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eeek! I was expecting James to be told, not for him to overhear things! But I suppose that's one way for it all to come out of the woodwork. I really hope that Jack is okay though, he seemed very sick, and I really want to know what's up with this potion and risk factors. Great chapter, with an amazing ending.

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OH, MY, GOSH! you're so amazing, wow, i never imagineed that would be how he would find out, really good though! two smniley faces this time! :) :) and one of shock :0!
100/10!

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I KNEW IT! YAY! I was rather hoping that Mara would find the guts to tell James, but this situation is perfectly fine as well. Poor Jack! My eyes are brimming with tears. Of all the characters in your story, I love Jack the most. The innocent little kid who just happens to be the root of Mara's problems.
BUT I'M NOT WISHING THAT HE NEVER EXISTED! It's just a fact is all. More than 10/10

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Oooh great chapter!
I've just spent the last 3 days reading this story. :)
Your writing style is amazing, really. It has just the right amount of humor to it. I love how James is hates hospitals. I don't like them much either. They can be depressing. Oh and James knows which is awesome :)
How long is this story going to be? Just wondering because I love ridiculously long stories as long as they are well-written and entertaining. 
---Anna---

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Three days? Are you crazy? I would have given up long ago, lol.  Regardless, I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much. The humour aspect is one of the many things I'm concerned about when writing, so it's nice to be reassured, haha.  

Ah, yes, hospitals. I loathe them for the very same reasons that James does, hence the reasoning behind his hatred for them. 

As far as length goes, I honestly can't give you a direct number, but I'm aiming for somewhere between 20 and 25 chapters total. I could do more, but I could also do less. It all depends, really, on how long it takes me to get stuff out. 

Anyway, thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it! :)

So, I have one thing to tell you:

Oh my god!

With all superficial thoughts put aside, I'd just like to say this story if freaking brilliant. Your writing? It's just. Wow. I've gotta say, you've characterized everyone brilliant. I'm just at a loss of words. I've read this story non-stop for the past hour, it's that amazing! Keep up the good work, seriously.

I sound like a four year old, but still. This is genius. 

- Kennedy.

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Wow, thank you so much for your compliments! It's always nice to hear that my stories are well-received by the public, lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Aw
you haven't updated yet :(
I can't wait for the next chapter, seriously 
I want to know what happens *gives you the puppy dog look*

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JAMES KNOWS.
JAMES.
KNOWS.

You are trying to kill me, aren't you?

Anyway, I am eventually here. With a review that shall be dreadful and incoherent and completely and utterly unhelpful.
Molly, as usual, you have written a completely wonderful chapter. 

I adore reading from James' POV - his claustrophobia was sooo sweet and adorable. If it hadn't been for the summary, I'd not have known that this was coming up. At all. I just want to cuddle him.
-cuddles-
All better ^_^

OH, and his feelings towards Jack that he doesn't realise are there. Oh it's all so wonderful. It's brilliant.

I cannot wait for chapter 15 -bounces in excitement-

A billion and forty-six out of 10
xxx

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I read this ages ago, but I forgot to review! 

Oh, my God! James knows! I cannot wait for the next chapter... when the argument starts - WHABANG! (I finally got to use that word!) But, you just ended it! Oh, my God, the suspense for the next chapter is killing me. Its going to be so good, knowing your writing. 

It was so nice that the Weasleys and Potters came to see little Jack. But, I felt so bad for James, he didn't go in because he felt he shouldn't, it was so sad. I love that you put this chapter in his point of view, it really shows how much James cares for Mara. I love them together. 

Anyways, oh my God, you need to update this. I love this story. From the beginning it was good and it just keeps getting better and better. And now everything that Mara was hiding is going to be revealed. I really want to know what happens next and what will happen with Sophie. Love triangles suck. Anyways, yeah, fantastic chapter. 

Amanda

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Aaah! Two courses of action: Extreme anticipation or fury. As you said not to get mad I will have to make do with sitting on the edge of my seat wringing my hands trying to figure out WHAT the next chapter is going to deal out. 
Ooo... I can't stand this!!! Please update! I give this chapter 10/10 but I'm tempted to change it to 0/10 just because it's so frustrating!!! Cliffhangers! Always!
Please, please, please, PLEASE update!!! What is going to happen?!

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FINALLY!

I'm new to the story, been reading it over the last few days and I'm so happy that James has finally found out. 


That being said, I'm dying for an update. 

(And I love it when it's from James POV)

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Oh. My. God. NO! But at the same time YEEES! He's finally finding out!
Update SOON!

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I already reviewed but update soon? 
Please? *pouts lip in adorable puppy dog way* Pwease? Oh and thanks for updating your committed story!

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CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

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Dun-dun-dun-dah! Wow, nice cliff-hanger.although i wont kill you just yet (i need those updates) :P

CAn't wait to find out what happens next!

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OMG!. ah
UPDATE! i need to know what happens!
nice chapter by the way though :)

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i hate you... 

that is the most unbelivible cliff hanger! why you know people are going to be sleepless untill you update again!! my god! well really good chapter... as always.

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Loved the cliffie. But you must update soon. The suspense is killing me.

-Danger

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ohmyyygooddd. sooo intense. 
i lovee this story.
i CANNOT WAIT UNTILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!
pleeeaassee post it soon!!
lovee lovee lovve it!
im soo happy james found out!
lovee it!
updatee assaap!

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Hmm, have I ever told you that I love this story?
I think I have  . . .  but I'll tell you again, anyway.
I LOVE IT!
I LOVE IT!
I LOVE IT!
I LOVE IT!
The James POV thing the day he finds out is INGENIUS!

Hint; I hate cliffys.

:(

BUT I LOVE THE STORY
AND YOU!
x

- Mr. Popo.

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Please update update UPDATE! This is a very annoying cliffhanger, please update soon, I love this story! :)

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I will!  I promise.  I'm sorry you found the cliffhanger at the end annoying, but did you really think I was going to make them get into it?  Nah, I decided to string it out.  Make the sting last a bit longer.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Wow
I have read all the fic in one go! That's how good it is! :)
Please, update soon! I can't wait to know how is James going to take the news!!

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Whoa, your corneas must be scarred by the first few chapters.  But it seems like you enjoy putting yourself through unnecessary torture, so I suppose I should be grateful.  Thank you for reading and reviewing, and spending a good portion of time reading this in one sitting.  If that's not impressive I don't know what is. :)

loved it, please update soon!!

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Thank you.  I'll update when I can! :)

Well done!  I missed Mara's point of view, only because she's such a wonderful character, but I think the story was more effective the way you staged it from James's perspective.
What an odd fellow he is - freaking about hospitals and claustrophobic in the lifts.  He proved himself a true friend to Mara.  The little premonitions he was having about his connection to Jack were pretty obvious, given that the readers know he's the father, but I thought it worked nonetheless.

Somewhat less humor, given that the whole chapter took place in the hospital before it's clear Jack is going to recover, but the bits that were there were still amusing.  Albus's comic relief was nice.  I'm a little surprised that Sophie hasn't barged in since James must have left the wine testing without speaking to her, but I suppose that confrontation may come later.  

And of course, the big reveal.  How classic that Mara didn't actually find the courage to tell him, but that he merely overheard.  I hope she doesn't try to back peddle now - James may be willfully clueless, but not that dense.  And if you wanted to make their discussion as uncomfortable as possible, you've set the scene well by placing the entire Potter and Weasley families right downstairs.  You may not want to go that way - but you have lots of options.   Is the baby's real name James, with Jack as a nickname?  The Jacks I know have John as their real name, but there are certainly lots of variations.

Can't wait for your next update - sparks should fly between James and Mara!

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Oh my god!  Please update as soon as possible.  I can't wait to see how James reacts to this news. 

Wonderfully addicting story, by the way. :)

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I'll updated when I can!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.  Also, I'm glad you like it enough to call it addicting! XD

sorry it took me so long to review this. i can't wait to see how are Mara and James going to talk now now that James knows that he's Jack's father. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Hey, don't worry about it.  At least you came back and reviewed!  Ah yes, I feel that I'm going to have to meet some fairly high expectations of the next chapter, so hopefully I don't disappoint. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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