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Chapter: Daddy Don't Cry | Story: Daddy Don't Cry

OH MY GOSH! no, i don't mistake you for JKR. but you know, you are like almost BETTER than her! Amazing! Just wish Neville's son had a better name. Other wise, perfect! Maybe if Neville's son's name was Lysander, or Alex, or Charlie.

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aww
that was so sweet
great story
loved it
=]

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O my god. That was brilliant. I am crying cause it was so good. There is nothing I would change about it.:)

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it was really really sweet.i

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This was really beautiful. Both the flashbacks and the real-time scenes were perfect, and great choice of song. I loved this. =)

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Ohmygosh :] This is the cutest story I've ever read. It made me cry!

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omg that was so good! the whole potter-weasley-lupin family tree is sooo confusing, i dont know how you figured it out! great job!!

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To be completely honest to keep all the members straight I printed out a copy of JK's Next Gen Weasly family tree and put all (my made up) birthdays for everyone on there.  I actually had to create a timeline for this story to keep the marriges and new babies together.  But apart from that I've kept them pretty straight.  Glad you liked it.
--Chris

you are just too good a writer. I mean it. It was perfect, every word, every moment and memory. I just felt ready to cry when I was reading this. Your writing is flawless. I loved reading Lily/Remus' story with the Quest for a Lily and I loved reading this little companion. Great job. I think it was perfect thing to write to go along with it. I loved the ending to this. It was great. :)

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Continued thank you for all the reviews.  It's really nice to have a fan of my work.  I felt this piece was some of my best writing to date, athough I'm sure it was hardly entirely flawless (I always come across a few typos after I've posted).  Btw I'm not actually finished with Quest for a Lily, just having writers block.  Thanks again,
--Chris

wow that was, like, amazing! it made me feel like crying ! :( 
10/10 totally!!!

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I'm sorry, but I gave out my last tissue to looneyleeleelovegood so you'll have to come up with your own.  Ecstatic that you liked the story.
--Chris

Okay... you wouldn't happen to have a kleenex or something would you? I'm a bit sniffly.

This was a lovely story, such a symbolic, and perfectly fitting song and it was written beautifully. Well Done!

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I always keep a tissue around for all ocasions, so here you go (I swear it's unused).  Like always I'm ecstatic to hear that someone likes my story.  I'll tell you my sister (my rather cynical beta) thought the song was cliche but I had to use it.
--Chris

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