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loved the James/Kat part. I think she is an interesting character and I`m looking foreward to read more about her.
I also think it was hilariuos when you made Al say the same thing, about breaking up rose and Scorpius, as James did.

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I'm glad to hear you like the characters! They're my favorite part of the story :) Thanks for the review, dear!

"She had crossed the line. The invisible line, mind you." I love that line! :) Can't wait to read morrre!!!

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Thanks, glad you like it! Appreciate you taking the time to read and review, dear =]

Do't know if I've read this one... I've been so behnd (as you seem to understand)... but its good. just ne thing... james is inredibly thick if he cant see why kat doesnt like him.

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Ah that's okay, don't worry about it! Being behind is my middle name... And, goodness, don't you know?! All boys are thick! ;)

Poor James - he was doing so well with Kat.  What has he done!!??

P

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Oh James... he's a rather frustrating bloke, really. But don't worry, things'll get better... hopefully ;)

hey :D 
sorry for the all to late reviwe but as you my know school is killing me.
but anywho i loved this chapter.
and i hope thing work out for james and kat.
and i wonder how they are going to make the malfoy and rose thing go.
if i know rose right she is going to find out and kille both al and james.
looking forrward to reading more when i get time ! 
love 
10/10

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That's okay, I totally understand the lateness - I haven't replied to your mail in like, seventeen years! I'm so sorry =] But I've been busy too, I'm sure you get that!

Ah, well, you'll see what happens with all that! I promise I'll update as soon as I can, with my school and everything. But you'll enjoy the next few chapters I'm sure! Thanks so much for coming back, I've missed you my dear!

lol! yay! theyre kinda getting along xD

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I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reviewing =]

Hey! 
I am back. :) 
Anyways, even though it was a shorter chapter then usual, you needed this..because its a filler chapter. I like the idea of love position a lot better, then the gum because the boils would go away. Hard to believe that Al is going to join James and his gang in a prank. And on the other hand I feel very sorry for Rose, she is doing what her heart tells her to do, it is very hard to tell your heart and what to do.

It is going to be interesting to read about Edwina Bleazle/ Scorpius. Wouldn't Rose understand it right away, she is not that stupid? Oh well, just going to have to wait and see. Hope it is going to be very good, as always. 

I loved the Kat/James part, I was smiling the whole 2 mins of reading it. I was very cute that James knows everything about his father, and using it to get attention of his crush. 

Oh Quidditch is going to be exciting to read. I cant wait until the tryouts and see who make the team. I wonder who is going to win the bet. =D 

Favorite quote would be: He was best mates with all the house elves, because he was constantly getting them in on his ridiculous experiments.

Long review! Hope that I made you happy. 
Update as soon as possible. 

Natalia

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Haha, poor James looses one of the few good players he has, huh? =P 

Weee, new chapter on one of my favourite stories =D =D =D Sorry about that last review, I was in a real hurry =P I was at school, in the library and was supposed to be in another part of the building having a violin lesson just then... I finished reading one minute before I had to be there, but HAD to leave a review =P So it was a bit quick =P

This story makes me grin even wider every time I read a new chapter =D New chapter NOW!!! =D 

"“Thanks.” Pause. “James.”

I almost died of shock. Kat and I were getting along!"
Hehe. 'Getting along' might be a little too much to hope for =P

"My mouth fell open. She had crossed the line. The invisible line, mind you. I drew that line. How dare she cross it!" 
Well, maybe she didn't know you HAD an invisible line, James... =P Haha

Hope your real life isn't as bad as it sounded on top here! =D "Smile, and the world thinks you're insane" ... or something like that ;) Anyways, you've gotta write more soon!!! =D

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Oh don't worry about it my dear - I'm just happy you left any review ;) I must admit, though, I was very excited to see you had left such a nice, long one!!!

Thanks for the fave quotes, they always make me laugh! Argh, well, it's just school really. It's been hectic... but things seem to be calming down and I hope to be able to get some time tonight =]

Thanks so much for the review - it's dedicated reviewers like you who keep my stories coming! So thanks =]

"Go to Hogsmeade!" Alex piped up.

"Um, Alex, we don't need a plan for that. We just sort of go."

"Right."

hahahahhaha, Serioulsy, I love love love Alex. I can't even help it!

I feel sort of bad for Rose! I think boils (was it?) would have been better than watching your boyfriend fall for another girl (even if it wasnt real)

10/!0

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I wasn't even intending it to be that way, but everyone seems to love Alex! It makes me laugh, because he really is such a funny character =] Thanks for the fave lines, I always have fun reading them!

Ah, yes, poor Rose... you'll have to just wait to see how that whole thing turns out. *stares cryptically at everyone* I mean it! Thanks for the lovely review, my dear. It makes me smile to see people are enjoying the story!!!

James is so mean... ANd this Chapter confused me a little. if I were James... I'd be nicer to Kat. Thats how normal people fall in love. But erm, James isnt normal?

“Go to Hogsmeade!” Alex piped up.

“Um, Alex, we don’t need a plan for that. We just sort of go.”

“Right.”

Alex is a friggen Three year old... but I love him. And I hate James, he really is mean, can't he see that?

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He is rather, sometimes. But I think he's been getting better lately. I mean, everyone has their faults, right? And yes, Alex is quite a three year old... haha, he cracks me up. Anyways, thank you for the lovely review, and I promise I'm going to get around to that chapter soon!!! Really!

Loved it. 
Very good ideas in here. The love potion for Malfoy is a brilliant idea. The bet between Kat and James even better. They are just like normal people you woldnt think this was a story. Doing a great job. Can't wait for chapter 9.

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Hi! I'm glad to see your review =] Haha, that's nice to hear - I'm so happy you're enjoying the story! Thanks for the lovely review, as always!!!

this chapter was funny with all the things James planned to do. i liked how James and Kat had a calm conversation before their argument and i wonder what is James going to do now. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Haha, I'm glad you found it amusing! It always makes me happy when I hear my readers like the humor =]

I'm writing the next chapter at the moment and should be able to submit it by next weekend at the latest! Thanks for the review, as always - I really appreciate you taking the time to leave comments!

An update! :D Great story!
Haha, I wonder what Rose is going to say/do when Malfoy falls in love with 'the ugliest girl in school'. I doubt she'll like that much :) 
Hopefully Kat will try out for the team anyway. They can't lose the House Cup again, can they? :P What makes her hate Jamer so much anyway? I hope we'll find out soon! She must've been pretty embarrassed that she had to ask James (of all people) to help her.
Hope you'll update soon! :D

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Thanks, I'm so happy you like the story so far! Haha, you'll have to wait and see what Rose does. But let me just say, she's not the only one who will be unhappy ;)

Ah, Kat... well, another mystery. You'll just have to keep reading, I suppose, to find out why she hates him so much, and if she'll try out or not. All these problems are rather interconnected actually...

Thanks so much for the lovely review - it makes me smile when I hear readers are enjoying my writing =]

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