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She's sooo bitchy...it's hilarious. Amy is one of those girls I want to slap just because of the way they walk. 
Good job!;D

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Amy, you're not in the Mafia.

That was so funny! :)

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I'm so happy you liked it! :D

I really want her to kick amy to the curb and go back to being friends with al

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Haha, don't we all ;)
But Al's a bit of a bitch too, no? I'm so sorry for not replying,  I sort of gave up with writing but hopefully I'm back now :) xxx

gosh amy is so horrid! but i sorta like her, if you know what i mean? lol

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Ahaha, she is, isn't she?
And, don't worry, I totally get you - she's kinda like marmite ;)
xx

I know I've been a bad, bad reviewer, but I'm officially addicted to your story as of today. ADDICTED.

I keep staring at your name... and then back at the story... Skins? If so, another reason to love it. ADDICTED TO SKINS.

I LIKE CAPITALS.

I'll keep reading.

xE

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You're a wicked reviewer, don't lie! I'm so glad you like my story!
Haha, truth be told I'm a crazy Skins fan. But THEY STOLE MY NAME. I've had it since I was like 5 so I think I win :D But I do have a crazy skins obsession too, so you're not alone there :D
I LOVE CAPITALS :D
xx

+squee+ Go Rose! And Amy! Boo, Zoe! 10/10

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EE YAY! Wait... Go, Amy? 
Haha, okay then :D
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i looove it!!! zoe's so cute!

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Haha, I'm glad you like it! 
You'll probably feel kind of sorry for Zoe soon, then... :o xx

to be honest i dont know if i can keep reading this story. i love your writing and i want to hope that Rose will grow up and I  can continue on reading, but I couldn't even finish this chapter. and that makes me sad cuz i think your a brilliant writer, but i just dont think i can keep reading unless you reassure me that she stops being such a bitchy fake douch bag.  shes getting mildly better, but it just drives me insane and i really want to toss my computer out the window. i will try to finish this story later after i settle down.  Great job on your writing, though, considering i've never really HATED a character so much.  hopefully i will leave a comment at the end of chapter 7. 

claire   

p.s.- the 7 is because i love your writing but hate your main character...

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Don't worry, you're not the first person :]
But I'm happy you like my writing anyway! I just thought writing a bitchy main character was something new. And Rose does get better, but I wanted it to be gradually because otherwise it would be completely unbelieveable.
Hehe, thanks :] xx

The fic is very different but its great

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Thankyou so much! I'm so glad you like it.
Honestly, I was a little worried about how Rose would come off because she's so different from the ones I've read about xx

I dont like Rose much but she seemed nice before.The fic is great.

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Yeah, she's a bit of a bitch now. I'm glad you like it! xx

hah this is so funny the bit when amy's like 'She needs to go' love it :D 10/10

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Haha, isn't she a cool one? :]
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Rose is a very interesting story, but I can't help but feel frustrated at her when I'm reading. But nevertheless, nice chapter, nice story :) I love the humor, it made me laugh out loud.

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I'm so happy you like her/the story :]
Ha, I get annoyed with her when I'm writing, so no worries there.
Thankyou!! xx

I have to say that I love your stories. I've read <i>Vanilla Spice</i> and <i>Love, Lies and Lipstick</i> I think they're really great! You must have one hell of an imagination and your style of writing is fantastic! Thank you so much. =]

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Thankyou so much! I'm so happy you like them :D
Aha, you're making me blush. Such high praise :] Thankyou! 
xx

I LOVE THIS STORY
pleasee update soon. 
i think rose is like lindsay lohan in mean girls...she's really a nice person but she's just with the wrong crowd. and i lovee the interaction between her and albus. like there's hurt and regret but they still care about each other i think...
i also like the interaction between rose and scorpious...and i can't wait to see what happens next.thanks :)

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Thankyou so much!
I never really thought about it, but I guess Rose is kind of like Lindsay Lohan in Mean Girls with the whole wrong crowd. But don't worry, Amy's not going to be turning nice anytime soon...
The next chapter is going to have lots more Albus and Rose interaction so I'm glad you like it. A little Scorpius/Rose too :]
xx

amazinng story so far. I love rose and I love amy even though they're bitchesss. i cant wait until the next chappie!! :)

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Thankyou so much! I'll update as soon as I can. Which probably won't be that soon seeing as I'm off to France... (sorry :[ ) xx

Hey! my favourite pairing is Amy/Louis! and yeah, Rose is alright. i just can't stand Hugo. heh. XD. pls update soon!

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Hellooo :]
Haha, somebody actually likes the Amy/Louis! That's a first ;]
Hugo's nearly almost based on my little brother so THANKYOU! Everybody who meets him thinks he's adorable and I'm just like; go die.
I'll update as soon as I can! xx

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE? Been waiting forever.
Love, love this story- funny.
10/10

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I'm so sorry! It's the summer holidays so I'm either being carted off to summer camp or been holidaying with my friend in Italy and neither have internet access :[
And then my computer broke... xxx

I hate hate hate hate Amy!
Seriously, she needs to leave.

I like Rose. I like how she hates what she's become yet at the same time wont give it up. I think she's very realistic in that way.

Scorpius with a gf? But Zoe seems sweet :)
10/10 update soon!

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Ew, I know. Like she should go fall in a hole somewhere and just never come out :]
I'm glad you think that Rose is realistic. There are too many stories out there where the teenager is completely perfect or completely unperfect.
I'll update as soon asI can! xx

I really like your story. I hate Amy because of personality, but we all knew girls like that in high school. I had an Amy running in my circle. But I do like Rose, I just hate the fact that she is a follower. Please please please give her some balls to stand up to amy and make up with her cousin. It sucks when family doesn't get along. And Scorpius could be a lil less of an ass himself. 2 wrongs don't make a right. Anywho, love the story so update soon okay!

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I'm glad you like it! I also know an Amy person quite well - in fact, we used to be friends in my primary school - and she pretty much pisses me off now. 
Haha, Rose is going to get progressively better, don't worry :]
And Scorpius's father is Draco, you couldn't really expect much more :P xx

I do believe I am the one hundreth reviewer :) anyway this story is coming along very well, I can't wait for more! Pleas update soon ;)

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I think you're right :D
Thankyou! As soon as my computer is working again, I'll begin writing the next chapters (of all my storys) xx

Firstly, can I say, BRILLIANT STORY! Secondly, BRILLIANT ROSE! And thirdly, I REALLY want you to update, so would you oblige me? Please?? *Patheticness*
I have an idea for you: So, you know how Rose is meant to be all intelligent and that? Well, she should totally show up Scorp in all of their classes together ( which would be all of them, of course, *tries not to look cliche*) by a few marks every time - just enough to get him riled up for nothing. And then sparks and coughsexualtensioncough will fly!
But whatever, hey? Your story, your plotline. I can't wait to read what you come up with next!!
xx

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Haha, I just want to say your review made me laugh :D
But THANKYOU! I would actually be writing the next chapter now but my computer is currently broken and I'm being pretty pathetic and using my dad's laptop :] And to top it all off, I'm going to a summer camp in france for the next 2 weeks.
Rose would obviously show Scorpius up, wouldn't she? I mean, her mum is Hermione and his dad is Malfoy... Need I say more?
Ooh, we all love a bit of sexual tension :]
And I'm so glad you like it! Xx

Great chapter !
I think Rose is uh, slightly dramatic. Ha ha, I don't understand why people fawn over her.
Otherwise, she's not that bad.

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Thankyou! Rose is a complete over-reactor :]
And people fawn over her mainly because she's famous by assosciation and she's best friends with Amy. But apart from that I'm glad you like her :D xx

this came up as updated but it wasn't :(

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Ah, I'm sorry! What it was what I did was re-write all the chapters so that it included more description and the like :]
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Sorry, but I still hate her. She's getting better, though, and that's good. I just keep reading all these times when she COULD have just ditched Amy and actually gained some normal friends, but she doesn't. I really feel like smacking her. Hard. I do like Zoe, however. She's cute, even though she would likely get on my nerves if I were around her too much. Lots of sweetness = not great for me. Whatever, this is developing nicely. Good work! Please update!

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Haha, no worries :]
I actually put those little moments in there to show how much of an annoying bint/follower Rose can be and when people say they don't feel like smacking her I would be surprised. Because I would totally smack her too.
Oh, God, I know what you mean about too much sweetness. I'm like Rose on those things, I would probably end up hitting her too. :]
Thankyou! xx

lol, rose on emotional potion was so funny! hugo should give it to her more often. haha. and omg amy is such a bitch/slut! cheeting on louis especially since hes so nice when he was giving rose that hug to cheer her up and stuff. and lol! scorpiuses girlfriend! i love how rose has this automatic hate towards her! was hilarious! but i feel sorry for the girl now that amy spread that rumour. and as for your authors note i actually really like rose! lol, im not sure if thats a good or a bad thing!
oh no ive ran out of chapters to read! lol. update soon! 10/10

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I'm so glad you liked it! Gah, the character of Amy would really annoy me if I knew her but she's practically the villain of the story :P
Thankyou!! xx

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