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I've just started reading this but I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to read the rest! :)

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Aw, I love Charisma! She's just so nice. I think I'm starting to like this Nate guy, he doesn't seem so bad. Although James hates him, I think he is perfectly fine. I love how you made Charisma able to make Scorpius and Blaise go to their lesson, but not Nate. Show's something about her character. Reading on!

WhatAboutRegulus

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Thank you for the review! I'm pleased that you're still enjoying this!
Writing Charisma was always interesting, because I would write the nicest person that I could possibly manage, so much that it annoyed myself, and then I would go back through and make it realistic. It was definitely an interesting process. 
James is just a very hard man to please; he's a deep guy!
I'm glad that you noticed that, so far, I think you're the only one that's pointed it out to me at least, for liking it! :)
Thank you again for the review! I hope that you like the rest!

yay! nate harper...hmm...color me intrigued!
charisma really is verging on too nice, isn't she? i mean, she SERIOUSLY went after evie whatsherface! i wouldn't have. =/
but i really liked overprotective james. he was hilarious. i could just imagine him stomping around like hitler, muttering to himself, ROFL.
and i totally went all soft when charisma came back from hiding behind the tapestry, to find james waiting for her (even though, yeah, he was kinda asleep, hahaa). there was probably an "awww ..." moment as well, lol.
and i feel sorry for garry. he doesn't seem to be that bad, i really wanna know what scorpius and blaise did, hahahaha. i like charisma's interaction with the slytherins; sometimes her being so nice isn't such a bad thing.

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Nate Harper; I thought it was quite a name :D
It was difficult writing Charisma in times like these; there was no question that she would go after her; she was crying and no one deserves to cry, but I probably would have left her as well, if she had been as horrible to me as Evie had to Charisma. But that's just not quite her thing. 
There is a bit that Dixie says in one of the last chapters about Charisma's nice temperament and how it reflects on her friends. It was actually something I had added in later as I had read it in a review!
Writing overprotective James was fun :) and very easy actually. :P He just seemed like the type of character to do it, after all, Ginny Weasley is his mother. 
Scorpius was probably my favourite character in this story, along with some others that I rant and rave about all of the time :D But his relationship with Charisma is one I loved writing. :)

that ravenclaw guy seems really cute. :)
Evies a bitch

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Thank you for the review! 
I love Nate; he always was a pleasure to write!
Evie is just a big meanie.

ohmygoodgollygracious! this is amazing im so sorry i havent read further but ive been working on my story (its finally up!!) but i MUST! so good!
~Renee

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Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad that you're enjoying this so far. Your review has made me a very happy author. :) Oh and good luck with your story.

Nate is the perfect name for mister ravenclaw boy, well really only because I really like that name and his character. (Although I love all your boys, I wish they were mine and were sitting next to me right now). Anyways poor Gary will be awfully upset when he realizes he'll no longer be able to stalk his favorite chaser. And I was very proud of her for going after the evilest of girls. I fail to see how James could like her. xD

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I'm not sure why James likes her either, but then I realised why and put it in later :P

I'm glad that you like the name Nate, I love it. It's like my favourite name and I simply had to call him it! And the boys! I know what you mean, I wrote them too cool, I should have made them all geeky and snotty, cause I wanna be with them too!
Thanks for the review!

Hmm...well, I think Miss Charisma is too nice for her own good! Lol, I'd never be that nice to someone like Evie. But hey, its your OC.
I enjoyed this, yet again. But there are a lot of OCs to get straight and I'm having a little trouble.
7/10

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Miss Charisma needs to punch a wall or something :P
I wouldn't be like Charisma either, I wouldn't be mean or insulting, I would probably just ignore her. I couldn't stick to the girl. I just thought that it wouldn't fit Charisma's characterisation if she was anything but nice. 
Sorry about the amount of OC's, I did wonder while writing it if there would be too many. But I hope that it gets a little easier to understand soon!
Thank you for the review.

I'm really liking this :) James is such a great character. I Love him.

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Glad that you're loving James. He's a bad-boy-cutie. :P
Thanks for the review. 
Happy Easter!

hahahh, really funny! cant wait 2 read on! :)

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Danke. I hope that you enjoy it. XD

James is an idiot... otherwise... Good Job!

xoxo
~Marcia

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James should be tranquilised. :P Thanks for the review.

great story :) but was just wondering.. is evie not supposed to be in the year below? if soo how could she have said those things to charisma in charismas first year? ... maybe ive got it wrong. if i have sorry lol  but was just checking in case it was a mistake :) but still love your story..  i'm a late starter to this story so i have another 12 chapters to read.. i hope there all as good as the first four have been :) clare xoxo

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Thank you so much for the review. I'm so glad that you like this story. Whoops. That is a mistake actually. No one has noticed that before. I give you gold stars and cookies for noticing it. !! XD

i still absolutely love it, but so many people like her! hahah, its just a tad unrealistic but it doesn't really bother me so no need to worry :)
great chapter!

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Thank you so much for the review! Sorry about the unrealism thing, Charisma is actually based on a friend of mine and they are kind of incredibly similar, I guess the knowing everyone type of thing is quite rare. XD

Chic why are you so nice, i have a few things to say to the Bitch/slut/whore pardon my french. but i do love this story.

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Maybe you should run in to the story, batter around Lewis a little and then arrive back in time for dinner? I'd come help, thanks for the review. XD

I hate Evie!!! I love Dixie! .Evie is a b*tch >.> sorry for my language there is no excuse for it but, yeah, it's true.

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There is a total excuse for your language! Run around, chant it around your living room! I will join you! But in my own living room, I mean. Like, if I turned up in your living room one day it would be very creepy. XD
Thanks for the review. Oh, and I'm glad that you like Dixie! she dosen't get mentioned much in peoples reviews.

its getting Good..=]

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Thank you very much! I'm glad that you're liking it. XD

Oh, I love the name Nate. That is perfect for Charisma's 'Ravenclaw man.' Hehe. And way to go Scorpius and Blaise! Haha. Not sure what they did exactly but had to be good all the same. Um. So.. James and Evie? Really? I so don't understand Charisma.. then again I'm kind of like her in that respect. Even if some person hates me or I hate them if they're feeling down I can't just leave them like that. No matter what. It's kind of annoying. Otherwise, I'd just run the other way and avoid conflect with them. Bah. I seriously wonder what house I'd be in sometimes. Anywho.. I wonder what shall happen next!

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You'd so be in one of the nice houses - one that makes people happy, cause you've seriously put a perminent smile on my face today with these reviews! You're my saviour, I had double Trig today - I died. :(
Scorp and Blaize are pretty amazing in my opinion, I don't know what they did either, I couldn't think of anything good enough, so I thought that I would leave it up to your imagination. You can make it as horrible or as lovely as you would like too. XD

Oh let me guess, your name is actually Nathan Harper but you don’t like Nathan so you make everyone call you Nate.” I said smiling, but not boastful. I said it in a sweet way.


DUDE. YOU SAID SWEET AGAIN. Even if you veered off from your usual "I said sweetly, he said sweetly, she said sweetly"
It still has the same sentiment. Get rid of the "Sweet" references. They are awful!

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Ok. XD
I didn't realise that I used it that much. Sorry if it ruined your reading in any way. XD

ahh i love love love this story (: get the next bit up asap !

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Lol, will do. Thanks for the review. !!

this chapter is awesome and i liked how Charisma reacted to James telling her he asked Evie out. also i want to say that i found some mistakes.
1. Were always nice-ish to him
2. were the prefects

i hope i could help u and i can't wait to read the next chapter. will u update soon please?^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

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Will do, have i mentioned before how much your reviews rock? XD Made my day Harry and Ginny. XD

good! I hope there's going to be more!!! i likes this chic james thing, its sweet. Possibly think about them getting together?

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Thanks so much. Reviews make my day. Chic and James?? Getting together? What ever gave you that idea. lol. They might do ... or ... you might have to watch thier relationship go all twisty. XD

Beginning of summer for you.. School in two days for me! Ughh...

Anyways, I loveddd it... 

No Freddie, but thats ok. 

Anyways, awesome! And update soon!

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Two days?? Really?? What type of hell do you live in? 
Don't worry, freddie will appear again soon. I love him too. XD 
Thanks for the review.

great chapter!
james and charisma kinda remind me of ron and hermione, like the whole i dont know i like you but really do  but really do and everyone else can see it kinda thing. 
post again soon please?

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You're totally right. I didn't actually think about that. You're a genius! XD
Thanks for the review.

I really, really, like this story! I love Charisma! She's someone you automatically love just 'cause the way she is. 

Nate is a hottie. And so is James. But, James is being an arse right now so I'm going to stick with Nate at the moment. lol 

Poor Gary. I thought it was funny the way he kept following her.

AnYwAyS, great story! I love it so far! And I can't wait to read the next chapter! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! as soon as possible please! XD

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I will try to do that. XD. I'm glad you like Nate, I hoped people would. James dosen't mean to be an arse ... I don't think. I'm also happy that you mentioned Gary. Bless him. XD Thanks for the review.

It's a great chapter. Please update soon.

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Thanks, will do. XD

I LOVED IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

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I just updated. lol. Glad you like the story. Your CAPITAL LETTERS mean alot to me. XD

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