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It's frustrating that James is still with that girl! I mean, going on a date with her instead of helping Charism? Jut tragic. I hope you bring that other boy Nate back into this story, I really liked him. I wonder what Charisma did as a werewolf that makes Scorpius and James not want to tell her. My curiosity is booming, so I shall read on to figure it out!

WhatAboutRegulus

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James is a bit oblivious to people around him in this story, he likes Evie and can't see that Charisma is starting to have feelings for him. As for missing the moon, he does have a reason, it's explained a lot later on though, so I'm afraid that you'll have to wait :)
I'm pleased that you like Nate, I remember that at first a lot of people were weary, so I'm glad that you like him; he's a good guy!
Thank you for the review!

okay, talk about WOW moments:
james ditching chic on a full moon
scorpius being the only one deemed capable enough to handle "wolfy"
james' reaction to finding out that scorpius had been the one to look after her
the...<i>moment</i> they shared afterwards
and finally, drew and fred's fantastic comedic timing! XD

i am PSYCHED to see what happens next!

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Haha, thank you!
I'm glad that you're still enjoying it. This chapter was a bit like that wasn't it? :D
I thought that it wouldn't have been a true moment in their lives if it wasn't spoiled by Drew and Fred :D. I hope that you like the rest!

The more I read the more I love :D

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Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you're enjoying this! You're lovely!

You know this is the only finfic I've been able to find for months that I could actually stand? Oh! One thing. I'm pretty sure dood is spelled dude.

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Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! :D

What happens to her during the ful moon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! GR. I must find out!! Great Story! 10/10
P.S. You lied, it took 7 seconds.

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Thank you for the review! I'm so glad that you left me this! It's made my day to know that people are still reading this. (7 seconds - I shall correct that :P)
I hope you enjoy the rest!

Okay honestly, charisma should just go out with drew! I love his attitude and he is soo funny!!! He seems really cute and totally hawt and pretty dang amazin!!! James seems like a romance luvin attention hoggin mess if a person!!! He's too stupid to trust his best friends when they say that someone is mean so instead of just forgetting it and moving on, he has to go out with her!!! Charisma+drew=luv.  Charisma+james=baddd

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Thank you for the review. I'm glad that you are enjoying it so far - i hope :P :D
I do love Drew, and I did actually consider that, but you'll have to read on to find out what actually goes down. I hope that you enjoy the rest.

This is my favorite chapter so far. I've already read your story once, but it had been a while ago. I saw that you had added another chapter, so I thought I start at the beginning to refresh my memory. Still as good as I remember!

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Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad that you have enjoyed the story. I'm a very happy author that you decided to read it again. :)

I really want to know what she's like when she's all wolfy, because she clearly freaks out if she managed to cut herself and break furniture. I mean if even she doesn't know, then she must be rather scary. I thought it was sweet how James was mad that he hadn't been there that night, but I loved how it was Scorpius who watched her. He has always been one of my favorite characters!

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Thank you for the review. I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to get to this review. I'm not sure why it has, but I'm answering it now :P I hope that is okay. 

Yes, Charisma does go a little crazy doesn't she? You'll have to read on to find out what she does, or at least an idea of what she does. 
I hope that you enjoy the rest. Oh, and I love Scorpius too. He's so fun to write. :)

I really like Scorpius :) He's adorable.
And Drew cracks me up. He's every arrogant boy I've ever been friends with. 
And Evie is a certain word that starts with a "b" that I can't put in a review. Hopefully you catch my drift.
Very good.
8/10

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I'm glad that you like Scorpius, he's actually one of my favourites, I have a very special little spot for the lad. 
Drew is based on most of my male friends rolled in to one boy. I just love him. 
Evie is a meanie :P
Thanks for the review!

Omg. OMG. This is AWESOME! Dude, publish it! somehow!! I'm sorry, but i'm in LOVE! I love Charisma and i feel like kicking Evie really really hard... And scorpio + rose = awesome! :D keep writing! 
I LOOVE it

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Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad that you like the story that much! :D
Charisma is really fun to write, she kinda just writes herself. 
You love Scorpius and Rose? Hm. :P I will update soon.

I loathe evie, please keep her evil! I liked it veerry much :)

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Thanks for the review. She is totally evil, to the degree that it's funny. :P
I will update soon!

I LOVE IT! the characters are fantastic! and the weather here is sunny with a light breeze.

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Thanks for the review. I'm glad that the weather is treating you well. :P The fact that you like the characters has made me a very happy person.

In America we spell it "dude" not "dood". Maybe it's a british thing idk

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We can spell it either. I have always spelt it dood, but I guess that it can be either. Thanks for the review. :D

There are some grammatical errors, but those don't take away from the content of the story :) Charisma reminds me of Luna a lot. And I love James, even though he's a bit of a jerk sometimes :3

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Thanks so much for the review. James is really dim sometimes, but he is still a nice boy underneath that. But yes, at the moment, he is really being a jerk. :P
I am thinking of getting a beta, I have just found out how, so it shouldn't be too long. 
Happy Easter!

wow, really cool!
:)
keep being awesome!

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Thanks, I will try my best. Yay, I'm awesome. What a hoot! XD

I hope things work out for everyone, and James realizes what a bitch Evie is...

xoxo
~Marcia

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You'll have to wait and see if things all work out. I'm a bit of a meanie. XD

I really like this. I really want to know how Chic is during the full moon. Oh and dood is spelt dude.

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Coolio, thanks for the review - and the dood thing, I didn't know that. XD
I'm glad that you are enjoying the story.

So cute i can't get over it!
I want to know what happens when she's out of it... so funny if she was confessing undying love for James haha

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XD You never know. 
Thanks for the review. I hope you like the rest.

Hehehe scorp compared himself to a daisy. The weather is bad here, raining alot, although hardly ever rains so ... goood... you?
10/10

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Lol. I live in England - it's always raining. Today we had a little bit of thunder and lightening, I was sitting in Chemistry and literally jumped and grabbed on to my Chem partners arm - poor boy. He's probably mentally scared of me now. He did give me funny looks for the rest of the day. XD

i cant believe james could do that to Chic, he is being such a prat!

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He is a stupid prat, but what can we do? Thanks for the review. XD

I Love it. Just wondering, as i havent read the rest of it yet, Is Charisma by chance related to Luna?

Author Response

Good question, lol. It was origionally planned with Luna and Rolf as her parents, but I didn't want to write her parents in and Luna and Rold would want to be involved, and then she would have Lysander and Lorcan has her little brothers - I thought that would be a nice touch. But I also didn't particuarly want to fray away from JK Rowling's origional plans. So, no, she's not. But she nearly was. You're the only person who's ever asked that. Thanks for the review. XD

My oh my, I love that Scorpius doesn't think that Rose likes him. Stupid, stupid people in this world. Then again, I am slightly hypocritical... because I will never tell the guy I like that I like him. Sooo. Anyway. I wonder what she really is like during a full moon.. crazy man. But I do love that Scorpius did stay the night with her and I love Dixie just taking the lies cause she knew that Charisma wasn't ready to tell. And I really don't like Evie.. I hope she dies and James realizes that he needs Charisma as more than just a sister cause they are too perfect. Now, if Nate comes back into the pic.. I may be inclined to change my mind about thinks. Haha.

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Lol, Poor old Nate. XD
Thanks for the review. Oh I'm really happy that you like Scorp, he is rather blind isn't he. Someone should just give him a good slap and be like, 'hey, you're blind!'. He'd get the message sooner or later.

ooo I really like this story :)
I want to know what Wolfy gets up to on the full moon. I love how overprotective james is but he needs to get his priorities sorted and get rid of that evil girl!!!
Please update soon- can't wait to see what happens next :D
10/10

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Thank you so much for your review. Everybody seems to want to know what happens on the full moon. What do you think happens? Thanks for the 10/10. XD I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Evie really does need to be destroyed dosen't she?

I really love this story and this chapter just added to it. Keep up the good work

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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. XD

the name of this chapter reminds me of a short sireces ( spell it out! i can't spell today! lol! ) called wolf and spice i watched a few months ago. i love this story, and you know were're all wanting to know what charmisa really does when it's a full moon, so upgrade soon and maybe james will tell her! hehe, can't wait! oy, and plesze tell me she dosn't say things like she hates james or anything. what would be worse? that she loves him! oh, i think i'd just die! lol!

upgrade soon,

-Nickole.

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You want to know what she does on a full moon? I don't really know. The ending has been completly re-written to add it in. XD 
You'll just have to wait for it. 
Bless, Charisma, she's so 'different'. 
Thanks for the review.

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