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AHHHHHHHHHHH~ what a way to leave us hanging ... good thing the next chapters already up phew. Hmmmm i know no one likes fudge but still .... OH WELL!!!! we'll all get over it!!   Hmmm you know it never occured to me that dumbledore would say something like that but this story is written so well that You just accept it if you know what i mean Great chapter + that was a very good word pic of Azkaban way better than anything i gould do~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

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Yay... dumb Fudge.  Great Fic.

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Vey,very,very,very,very,very,very,very,very,etc. long!A bit interesting A bit boring

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Wow... this is an amazing story with a strong plot. The characters are just like they are in the real harry potter books, i forgot i was just reading fan fiction not a real book! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!

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Wow.  Awesome battle scene, great jobs with Fudge & Tonks.  Dumbledore was very in-character, too! And Fudge dead?!

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Sophie refered you to me about the spacing of your story... although i can't imagine why, I see nothing wrong without yours at all.  My main pet peeve is when people don't double space the paragraphs at all, just keep them right next to each other like in regular books. No matter how much we want it to, the internet doesn't read the same way as a book and it's just easier on the eyes if the paragraps are spaced out. So i don't know what Sophie's going on about, your spacings are fine. *shrugs* 

And I read someone else's review about who's goign to take over the Ministry when Fudge is gone... JK mentioned a new Minister of Magic in the new book and I'd never thoguht before about how that'd come about, but now that you've written it, i realize... the only way Fudge'll give it up is if he's dead. So I'd say that that part of your story was, once again, perfect. I anxiously await chapter 4!

<i>Author's Response: Yep, whenever I see a solid block of text I don't even bother.  It's not that I don't want to read it, it's simply that I can't... my eyes won't let me.<P>Yep, and you'll notice one of the adds on JKR's site in the rumours section (they rotate) is for the Quibbler - the "Wizarding World's Alternative Voice."  The add goes on to say that it's exclusive "FudgeForced to Flee!  Minister for Magic Chased from Office!"  So I'm not positive he will actually be killed, but I just wanted him gone so I wouldn't have to worry about writing him anymore... annoying little git to get inside the head of.</i>

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I know you've already heard this, but PERFECT characterization of Fudge! And I loved the line, "<i>For the first time he truly appreciated what Sirius had been forced to do for all those years. </i>" It just seemed to mean something, for some reason. Not being able to speak out... awful. But in the case of your story, wonderful. And I really appreciated the email update, otherwise I never would've checked!

<i>Author's Response: It was my pleasure to update you :)  You really know how to make an author feel good, you know?  Of course I'm certain you've recieved mountains of praise for your own stories from which to draw.  I may have to add to that mountain at some point in the near future.  Thanks for reading.</i>

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very intresting story

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wow!!! This is by far the best characterisation of Fudge i have ever read.... Many people leave him out entirely, or have him kissing up to harry, but this is a lot more realistic... perfect really. A great way to end with him, too. Now the question is, who will be the next minister? and HOW on earth did you make it so exciting when they're not even at hogwarts yet? well anyway, lovely story, ill be recommending it..  and YES i'm decided ill do stupid things. *winks* lol. About the spacing, there's no "proper" way to do it, but most of them are in fact with a new line for everything a person says. It makes it easier to read. Don't make it too choppy though- I'm not sure how to explain it, read Anamarie's and you'll see how it's perfectly done :)

<i>Author's Response: Believe it or not, in all of my time writing fanfic I have yet to actually allow Harry and his friends to return to the school.  Through the first 14 chapters of my first fic (Some 80000 words) They hadn't made it through the summer, so I'm actually kind of dreading them getting back.  i don't know if I'll be able to keep the momentum going.  As for Fudge being "perfect," I can't thank you enough.  I was really <i>really,</i> worried that I had gone a bit too far with him accusing Harry of bringing Voldemort back on purpose, but again my excellent pre-readers assured me that it was toeing the line but not over.  So I kept it in.  Thanks for reviewing Sophie, and I'll get back to finish your fic when I get a bit more time.</i>

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very good, looking forward to read more of this story. write on

<i>Author's Response: Looking forward to writing more of the story.  read on!</i>

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HA! Take that Fudge! Anyway that was a good chapter. I liked the fight scene, and Malfoy. I hate to say it but that was funny. Using the eye curse to make him blind, though right into the Dementors... thats cold. Anyway again, good job and update soon! 

<i>Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!  I'm always worried about bringing Lucius into a scene because the Malfoys have so many screaming fangirls that I'm afraid I'll offend one of them or something if I forget to mention that he's uber-suave or something :)  Thanks for reviewing :)</i>

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Is it safe for me to say that I absolutely despise Cornelius Fudge?  He aggravates me to NO END and I just want to scream at text and make him shut up.  But, of course, he is only a character...on paper and he isn't real but he sure is irritating.  Anyway, enough of my garbage about Fudge...You show a real talent at writing fanfictions and portraying Rowling's characters as perfectly as one who isn't Rowling can manage.  Fudge is still Fudge and Harry is Harry, some people throw their characters way out of proportion during stories sometimes but you haven't at all and it's really wonderful.  The plot is intriguing and you really have a way of capturing your reader's attention.  Especially with that last line of chapter three, "Cornelius Fudge is dead." Oh boy, I can't wait to see what happens next! (Not that I'm excited about Fudge dying...but he was a real prat.) I wonder who's going to take over the Ministry?

<i>Author's Response: Well there's an obvious choice for taking over at the ministry, but as I'm sure you've noticed I'm not much of one for doing the obvious thing so long as what it is I choose to do still makes sense.  I despise Fudge as well, I couldn't wait to kill him off so I wouldn't have to write him anymore.  I'm glad you think that Harry's still in character, he's the member of the trio that I usually have the most trouble with... in my first fic I made him a weepy little nancy-boy.  No, I'm not proud.  Thanks for the excellent review :)</i>

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one of the better fanfictions, if I do say so myself. I don't write, but I read, and this beats the crap they put out on the other sites that always involve those bloody septics filling up the halls of Hogwarts. Keep it up, please, if you know what's good for fanfiction keep it up!

<i>Author's Response: I certainly wouldn't call other stories crap, just... repetitive.  I got a bit sick of reading the same story over and over again so I decided to write the type of story that I knew I would enjoy reading.  So far, this is the result.  I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it, and hope you continue to do so.</i>

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