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I don't usually cry. I almost never cry over books, but this?! You just broke me. You are a god. Seriously, how is it possible for abhumanbeing towrite that?! I love you

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Can you have an Oog as a patronus? haha you kinda just became my most favorite person of all time :)

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I really hope so! :D
Thank you so much, and for the review too! I hope that you like the rest!

She forgave him then? I'm glad she broke down, if she didn't I would think she wasn't human. Everyone has to break at some point! Great chapter!

WhatAboutRegulus

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I try my very hardest to make my characters human, give them flaws and make their decisions realistic, so I'm glad that you like it!
Thank you for the review! :)

*sigh*
well, at least charisma SEES that james always manages to wriggle his way back into her good graces after being such an idiot. now if only she could STAY mad at him...maybe long enough to get him to chuck lewis?? ;D
and dean, huh? i want it to be dean thomas. he was DISHY back in the day! XD

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Thank you for the review!
I thought that it was about time for Charisma to realise that she will forgive James for anything. 
Actually, I hadn't considered it to be Dean Thomas; I imagined him to be about Teddy's age - I think, but then again you are free to imagine him how you would like to :)
But I totally agree about the whole Dean Thomas thing; he's lush :P

Ah! You through in a Doctor Who reference! This makes me very happy!!! Hey! I'm almost positive Fred and Roxane are twins but at the same time I have absolutely no idea where I got that piece of information so don't trust me! I suggest you look it up. Anywho this was fantabulous!!!

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I love a bit of Doctor Who, it's good to see someone else on this site who does too :D
I have read many stories on here when Roxy and Fred are twins, but it has never been stated that they are. :)
I actually have another story where they are twins, because I'm kinda in to that idea at the moment :) 
Thank you again.

Ug, im...soo.tired... *sigh* ill finish this tomarrow, 10/10

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Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

The emotions in this are a lot to handle. One second its sad, the next its happy. I think she forgave him way too easily. But oh well, whatever floats your boat. I was hoping for a real kiss there too ;)
8/10

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Hoping for a kiss, weren't we all. :P
I apologise for the jumpy-ness, but I didn't want to keep it too sad, the story had too much sadness. I wanted to cheer it up a little. Thanks for the review.

Magical people like Doctor Who. 
I LOVE YOU!
Also, magical you likes to throw plot turns at me. 
YAY! 
Lastly, magical me likes your story. A lot. 
Enough to stay up reading it until 1 o'clock in the morning.
On a school night. 
Four hours of sleep, honey!

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You've got to love a good old plot turn. DC has them all the time :P
Yeash! Four hours of sleep, how do you manage. does that mean that you have to get up at five, gawwh, how do you do it?!
Love you too! I'm glad that you like the story. Thanks for the review.

Ohmygod I nearly started crying at the end of this chapt.
Ur an amazing writer to show like all those feelings going on in here :)
Luv ur story!

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you are liking this story. The fact that you think I am an amazing writer just makes me so happy - so thank you for that. I will update soon. :D

wow, so good! cant wait to read no. 18!

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Thanks, number 18 is the last one at the moment, and then the next will be up in a week or so. XD

Well its passed midnight and only one more to go... :) I read this thing in one go... oh crap I have to get up at 6:30 tomorrow... yay fun... AMAZING story btw...

xoxo
~Marcia

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Thanks so much. I'm glad that you're liking the story. I get up at 6:30 too, it's too early, morning's should be banned. XD
Thanks for staying up late and reading it, it means alot as the author.

I love this story. I just found it and I read it from the first chapter to this one without stopping, and I can't wait for an update!!!

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Oh my gosh! I am so proud of you! You read 17 chapters in one go? You're brilliant. XXX

I'm glad that you like this. I hope that you like the rest, the next chapter should be up in a couple of days.

hi! just wanted to say this is a REALLY GOOD work.
though, maybe you should enlist in a beta?
the grammar in certain areas... 
and you repeatedly spell "definitely" as "defiantly"
lol other than the grammar, good work!
nice chap images too :)

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Thanks for the review. A beta might be a good idea - but I have no idea how to get one :S

But apart from my dreadful spelling, I'm glad that you like it. XX

yay, i finally caught up with all the chapters, and I really love this story. its rather addicting and I enjoyed reading it. Can't wait for the next chapter. post soon !

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Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you like my story. The next chapter is in the queue. 

I can't believe that you read all seventeen. You're a right ole' star. XX

So im now up to date with the chapters and have favouritedthis story! itsbloody fantastic and i love Charisma so much she reminds me of Alice Cullen. (sorry if this offends you i know some hp people hate twilight) 
Cant wait for next chapter! x

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Thanks so much for the review. It dosen't offend me at all, lol. I'm glad that you like this story. Charisma was actually based a little on Alice. 
The next chapter should be up in a few days. XD

i m in some hurry but all i would say is this chp was gr8. i enjoyed it immensely. and especially d part b/w james nd charisma. i love it. thanks a lot 4 writing something so great. update more soon!!
cheers!
AD

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Thank so much for the review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter. I hope you like the rest as much. XD

i love the fact that you finnaly got evie out.please update!

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I'll update when the queue opens again. :P
Thanks for the review.

Aw. I hate the spawn of Satan! Gr :/

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Lol, me too. Let's hate her together, we could start a club. Grr

aww!! james needs charisma!! that ending was soo cute!!he's sooo sweet and caring to charisma...a thought just came to me.if he wants to hurt everyone that hurts charisma, then why isn't he hurting evie..i mean, yeah she didnt really hurt charisma but she's insulting her!! james needs to be like his dad and get rid of her already!!
dean huh? maybe charisma will get james jealous!! cuz it seems like he will be staying a while and it seems like he noes teddy too!! cant wait for the next chapter!

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Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you like my story. For the Dean situation - maybe? :P

You've actually made a very good point, I do't know the answer. I guess it's cause he's blind to Evie's faults, alike Charisma is to his. But he really does need to be like his dad and giv her a good kick up the buttox. XD

Loving your story so far! Its so addictive =] 
I can't wait for James and Chic to end up together...the suspense is killing me (in a good way, of course).

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I hope in a good way. XD
I'm so glad that you are enjoying my story. I hope you like the rest as much as you have liked it so far. Thank you very much for the review. Have a happy new year.

Great chapter! Drew is turning out to be a great character :)
Keep updating!!

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you liked this chapter. Drew is pretty cool. :P

Oh my freaking god. This, is by far your best chapter ever!!! I love it... i cannot even explain how awesome that chapter was!! i mean... all the emotions you packed in there and the end... i mean it good but... man... this story is bloody brilliant!!! I loved it! Top notch work mate.
10/10
Natalie

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Thank you so much! XD
I'm so happy that you liked this chapter, I didn't realize that I had managed to put that much emotion in. It was written in so many parts I thought that it would be jumpy. But people seem to enjoy it, so I'm happy. 
Thanks for the ten out of ten (and the review) :P
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. XD

wow, sorry about the long time it took for me to review, christmas is really hectic. :S

i honestly thought james was going to kiss chic, or at least properly apoigise to her, but then i remember he still had a girl-friend to think about; james really is being a jerk, still hanging around with her.

dean! fenrir grayback? wow! (haha, holiday jitters)
i think dean's an auror, which might mean trouble. yeah, i expect he'll stay, for a while at least, but no one can really tell, no?

not really much else to say other then can't wait for the next upgrade. ;)

-Nickole.

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Thank you so much for the review. Christmas is pretty hectic. XD
You're a pretty good guesser on the 'Dean thing' but I can't give anything away, so I can't say oui, or non. I'm glad that you have the holiday jitters, pass them on to everyone that you can. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! XXX

wolfsbane is awesome . i luv da story in all . but dude isnt spelled  
like dood. when r u gunna write da next chapter.

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The next chapter can go up when the queue re-opens. Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you like my story. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. XD

this is getting better and better, each chapter! I can't wait until the queue opens because that means you'll be able to update again! 
love, love LOVE this story!
Ava xx

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Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like my story. The queue will be open before you know it. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

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