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Oh gosh, tears in eyes. That is all.

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This is my fourth time reading this and it never fails to make me cry, which is incredible because the only book I've cried while reading was Deathly Hallows. Amazing!

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Hating James right now. What about Teddy, though? If Charisma needs someone with her, doesn't he?

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Thank you for the review! 
Teddy does go with her, but in this story, he is a werewolf, she he can't look after her; Wolfsbane is difficult to get a hold of :)
I hope that you enjoy the rest!

That's interesting. I liked how you made it so Scorpius said that, when she was her werewolf half, it only recognized James and called it James. I thought that was very creative :P. Gosh WHY DIES JAMES KEEP BACKING OUT! I'm getting super frustrated with him at the moment, not to complain. That boy needs to get to his senses.!

WhatAboutRegulus

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Thank you for the review!
I love writing Scorpius; I honestly think that apart from a couple on my page, he's in every story. I love to write his characterisation!
Thank you very much :P
Thank you for the review! I think that it's explained soon, I hope that you enjoy the rest!

Holy. Crap.
Poor Charisma. 
James is stupid. 
Evie needs to GTFO.

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Everything is admittedly in a bit of a mess at the moment. But everything will sort itself out. Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're still enjoying this!

omg. i cannot BELIEVE james. ugh, he is so infuriatingly stupid sometimes! how could he leave her on another full moon?! UGH! >=ZZZ
and scorpius. wow. talk about amazing guys, he's handling these frightening episodes like a champ. WOW. =O

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Thank you for the review!
James is very short-sighted when it comes to life. 
I love writing Scorpius, I may have said that before, but I do just love it so much!

ok love the ,book(?), and but im getting sick of james's assholyness and that he loves her but doesnt know it. its actualy pissin me off and if it never happenes im guna be super pissed

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Thank you for the review. I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far. I hope that you enjoy the rest. James is being James. He and Charisma will work things out :)

OMG MY HEART HAS JUST BROKEN INTO A MILLION PIECES AND DIED.

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Oh no! I hope that it fixes itself soon! A heart is a precious thing. I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story. Thank you very much for the review. :)

Wow. That felt a little bit like an acid trip.
Now I'm realy curious as to what goes on in her head and why.
And James is still a jerk.
9/10

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James the jerk. A seemingly permanent title. 
Charisma's mind is a jumble, bless her. She goes through so much. I wanted to make it as if the pain that she goes through is the reason for her sweetness, she see's just what she has to appreciate.

Poor Charisma :(

At this point, I'm hating James.i mean, seriously?! At least Scorpius cares enough :) And the rest of the family..

Good job on your story, I love it!

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It's all right, this is the point in the story where there is no other emotion to feel towards him but dislike. :D 
I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story as much as you have so far, I'm so glad to hear that you love it.

Favorite qoute:
"Mrs Potter, did you just imply that you want me to have sex with James?" 
I cracked up. I also enjoyed:
"Mum still inflicts panic in the eye of any person containing testosterone - that includes a few women too."

on a different note, ooh very scary/suspenseful chapter. i must read on!

:)wincica

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:P I'm glad that you liked this one. I tired to make a good contrast so that the suspense (which I'm glad you think I somewhat achieved!) and the other aspects were balanced out in some form. 

Ahh! You quoted, I love it when people do that, it makes me feel so special! I hope that you like the next chapter as much.

amazing, really i cried :(

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Really? In a non-offensive possible way, that's really good to know. I'm glad that you liked it. XD

Oh... wow.

xoxo
~Marcia

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'Wow', that's a different way of explaining it. I'm happy that it's hit home to at least one of the readers. XX

wait, so does scorp really love chic or is he just saying that to appease the wolf side of her...?

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Oh, he's just saying that to appease the wolf side of her. He loves her as a friend, or a sister type figure. Scorp really loves Rose. XD

Interesting , but again in a good way. Its sort of different from how i pictured how her tantrums might be, but the same in alot of ways.

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Thanks for the review. XD
How did you imagine her tantrums? It was really hard to write, but in another way, kidna easy! I had a clear picture of what I wanted it to be like, but I couldn't put it in to words.

I just read this story all in one from chapter one til now and i LOVE it. its just amazing and chic and James are adorable. 
I love it when James gets all protective or worried about charisma its really just sooo sweet. i can't wait for the next chapter!!!

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Oh my Gosh! Really? I have cookies waiting for you at the end for reading all 14 chapters in one sitting! Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you liked it. XD

omg, what an insanely awesome chapter XD  
2 weeks! 2 weeks!  :( you just broke my heart (;
i love you and your story like charisma loves james
and like peanut butter loves jellyi would also like to point out that my idea sort of came through in that chapter XD as in, she tells people how she really feels. that made my day, even if it was non-intentional :L  have fun in the north XD 

oh and i hope no ones dead in the next chapter - 'cause i will cry, and then you'll feel bad and owe me a cookie XD

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Jelly is sehr nice. XD It was actually intentional about your idea. I had them all written down and I picked the ones that I felt that I could write or mention. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to break your heart!! I'll update ASAP!

2 weeks! man i gotta take up to reading more stories lol
it was absolutely amazing reminds me of this story kinda like Mr. Rochesters wife in Jane Eyre what Wolfy is like 
i loved this chapter as I do all of them
have fun whilst visiting family

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Thank you so much. The family fun wish is muchly appreaciated. (Very dodgy spelling moment there) XD
I never actually considered Charisma like that before, but now that you've said it, they are very much alike. Gosh, I love that book. Thanks for the review. XD

PLEASE HURRY UP WITH IT!!I LUV THIS A LOT AND I DONT WANT IT TO END LIKE THIS!

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Thank you so much. I'll update ASAP! XD

please write more soon, i need to read more of this

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Thank you so much. XD I'll update ASAP!

Oh wow... I cannot even begin to explain what I'm thinking right now. It was completely amazing. I... I'm speechless... that was your best work by far. Completely amazing... I wish I had more to say but... I'm stunned. It was great... so good. I loved it. You're a great writer. I mean really, you are amazing. You've got to be in my top three favorite writers on this site... it was so good. XD
I loved it.
10/10
Natalie

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Oh my gosh!! Thnak you so much. I'm over the moon that you think that. I never thought that I would achieve that - ever!
I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter. XD

OMG!!my fav part that tore me up...soo sad!!

She was in pain. “But you’re not James. You’re never James. I call for him but he never comes. He doesn’t love me; he hasn’t loved me for a while. He left me here, with you. You love me?” 

I nodded slowly. “Yes Charisma, I love you.” 

...(sigh) if only james was there...how dare he!! i cant!! cant!! wait until the next chap!! oo, but u really fooled me with the preview!! i thought it was james and i was soo happy!! well, im happy with this too...i just hope that next chapter is not gonna end with wat we read on the preview because thats a cliff hanger i really want to noe...so u better update soon...

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Because I'm cheeky, and a little annoying, you're going to have to wait and see, but trust me, in my eyes ... it's worth the wait. 
I'm over the moon that you liked this chapter, and I'm sorry about the inner pain that I have caused you. XD But still, this review has made me happy. XD

POST PSOT POST SOON

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XD Thanks! I'll attempt.

wow! this is being completely awesome!!! what happened to Chic? will u update soon please?^_^

2000/2000

Harry and Ginny

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2000/2000?? Oh my gosh! I am smiling like a complete loon! I'm so happy that you liked this, I wasn't sure if it would go down to well. XD
Thanks so much for the review.

Noo! You can't leave it at that! Can't wait for the next installment. The only thing I can say is it was rather stupid for me to be Reading this at 12am. My mind tends to over imagine stuff. And boy is my mind  going mental right now!

I love Chic and would just hope James will see some sense too!! Come on James! Ginny is perfect as I imagine she would be just as firey in the books as she is later on in life. Nice to hear from Albus too!! He Is always the sensible one in my eyes! Well apart from Rose that is!

Can't wait for the next update!

Love xxx

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Rose and Albus - always stuck with the sensible gene. XD
Thank so much for the review - and for reviewing on my other story too. 
I'm glad that you like Ginny, she's so much fun to write. Oh and that you stayed up until 12am to read this chapter. That's so awesome!!

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