they have to get together soon!!! laughed so much at james' serious joke! maybe i am just simple minded but i thought it was hilarious. oh and loved the die hard reference, you cant beat john mclane! oh and prehaps olivia...hmmm. anyway another great chapter. loved it x

Author Response

Thanks for the review. Die Hard, you've got to love it. XD

I got the James/Sirius reference from the many Maurader stories that use it. I thought it might have been suitable for that moment. I'm glad that you liked it. 

I'm glad that you liked the chapter. The next one should be up soon. You screamed with joy? You've just made my day.

O-M-G! how could you do that to me? i HAVE to read chapter 20! please post it soon, sorry my revoew will be short, but ill pop roudn you MTA to fu;y explaijn just how amazing thois chappie was! LOVE Dixes POV! yay a sequal, so exciting! :)
pleasepleaseplease update soon! 
p.s am i right oin saying next chapetr will be one of the big dramatic ones right near the end? *wipes tear*
LOVE it!
your number 1 fan: Becky! :)
x

Author Response

Thanks so much for the review. You would be right in saying the next chapter has a dramatic end, one of the biggest I believe. Maybe the one after it could beat it, the next few are rather dramatic :)

I'm so happy that you like Dixie; she hasn't gone down too well with everyone. But it's cool to know that you like her, I think that she's really funny. But on the other hand, I'm not really a funny person. Lol. 

Sorry about the MTA thing, but I am seriously dim and cant work the Meet the Author forum, I am sure I will figure it out soon. XD

I will update as soon as I can, thanks again.

OMG! I havne't even read this yet but the next chapter is out!! At last! Halljuhah!! YAY!! 

** got to go madly read this now**

Author Response

Thanks so much for the review. It's actually made me smile so much. It's brilliant! 
It's so good to know that people are enjoying my story. I hope that you enjoyed it. XD

Wolfy, let me tell you something, is there was something Sirius Black loved (other than James, Lily, Harry, ect...) it was pranks and jokes. Also I wish they would start calling her Wolfy again.-MaggieP

Author Response

Thanks for the review. Sirius Black is a brilliant character who's loves are duly (dodgy spelling) noted. XD
The name Wolfy will be mentioned soon, I promise.

Great Job!

xoxo
~Marcia

Author Response

Thanks so much. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. XD

Wow!!! I loved it! I mean i love every chapter, but this one was really good! I really like this story, and i cannot wait to see what happens next. And i have no idea what Chic's other name could be, but i like the one you gave her! I hope that James will realize it... And why does he always have to act weird when things get good? And Drew kind of annoys me because he's always around. Dixie and Fred would be good together I feel. I cannot wait for the next chapter!
10/10
Wow!!!
Natalie

Author Response

Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you're loving the story. It's really nice to know that people are enjoying it. 
Charisma's names were noting like what people would probably expect, they wern't her at all, but I think that the name Charisma developed her as a character. 
James is silly, he always managed to mess things up. It's just him. It's his speciality. 
Drew is kinda annoying I guess, but he always pulls through in the end, but he doesn't know when to back off either. 
A Dixie and Freddy liker I see - there arn't many of them at the moment, but I'm happy to know that there is someone out there. XD

i hate dixie :|

ah. james / charisma

Author Response

Thanks for the review. How come you don't like Dixie? She's too abrasive for some people. I'm glad that you like Charisma and James though, they're perfect for each other. XD

ah! ah! AH! u put up the 19th chappie! yayayaya! i was meerly checking the website casually then i saw this
'Wolfsbane loopyluna Chapters: 19 reviews: 449
and i was like 19 chapters. i've read 18. OHMYGOD! she put up another chapter. and i read it just after my very strange but original happy dance. it was more like a parade but oh well. XD

gah! i love this story and especially i love its chapter images. they're amazing! who did them? because when my account in tda validates (its been FOREVER!) i would also love chapter images and ur ones are so x19989898245934 good! i was like AH! i love the first chappie image of an object of intrest and the 18th one in Wolfsbane. They're so good. so can u reccommend someone to me? please? with your fantastic story on top? ahahaha. now that was lame. -_-
tee hee. 
keep it up! i can't pick a favourite part in this chapter. :( but i really really really really hope that james is starting to realise he's head over heels is love with Wolfy! hey, question. after james found out that Wolfy likes him what happenned after that? did he just get over it or did he think that she was joking or something? please tell. 

ily and your stories!!

saffy
x

Author Response

Woop! You reviewed. Thank you so much! I am loving Whole Again, it's awesome. 

I'm so glad that you asked about TDA, cause not many people do. Okay, the chapter images that you mentioned. 'SwissMiss' @ tda did chapter one for Object of Interest, and I did Chapter 18 of Wolfsbane. it's not usual that I make a decent chapter image but when I do, I post it. 
At the moment, I request all of my inages from 'FIND!' @ tda, she's awesome. She always gives me a brilliant images, it's as if she can read my mind. But 'cookie monster' is fab, their work is always good. 
I'm sure that James will hurry up soon and realize, I have so many exams this week, but when they are done, I will finnish off chapter 25 of this story, it's 24 pages so far - extra long. XD

Oh and as for your question. He sort of just thought that she and Teddy were mucking around, cause they usually do. James is very good at hearing things that he wants to and blocking out the things that he doesn't. I guess, in a way, he just brushed it off. 

Oh and your thingy wasn't lame, it was awesome. it made me smile. And I would love to see your happy dance-parade one day. XD

Errr you're torchering me with the previews! I loved this chapter and Dixie and I can't wait for the next chapter! Please please please update soon!

Author Response

Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you love this chapter, and Dixie. She's a doll. 
Previews, hmm. They're torture? Good! Hehe. XD

Another amazing chapter as usual. I did notice some grammar mistakes, but it didn't draw me away from the story. My brain is fryed so i can't really guess.

10/10

Author Response

Thanks for the review. Sorry about the grammer thing, as you have probably guessed, I am not the best spellar/grammer person in the world. Or actually, anywhere. It's rather funny actually. 
Poor brain, I hope it gets better soon. XD

i'm gussing... Abby... and ... uh... ummm...Jasmine??? YAY! im so glad there's a sequel!! i was so scared u would stop writing the story completly! not so thrilled about not from chic's pov, but o well.

Author Response

Nice names. They might be right, they might be not. :P
I'm happy to know that you like my story. I don't think that I can give up this story easily. It's like my child! Sorry about the not Chic thing, but she will be in every chapter. XD

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